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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes im satisfied! Omg, i really wanna see uri with those punk clothes....And the kiss! XDD
Anyway, Great job! Ill be watching for teh next chappie soon!
Anyway, Great job! Ill be watching for teh next chappie soon!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh a kiss! Even meant as a joke, that was sweet! This chapter was really cute and can't wait to see what Uir's suprise is *dirty thoughts*. :D Great job!
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter...I'm going to sit here and twitch untill it arrives.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! ^_^ I can't wait until the next chapter.
You are amazing.
Dee
You are amazing.
Dee
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, really funny. Have you ever thought of doing a chapter in shawn's point of view? I think it would be good for us to see how he thinks of Uri and such... just a thought though :)
brilliant work, can't wait for more!
brilliant work, can't wait for more!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want my own Uri-Slave! Meep!..........>_<++ Well anyways I got hit in the head with a bottle at a concer so, I'm writting this out of one eye. (MCR BABY ANF FFtL!FWEEEEE)
Much Luv!
Much Luv!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omigod, Shawn. XD Shawn is absolutely wicked.
Showing him that slashy soccer video was a blatant test of Uri's reaction. Most straight guys wouldn't find that funny, or at the very least would question the sexuality of the guy who showed it to them. Then there's the gel bracelet, and the probably deliberate revealing of skin... And I bet you anything that Shawn planted that condom the night before when he went to take a shower, just so Uri would find it.
I love Uri's reaction to his mom's teasing. "A girlfriend, pppffffttt!!!" Yeah, it's gonna be interesting when Rane comes to meet the family. I can see Shawn and Rane staring each other down across the table.
Rane: *Inches hand towards Uri discreetly*
Shawn: *Glare of death, raises fork*
Rane: "OW! MY HAND! YOU STABBED ME!"
Shawn: "Sorry, I was only trying to take some of Uri's spaghetti. I mean, we feed each other off of our plates all the time. Right Uri?" *Scoops up his own food, puts fork to Uri's mouth* "Say ahh!"
Uri: "What... is going on???"
Ahem, sorry.
I wonder if it occurred to Uri that Shawn implied he had tasted those condoms, ho hum. As for the entire bathroom scene, that was HOT. Yay for Uri doing a great job of turning things around and making SHAWN uncomfortable! The motorcycle scene was pretty cool, too. When he asked for a lemon ice, I couldn't help but think, "Would you like a popsicle, little boy? >=D"
I can't wait to see what other surprises Shawn has in store for darling Uri! I'm so excited! I might not be able to review right away, though; I'm about to travel. I actually was delayed in replying to this because I was packing. D=
Love your story, as always!
Showing him that slashy soccer video was a blatant test of Uri's reaction. Most straight guys wouldn't find that funny, or at the very least would question the sexuality of the guy who showed it to them. Then there's the gel bracelet, and the probably deliberate revealing of skin... And I bet you anything that Shawn planted that condom the night before when he went to take a shower, just so Uri would find it.
I love Uri's reaction to his mom's teasing. "A girlfriend, pppffffttt!!!" Yeah, it's gonna be interesting when Rane comes to meet the family. I can see Shawn and Rane staring each other down across the table.
Rane: *Inches hand towards Uri discreetly*
Shawn: *Glare of death, raises fork*
Rane: "OW! MY HAND! YOU STABBED ME!"
Shawn: "Sorry, I was only trying to take some of Uri's spaghetti. I mean, we feed each other off of our plates all the time. Right Uri?" *Scoops up his own food, puts fork to Uri's mouth* "Say ahh!"
Uri: "What... is going on???"
Ahem, sorry.
