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YESSSSSSS !!!!! He did it !!! I couldn't wait to have Shawn back.And it's gonna be alright, yes ? it has to be...

I finish chapter 41 and I realized there wasn't anymore chapters up to read so please update soon cause I love this story. :D

I love the comparison of Skipping Brunette to Uri, Prince Crimson to Rane and Wolf Black to Shawn. I must say I'm highly suspicious of their mother though. I don't think they are really brothers.I think their mother cheated but was afraid to their father that one of them is not his child. But that does not necessarily mean that she was a bad person though. Nice story though.

This story is just amazing. It had me so engrossed from the very beginning to the current chapter. I haven't read all that many stories from this site, but I have to say this is one of the best I've read thus far! I'm looking forward to reading more. No...borderline FIENDING for more is more like it ;)

yay for things getting better!
ASOTA

Im really loving this fic, cant wait for an update xx

It took me five days, FIVE DAYS, to go through this story. I love it to pieces. It is also breaking my heart T-T I'm so glad this last chapter ended in a little form of happiness T-T Great story.

:D I'm glad to see the story isn't abandoned. Even if slow you are still on it. Just that is already great news.
On top of that getting a chapter is WONDERFULL!!
And what a great chapter. I'm worried about them and how it'll end. I keep faith in a happy ending with them together. But at this point anything can happen. It'll would be a good ending if they just go back to being a familly. But I want it all. XDDD
1st I was disappointed because he didn bought the cactus. :) But then I was happy because Shawn helped him and then he did bought a cactus and, on top of that, it brought unexpected good results... then I found an evil evil cliffhanger. XDDDD nah, not really a cliffhanger. At this point anything tastes like one to me because I want more.
Keep the good work! Even if slowly, little progress is more than nothing and you know weĺl be here waiting.

BTW, I would welcome, once the main story is over, the last chapters from Shawns POV. I'm a sucker for angst and I really would like to know what was going on with Shawn, why the almost-rape and then his reactions to Uri's SMSs, sickness and cactus. Well, actually, I would welcome the whole story of Shawn but that'a a bit too much to ask for. But, well, in case you feel like it and if it's not already going into "Not supposed to". Just so you know, Shawn's story from his POV would be very welcome.

BTW, my current theory:
Shawn's mother was raped, got pregnant, and then commited suicide. Shawn is involuntarily resentfull to his mother. Even if he knows that's not fair to her, he can't help it. And he's confused and a mess and his love for Uri and then the actual relationship with Uri messes him up even more because it makes him happy but also provokes contradictory fillings. And then he does the "right" thing, which is leaving home. But that disquiets him even more... in the end he looses control he atacks Uri, he can't deal with it, he wants, above all, protect Uri and from the bottom of his dark pool getting himself out of the way looks like a good idea. Then he survives and it's not such a good idea. But he still wants his Uri safe and he's even more confused and... well... exile doesn't looks so bad. Except that that little dear pest named Uri won't allow him to disapear and insists on contacting him and then he needs him and then he gets a goddamn cactus... And what can he do? He's just a guy...
:p that's my current version. Probably wrong or at least partly wrong. But there it is. :p

I read the whole thing in two days--the story just sucked me in! Really looking forward to more. =)