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AHHHHH~~~~ NEED MORE~~~!
This is one of the cutest stories I've read on here and I love it~~~~
I'm totally addicted now^^ *HUGS*
I hope Shawn ravishes him soon lol~~~ and I can't help but think Rane is evil (or at least planning something evil:)
Good Job and keep going~~~~~~~ plz

Yes, it’s me again. I just wanted to say that if Uri is going to give away his darkest secrets to Rane he shouldn’t sell it for a handjob. That would be way too cheap. ^^


How about this:

At Rane’s place. (Uri’s not grounded anymore)

Rane: What are you thinking about?
Uri: Nothing.
Rane: *Shaking his head semi-seriously* You’re such a mystery Uri. So, did you consider my offer? I give you a handjob for your some of your secrets?
Uri: *blushes* I’ve… considered it…
Rane: “Really?” *grin* So… how about it then?
Uri: No… I’m sorry. I…
Rane: What?
Uri: …Not for a handjob. *playful smile*
Rane: *Raise eyebrow. Most wicked smile ever.* How about… a blowjob…?
Uri: *Gasp* Sounds nice…* Head red as tomato*

(Insert smut) Rane sucks Uri’s cock tralala. You make it as dirty as you like because you’re the author. You can even end it with a dirty snowball cumswap. (Sorry, I will attempt to slap the dirtiness out of my brain now.) And then the conversation goes on like this:

Rane: *nibbling Uri’s ear* “So how did you like that, love?”
Uri: *still trembling for the experience* That was … amazing.
Rane: Thanks, I was hoping you’d return the favour to me someday.
Uri: *blushes* I…
Rane: That’s ok. I don’t want to put you under pressure. But tell me Uri… What’s your darkest secret?You promised you’d tell me after this.
Uri: *Gulp*
Rane: Come on, spill it. You promised.
Uri: I’m… attracted to Shawn… *look away*
Rane: *perplexed and going pale* Shawn, as in… your brother?
Uri: *Nod* Yes.
Rane: That’s so… not funny! What about us?
Uri: I’m… Look it’s not as if Shawn… would ever want me for real I mean we’re fami-
Rane: But I’m second choice, aren’t I.
Uri: *with tears in his eyes* I’m so sorry. I really like you…
Rane: *disappointed sigh¨* I can’t believe I just… sucked your –
Uri: I’m sorry Rane, I’m so sorry. Please forgive me.
*kiss kiss smother Smother kiss kiss*
Uri: *gasping* I want to hear your darkest secret too…
Rane: *also panting heavily, but smiling* Are you willing to pay the price?
Uri: *nod*

Tralala (insert smut)

Uri: So, what is it? Tell me your biggest, darkest secret.
Rane: Well….

(insert answer: and I leave you multiple choice

a) Shawn hired me to check out if you were gay, and interested in him
b) I had kinky wild monkey sex with Kyle and videotaped it and I blackmail him by threatening to give the tape to his dad
c) I love you Uri! I love you so much it hurts. Please, be mine forever.
d) I had sex with Kyle’s mother and videotaped it. I blackmail Kyle by threatening I show the tape to his dad
e) I don’t know Uri. Only teeta knows. If only she would allow me to say it to you, I would…


How about that? ^^

Haha, I got heaps of work to do but all I can think ofis what Rane’s biggest secret would be, lol.

f) I bought us an island where we can spend the rest of our lives smexing under the sun.
g) I’m secretly videotaped this room, and if you ever break up with me, I send the tape to your brother and your parents, so they can watch how we sucked each other’s cock.
h) *sings* I like bukakke! I like bukakke! I’m a funky spunky junkie for your love.
i) My name is Jimmy and I just got married to Yblue. << >>

…. Sorry, I’ll stop now

0.0 Jeez Rane - Uri's getting a little more than he asked for, hm? Next Rane will be saying "Uri, I think we should have sex .. you know, people can just tell when a couple's not sexually active and we don't want to blow our cover" xDDD Hahaha, manipulative punk.

