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Heiho,

whatever "Panzer Battalion" you were listening to while writing this chapter - keep hearing that music. Though it does puzzle me a little that there girls (or at least one) who can write real good humorous and ambiguous storys while listening to the rattling of tank chains and the drone of artillery bombardement :D

I like this chapter especially because it has a decent (means very low) amount of angst but lot of humor and some unresolved sexual tension (which I hope there is some relief soon ;-)) paired with entertaining progress of the story! Is it just me or does Shawn likes Uri in some... "traditional" poses... such as bike washing, cooking (in former chapters), cleaning... And Uri really is dense - but perhaps it is just that I am too perverted to suspect after every action some kind of courting... *shrugs* Nothing I can (and want) do about that... And that this story is located in the slash category and is labelled as incest kinda gives me some sort of hint to what to expect but I suppose Uri and Shawn never read this warning ;)

Anyway, keep writing! Keep us wanting more!
Nathaniel

p.s.: If you see Camui: Kick his lazy ass! He has a story to continue ;D

Chapter 24 - Oh my goodness. Why does Shawn have so many condoms? Does he have a condom fetish or something? But oh my god! His responses were so hilarious! Way too funny. Once again, I would have died if I was drinking something. It's also kinda weird because I was making condom jokes earlier with a friend of mine. I just forgot what I said. OH! She said that the US is naughtier than the UK (She's from the UK) and I said that glow in the dark condoms are cheaper in the UK so it evens out. But seriously, I love Shawn. To death. The sponge and running water comment sent me in a fit of giggles for five mintues. Shawn should tease Uri to death by telling him one of his wet dreams. AND YOU! Leading my suspicious about their parents knowing about Shawn! AGAIN. The silentness when Uri said that Shawn's 18 and he hasn't seen a girl around. I swear that they know! They have to. I'm 100 percent sure that they know. Well...maybe 99 percent. Maybe they just don't like talking about Shawn and sex. For some reason. But still, back to the condoms, why does he have a full box of condoms, hmm? Is he planning to use them all on Uri? OR does he have them still from a previous MALE boyfriend/fling thing? And why was the condom just lying around out in the open? Did he bring someone over? Because Shawn knows that he can't use a condom on Uri YET so what's up? Hmm. So many questions... I can't wait for the next chapter!

LOL what a cute chapter, Shawn surely is one to take advantage of his situation... But I wish they would find out that they like each other already!

I remember I remember!!!! I remembered when I was reading ^^ Yay!! Shawn owns your ass Uri! xD And the condom thing had me giggling (I printed the chap out this morning so I could take it to school and read)when I was supposedly reading stuff for history. I swear my face was going red from trying to hold in laughter. I do wonder though, who Shawn's smexing - Even though he is quite cunning, I'm not so sure if he's crafty enough to do the whole condom thing as a set up. And where are they going?! Who knows? Besides you >.> Thanks for updating so fast! Much love!

that was halarious!=D i can't wait till shawn finally get to use his LARGE condum

and as long as you keep updating, i'll keep the ropes in the closet:)
for now anyway

Can't wait for the next chapter !! This one was very funny !!
Uri, open your eyes ! Straight guy doesn't have gay video !

*laughts* I've passed all chapter waiting for Shawn to request something like "put this clothes" *hands painted-on-pants and micro t-shirt* or... "put off your tshirt to clean the bike! You'll get it dirty... and it's an order". XDDDD And some other evil things. ^^ But he's behaving quite well... for now.

can we please get to somethng interesting or at least halfway imbarressing?>

(I love kittens. They are God's gift to man. ;D)

I LOVED this chapter. And I love the whole jelly bracelet thing. I hate them, myself, but they just go so well with the chapter. Oh, and the whole condoms bit was effing hilarious. Oh, and thanks for the naughty link on youtube! *drools*

Do update soon, PLEASE!

Love,

LJ