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okay, that was way too much of a tease. i think we deserve a chapter of smut involving bath sponges and running water. like right now. but seriously that was good and i wouldn't protest another oneshot like scary movies involving shawn's recently revealed fetishes *hint*hint*. besides that, uri would probably look adorable in the bathtub. and on an entirely different note, we need fanart. can anyone draw? ;)

Oh my gosh, I was laughing so hard during the condom conversation. My mom walked into the living room and was bugging me about what was so funny (but of course I couldn't just out and tell her that two brothers were talking about condoms; it would have screwed with her poor brain). x3 But man, this chapter was pure genius. Great job--both to you and to your friends whom you're RPing with. *sniffs from laughing so hard* About how far do you think we are from the point when confessions will fly? I'm thinking that Shawn's confessions can't be too far away--what with the fact that he's trying so hard to catch Uri's attention. x3 Argh! I'm so curious about what's going to happen next. This story is so addicting. <3

CloudxReno is very interesting. Those stories were very good--thanks for rec'ing them! *squeals.fangirlishly*

I'll check the Zemyx story out now, thanks teeta!

*huggles*
~Endless

Haha, I know Rane is good and cool. However i still like Shawn with Uri...and i cant wait for those fuzzy moments! XD great talk about condoms, haha! Great job on this! Update soon, ill be waiting for the next chappie!

LOVING the bathroom scene. ^_^ Uri's gonna have dreams for a WEEK. .......that is, unless he finds a way to get off sooner. *snickering evilly*
& i wonder what that surprise will be......dinner maybe? *eyebrow lift*
& Shawn's a bastard if he really DOES make Uri spend that 50 bucks on him. >.< (i figure he'll make him spend it on something URI would like... ^_^)

i like the bracelet too. ^_^ i'm trying to figure out if there's a larger point to the mispelling...

lol... well, i didn't print all the parts, just half of them, and in a very little font but my printer still announced its disapprovement by flashing "low ink level" alert on me when i was finished XD but it was worth it ^^ i'm a very impatient creature and couldn't wait till i get back home :P
am i a rane fan? i dunno about it. i still cheer on the brothers, but i can't help noticing that he's a good guy and it'd be abit sad if he placed his feelings onto uri... it'd be a lost case ^^' i just feel a bit sorry for him... unless he's a sneaky bastard and has me all deceived :P
lol, what do i think about the parents now? they totally know, and as loving and understanding as they are they do not like it one bit. looks like they didn't want uri to know that. catholic family and all that i guess. or... maybe it was shawn that didn't want uri to know? the sudden silences when shaen's girlfriends and what not are mentiones are suspicious, at the very least. anyway yeah, i think that the parents know. why uri doesn't is the question here ^^'
lol, what have i noticed in this chapter? shawn can be damn annoying XD "tease" is his middlename and he seems to want everyone (and especially uri) to know that :P well, i still don't quite get him. i know that he wants uri and he gives hints of that here and there, but the way he covers it all and teases uri afterwards is a bit puzzling. i guess he doesn't know that uri feels the same way? he'd be more forward then... i think. lol, these are all my assumptions ^^'
but he still is one big tease! XD i know, it was given. i do have brothers so i know XD
and thanks for the speedy update ^__^

Sorry I didn't review earlier!!! I was having a bad day! I can't WAIT for more!!!!! This review will not be as long as the last. Sorry. But rest assured I am anxiously waiting for mroe!!!!!

The manical laugh. Is it more a 'mwa ha ha ha ha ha,' resident of a spooky but cliche'd horror movie, of a 'heeeeee, he he he he, heeeeee,' he he he, a la witch cackle?

Anyway, Innuendo's, innuendo's. Gotta love em.

One pet hate tho, due to the fact that I'm British, I hate the word 'soccer.' It's football. I'm not judging or anything like that. It's like when someone uses the word, 'bulb' instead of the right word 'lamp' or 'hoover' instead of 'vaccum,' so don't worry about it! I just hate that word and I never hear it used.

Sorry, didn't mean to monologue!

The football spoofs. I've gottaadmit I love those. It's like watching 'It'll be Alright On The Night with all the actors smegging up their lines! I an imagine Shawn doing this. (Is there any of this on u tube? Who by?) And slashy football, you know I have to agree! Priceless!


a lecture on CONDOMS!! I had to muffle my laughter before I was told to keep the noise down. Brilliant. In fact, I loved the whole bathroom conversation.
Keep at it and I'll keep reading

Love Rie
xx

-Smiles- I am very much sure that you are not a pervy old woman. My image of you is actually quite stunning ^_^ a lovely woman who sits quietly by her computer, sipping on a drink and every one in a while tilting her head from side to side in trying to think of something else wonderful to give to her audiences(forgive the spelling). Ahh! Shawn, i must admit, I am falling for him every time he shows up in your chapters. I love him more then I love Uri, and that is saying alot ^_^ Hmmm ... The condom conversation -blushes- I wiggled in my seat hearing all the 'implied' sugestions coming from Shawn's mouth. I was very much drooling on my keyboard. But ahh ... Something I must say before I continue. I have noticed something. Back a few chapters when they were at the grandparent's home, when Shawn's love matters were spoken upon, everyone grew quiet. And also in this chapter. When uri mentioned Shawn being 18 and not having a girlfriend to speak of ... everyone grew quiet once again. I am very VERY curious as to what that means. And I can not believe that Uri did not ask about how Shawn would know about flavored condoms? You would think that when Shawn said "Vinilla is the best" or something along those lines, that Uri would ask "Have you ever tasted condoms before, Shawn?" I was waiting to see if he would catch it, but knowing Uri. -shakes head- he can be such a virgin ^_^ The whole master/slave present ... PERFECT!!!! That fit so well with Shawn's personality and the playfulness of his manner makes me get tangles! -blushes- oops ... perhaps that was too much information ^_^ Anyways, before I too leave a monologue, I possatively LOVED IT!!! I look forward to another of your chapters. (And on the matter of my fiction? I do not know when I will have time to post it, My computer crashed a few days ago so I had to take it to the shop down the street. It will take a while to fix but I couldn't stay away from reading your update so I am here at the Library reading and commenting ^_^ I hope to get my com fixed soon, the wait for me is torture!)


Dayakara~

YAY~~~
More slashie moments ^^ I had to refrain from sqealing out-loud while I was reading it.
Hmmm I don't really know why I think Rane is evil, maybe cause he's too nice?___? (lol I'm not complaining)
I can't wait to see how Shawn will react when he finds out about him and ^____^ I hope they do end up using the strawberry condom someday teeheeee~

Love this chapter. I kinda knew that Shawn was going to make Uri his personal slave. I love the part about the condom in the bathroom but Shawn was getting a little too descriptive if you know what I mean. Another thing that I like was Shawn watching Uri clean his car. Why would Shawn watch Uri clean his car? I bet he was having dirty thoughts especially with how Uri was washing the car. I'm so glad that you updated. I finally have my Suri fix! Can't wait to have more next week.