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OML, NOOOO! Break up with rain and go with shawn!!! Please let Uri and shawn be together!!!! Good job with the story tho...=D . Anyway, cant wait for the next one!!! Go Shawn!!!

OML, NOOOO! Break up with rane and go with shawn!!! Please let Uri and shawn be together!!!! Good job with the story tho...=D . Anyway, cant wait for the next one!!! Go Shawn!!!

omg! stop with the cliffies!! one day???that is going to be amazing! i loved this chappie and by extension i love you! please update soon! oh i also read the scary movie thing, it was hilarious and amazing as well.
KEL

sqwee!!!
that scene in the cafeteria was just perfect! I cannot believe Uri can be so "out" and acting so confortable with this. I know he thinks he's not very comfy with displaying affection, but he does it just fine!
And the trick with switching teams--a very refreshing element to the story

I just hope the next update is not going to let us wait too long :)

I'm going to be the lonely one over in the corner waving the 'Uri ends up with Rane' flag. Anyone want to join me? Very nice chapter. So Rane wants to give Uri a hand job? I'll be waiting for that one. And its amazing what one 'out' jock can do for tolerance at a school.

Its starting to dawn on me that Shaun has it a lot worse than Uri, as far as crush on brother thing goes. At least Uri has some other prospects, but then again we don't know whats going on at Shaun's school.

Shaun jealous? Could Shaun have been the one to slash Rane's tires? hmmmmmm...

Okay, down to the reviewing.

I was sure that when Uri would go to the jock table the meeting of Rane's friends would be interesting. Are they all pervy, because they came off as being like that! x3 I'm liking them, though; they were very amusing. I was glad to see that Rane was being playful as well. I'm beginning to think that his motive for this deal with Uri is having more to it than just getting a certain girl off his back. It seems almost as if he's starting to really like Uri as more than a pretend boyfriend and more than just a friend. If that's true, then him meeting the family shall be something to look forward to.

I'm so glad that you put more of Uri and Shawn's parents. It was starting to feel as if they were never there except for dinner and then they'd disappear. The tradition with the soccer games was awesome. x3 Shawn's just so brilliant!

I'm really looking forward to Uri being Shawn's for the day. My mind is working over time trying to imagine just what's going to happen on that "one day". GAH, the suspence! XD

I'm actually developing a Zemyx fetish right now... xD Anyway, thank you! I'll definitely go check out those links and tell you what I think. ;3

Love ya teeta!
~Endless

Heh!!! I loooooooooove the family interaction, it was a very warm and fuzzy chappie, as I told you already :D I think these intermissions are needed, the characters recover their normal warmness and real touch... and If I am not making any sense... well, that's how I am usually hahaha

I'm hoping everyone reviews your story, and you get like 200 reviews to answer to. muaha!

HUGS

Laaerie

It is me again. Yay, you updated. I'm so happy!

I was all ready for something more to happen at the beggining, after the cliff hanger, but evil you left it at innocent.

I really liked 'lunch with Rane and pals' and I was in stitches, nearly waking the house up with my laughter. Poor Uri!
I got to the end and find that you have done it again. Blasted cliffhanger ending. I bet you do a maniac laugh when you finish a chapter. Darn you!

Anyway, chapter was brill and I'm looking forward to the next one.

Luv Rie

xx

OMG !!! 'Operation seduction' the beginning ! Poor Uri... He's going to be sick again

thanks for finally updating!!=D you really made me happy with this chapter. i can't wait to see what happens next! and your right about me not wanting to miss the most important part but sometimes i do want to strangle you for teasing me so much!:)