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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah. How smart and observant is their lovely mother, exactly? Hmm?
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uri's denseness is totally creeping me out. The boy's obviously retarded. lol. I still love him, though! Shawn's a rather dirty boy... I like! Although it would've been cool if Rane actually took Uri's virginity... I have no idea why. I think I just like drama. Anyways I love this story! Update soooooon.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ONE DAY!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter!! This one made me laugh a lot... thank you!
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!^_^ Maybe Rane really does like Uri; I've gotten that vibe from him since the whole 'boyfriend' thing started.... And Shawn wants ONE DAY? To do what, might I ask? Seriously- so MANY CLIFFHANGERS! XD Awesome chapter but I really wanted to see more with Shawn... But I want to see more with Rane, too! I'm so conflicted! XD As for your smut scenes- they were really good, and you should be WAY more confident about it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Your Adoring Fan,
Dee
(Sorry this review is so short; I have a huge essay to write in, like, a minuscule amount of time. Damn my procrastinating ways! >_<)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Your Adoring Fan,
Dee
(Sorry this review is so short; I have a huge essay to write in, like, a minuscule amount of time. Damn my procrastinating ways! >_<)
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
D'awww, have I told you how much I ADORE Shawn? Because I do.
I was halfway expecting Shawn to crawl into the same bunk with him, but that wouldn't have made a whole lot of sense at this point in the story... unfortunately. XD
You have NO idea how hard I laughed when I realized Shawn was being dirty-minded, watching Uri eat sausages with Tartar sauce. I'm surprised no one came in here to see if I'd gone insane.
Yay! Dan and Uri made up! I'm glad. But oh, what's this? Were my initial instincts about Dan correct? I had thought he liked Uri, until Nancy came along, but now Rane seems to suspect the same. I'm curious. Oh, love Uri's ID by the way. Rane's right, it is cute. (Sorry Uri.)
The lunch scene was quite amusing. Rane oddly reminds me of my ex (don't worry, I mean that in a good way). Poor, poor Uri, he was so embarrassed!
I giggled like mad when Uri discovered he'd been scribbling Shawn's name in his notebook. And I love the parallel of Shawn walking him to the bus on the way to school and Rane walking with him on the way home.
It was nice to see "Uri and family time". Uri is such a little housewife sometimes, making everyone coffee... Heh. Wan-tan-hor manages to sound gross and yummy all at once. Uri's "game" is hilarious, and Shawn feeding Uri... soooooooo cute. And that MAJOR cliffhanger you left us off with... jeez, Teeta, you are trying to kill us with suspense, aren't you?
I was halfway expecting Shawn to crawl into the same bunk with him, but that wouldn't have made a whole lot of sense at this point in the story... unfortunately. XD
You have NO idea how hard I laughed when I realized Shawn was being dirty-minded, watching Uri eat sausages with Tartar sauce. I'm surprised no one came in here to see if I'd gone insane.
Yay! Dan and Uri made up! I'm glad. But oh, what's this? Were my initial instincts about Dan correct? I had thought he liked Uri, until Nancy came along, but now Rane seems to suspect the same. I'm curious. Oh, love Uri's ID by the way. Rane's right, it is cute. (Sorry Uri.)
The lunch scene was quite amusing. Rane oddly reminds me of my ex (don't worry, I mean that in a good way). Poor, poor Uri, he was so embarrassed!
I giggled like mad when Uri discovered he'd been scribbling Shawn's name in his notebook. And I love the parallel of Shawn walking him to the bus on the way to school and Rane walking with him on the way home.
It was nice to see "Uri and family time". Uri is such a little housewife sometimes, making everyone coffee... Heh. Wan-tan-hor manages to sound gross and yummy all at once. Uri's "game" is hilarious, and Shawn feeding Uri... soooooooo cute. And that MAJOR cliffhanger you left us off with... jeez, Teeta, you are trying to kill us with suspense, aren't you?
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to mention... When Rane said that someone took a knife to his Beast's tires... I totally pictured Shawn slashing Rane's tires and muttering something about brother-stealing pretty-boys. But maaaaybe that's just me. ^^
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Glad to see an update! Uri is impossibly dense... I swear. Anyways, Rane is very confusing to me... I don't really get him. I think he's just doing this because he wants to raid Uri's panties! Well... boxers... whatever. This story's amazing. Keep going!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg.... he said he told his brother he wanted him for one day!!!! pleasssssssssssssssse update this!!!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This update was awesome! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, u made it pretty aparent that the family (except Uri) knows Shawn is gay. -i'm thinking of that scene at the grandparents' house when Uri tried to distract everyone by bringing up Shawn's "girlfriend" & awkward silence followed.
i LOVE the parallels Uri is finally picking up on btwn Shawn & Rane (the waving thing). very nice. ^_^
i also love that we're starting to see the coniving, deflowering pervert side of Rane. i can definitely see now that he's using & manipulating the younger, innocent Uri. same type of predator as Kyle, just a different, more patient hunting technique.
i hope Uri gets to talk to his friends soon & i can't wait to see if Rane will behave at dinner with the "in-laws". *snickering evilly*
i also can't help but wonder what happened to Shawn's painting project. ^_~
& i can't wait to see how Shawn words this birthday request. ^_^ there's no WAY Uri could go into it with his eyes open -there has to be SOME margin of denial there until the last moment, right? lol. ^_^
i LOVE the parallels Uri is finally picking up on btwn Shawn & Rane (the waving thing). very nice. ^_^
i also love that we're starting to see the coniving, deflowering pervert side of Rane. i can definitely see now that he's using & manipulating the younger, innocent Uri. same type of predator as Kyle, just a different, more patient hunting technique.
i hope Uri gets to talk to his friends soon & i can't wait to see if Rane will behave at dinner with the "in-laws". *snickering evilly*
i also can't help but wonder what happened to Shawn's painting project. ^_~
& i can't wait to see how Shawn words this birthday request. ^_^ there's no WAY Uri could go into it with his eyes open -there has to be SOME margin of denial there until the last moment, right? lol. ^_^