I wonder if it occurred to Uri that Shawn implied he had tasted those condoms, ho hum. As for the entire bathroom scene, that was HOT. Yay for Uri doing a great job of turning things around and making SHAWN uncomfortable! The motorcycle scene was pretty cool, too. When he asked for a lemon ice, I couldn't help but think, "Would you like a popsicle, little boy? >=D"
I can't wait to see what other surprises Shawn has in store for darling Uri! I'm so excited! I might not be able to review right away, though; I'm about to travel. I actually was delayed in replying to this because I was packing. D=
Love your story, as always!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't want Rane to like Uri cause it makes poor Starry think of threesomes~ *snickers*
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTERS 23-24
Hm, jocks in that school are not as bad, there seem to be two factions, Rane's and Kyle's. Rane's tyres got slashed... Uri is in big trouble if it's true.
The Real question is, how long until Uri's parents and Shawn will find out about him being gay? He did come out at school and with a popular upperclassman for a boyfriend. That's like the best news of the season for the rumor mill:) EVERYBODY is going to know - kids, parents, everybody.
Uri told Rane that he is grounded and he went out with his brother the next day, hehe. Rane would get pissed off if he sees that:)
I do like this 'slave for a day' idea! Their parents are evil, though, they made them clean upstairs, so now it's 'a slave for half-day', more like. Unless Shawn renegotiates the deal.
‘Football … is full of slash!!!’ is a cool vid, pretty hot pictures. The other one made me cringe a bit, don't like seing people getting hurt. Watching David Beckham hugging other footballers did make me feel better, though. I recon, Shawn made Uri watch it as a test, to see his reaction.
SHAWN’SLAVE??? As in: SHAWN IS SLAVE??? Or: SHAWN’S LOVE - one letter IS off! Hmmm...
I bet Shawn had planted that condom in the bathroom. He sent Uri to clean it, hehe. And checked behind the basket before torturing the poor boy. Evil, evil! Liked that part! Let's see how their date will turn out! Update soon!
P.S. I did read ‘Not supposed to: Scary movies’ and actually written a review-and got a 'daily downtime' message. Yep. Normally I Ctrl-a, Ctrl-c my reviews, but not that time, so it's gone :( I might go back and do it again, but no promises.
Hm, jocks in that school are not as bad, there seem to be two factions, Rane's and Kyle's. Rane's tyres got slashed... Uri is in big trouble if it's true.
The Real question is, how long until Uri's parents and Shawn will find out about him being gay? He did come out at school and with a popular upperclassman for a boyfriend. That's like the best news of the season for the rumor mill:) EVERYBODY is going to know - kids, parents, everybody.
Uri told Rane that he is grounded and he went out with his brother the next day, hehe. Rane would get pissed off if he sees that:)
I do like this 'slave for a day' idea! Their parents are evil, though, they made them clean upstairs, so now it's 'a slave for half-day', more like. Unless Shawn renegotiates the deal.
‘Football … is full of slash!!!’ is a cool vid, pretty hot pictures. The other one made me cringe a bit, don't like seing people getting hurt. Watching David Beckham hugging other footballers did make me feel better, though. I recon, Shawn made Uri watch it as a test, to see his reaction.
SHAWN’SLAVE??? As in: SHAWN IS SLAVE??? Or: SHAWN’S LOVE - one letter IS off! Hmmm...
I bet Shawn had planted that condom in the bathroom. He sent Uri to clean it, hehe. And checked behind the basket before torturing the poor boy. Evil, evil! Liked that part! Let's see how their date will turn out! Update soon!
P.S. I did read ‘Not supposed to: Scary movies’ and actually written a review-and got a 'daily downtime' message. Yep. Normally I Ctrl-a, Ctrl-c my reviews, but not that time, so it's gone :( I might go back and do it again, but no promises.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! ONe day! It's just past half in a day. I wonder where they gone, Really. Restaurant, Movie, or maybe hotel! YTah!!! I love to go to! First Date! It will be more interesting with the apearance of the shining boyfriend Rane. Good luck Shawn. Bear with it Uri. Keep it up, Author. Boring_neko19 will be always pray for your safety, Ups, wrong! I mean YOUR SUCCESS. Banzai. MEow