And wooo-hoo! Shawn definitely has something in store for Uri .. I can't wait! And I can't guess either you meanie! Though I'll know it when it happens I'm sure. I can't believe I was the first reviewer too :D Me special.

Chapter 23 - Oh yes. It was VERY, VERY, VERRRRY satisfying. I love Rane to death. If there was no Shawn I'd be rooting for Rane. If, god forbid, Shawn gets into like... an accident or gets shipped off to an abandoned island or something. And why does his Mom and Dad want to meet Rane? Do they suspect that he IS gay? 'Cause I'm convinced that they know Shawn is gay. CONVINCED. Anyways, I loved the length of this chappy and I can't wait 'till the next one comes out. A day with Uri. Hmm...so many naughty ideas. That can't happen yet! Damn. Maybe an accidental kiss? Or an accidental hand job? Pretty please?

THANK GOD YOU UPDATED! I was deprived, teeta, I was deprived!

But, in all seriousness, I missed your story so much. I know you say your muse is a strange one, but... Wahhh! I missed Uri so much! And Shawn! SO, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS CHAPTER! I was going mad without it. T_T

I loved how it ended, and the whole scene at the jocks' lunch table. That was cute. What does Shawn have planned for our little Uri... and does his mom know that Uri is gay? I DON'T KNOW! Can we know please... please?!

Update uber-soon, please, whenever you can. ^^

Love,

LJ

(Oh, and my cat is fine. ^^)

screams! one day!
whoooooooppppppeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

*claps* aww i love shawn, hes so evil. and i cannot WAIT! ooh shawn owning uri for a day... nice.
i liked the tartar sauce thing, i laughed, and got odd looks..... anyway, i'll forgive you for the looong wait if you update really really soon. like... now. :P
urgh, i just love this story, its my favourite.
anyway, great chapter. and yeah, more important things, though im still realing a little from last chapter! woot!

i just cant decide if i like rane or not. but the brinign him home to meet the parents (lol and inevidably shaawn again WOOT) should be fun!
cheers

ah now I get to review, damn that downtime. Loved the chapter as usual, I really lost mysellf in it and saw everything so vividly in my mind. Shawn and Uri walking in the rain, then Uri being at school and with Rane, and their family moment at home! Very well written :)

'jocks are people too' Lol that scene was funny, poor little Uri blushing and getting all embarrased. Rane's so cool. You gotta love him.

oooh and next chapter, will be brilliant...hm... slave? *grins*

I can't also wait for the part where Rane comes to dinner and will Uri's parents find out that Uri's gay...?

I love this story a lot *huggles*

-C-

Phew!!!! I couldn't find my review response the first time through. I was gonna cry a little bit and try and make you feel terrible, but I FOUND IT!!!!!! How could I ever doubt your abilities to respond to my reviews *is ashamed*. Anywho, I LOVE this chapter of course. However, the smut was a noshow *pouts*. BUT I did get Not Supposed To: Scary Movies!!!!! In fact, I just realized that I forgot to review it, so now I feel like a bad fan. I'M SORRY!!!!! I FORGET SOMETIMES OK?!!!!! DON'T HATE ME!!!! I COULDN'T STAND IT!!!!! CAPS LOCK IS MY JESUS!!!!! Ok, that's quite enough of that. I will say that Scary Movies does kinda have a spoiler. I didn't know if you were gonna go the 'harsh reality' route and have Uri NOT end up with Shawn. B/c ya know, in the 'real world' that probably what would happen, but I am VERY glad you aren't going that route, although I do love Rane. There are so many men! IT'S SO CONFUSING!!!!! CAPS LOCK AGAIN!!!!! Ok, this review is a bit longer than most of the ones I write. Does this mean I get a longer response?!?!?!?!?!?!?! It WOULD make it easier to find!!!! Heh, ok ok ok, back to the fic! I LOOOOOOVE it!!!!!!!!!! Your stories make me happy in my pants (hmmm that sounds. . .pervy. I don't think I'm gonna delete that part. I'll just add this little part in parentheses here. I don't know if I spelt parentheses wrong. Probably.) I can't WAIT for more!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!! AGAIN WITH THE CAPS LOCK!!!!!