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no condoms and sex arent that embarressing to talk about, but i suppose thats cause my family dont see it as that bigger deal.

by the way, everytime you write about food i sit there and go hmmm...yes pizza does sound like a good idea etc...u make me hungry :(

poor shawn ... *sigh* if Uri keeps reacting like that they are never gonna make any progress

I .... I gave y-you an idea? Really? -blushes and hides his face- OH!!! I feel as though I have benn patted on the head by a GOD! ^_^ I am so glad that my little mind can accommodate someone who is as a genius a writer as you are, teeta. I have been going to the libray almost everyday waiting for your updates, and I was extatic when you updated and also wrote another side story 'TOP Dogs' which I have not read yet, but will! ^_^ Okay, on to the review. First of all Shawn ... in black is just ... -drools- ORGASMIC! Mmmm .... Uri in bondage, sounds tasty as well. The kiss! Awwww, I was squealing like a middle schooler (the librarian told me to be quite almost a million times o_o, she has no passion for reading I suppose) I loved everything about this chapter, the whole secret forest gettaway, the boyfriend calling in the GAP store. That was perfect! Shawn ... I will marry someone like him (as soon as I find the right Seme ^_^)

Shawn Ingredients:

1/4 teaspoon of Seriousness
80 tablespoons of Naughty Humor
6 thousand cups of Dangerously Sexy
7 million pounds of HOTTNESSS!
And a dash of sweet passion that makes your breath hitch ^_^ and your cheek blush

Just a little cooking remedy for the perfect Shawn cream pie ^_^ (whip cream not included because everything is finger licking good) -giggles-

Dayakara~

Ah, more building. I hope everyone ends up with someone in the end! I think Rane and Shawn are probably about the same on my Eligible Bachelors for Uri measuring stick, though I secretly prefer Shawn. :oD I can just imagine Rane giving me an evil glare for that one. Or maybe just smiling. That might be a little more scary!

Ha ha, I just realized I didn't say what exactly was being built...More building up of the intrigue and anticipation! There we go! My brain gets ahead of me most of the time, so my poor little fingers try to keep up. Can't wait to read more!

Wow that was so sweet! It was so sad too! I feel so bad for poor Shawn! T^T But this is a great story and I am hopelessly addicted to it! lol So yeah can't wait for your next update!^^

~Sunako Kanzaki~

OMG!!!! I WAS SO EXCITED WHEN I SAW THIS!!!!!! It came sooner than I thought it would!!! I LOOOOVED it!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!!! OMG the KISS!!!!! So cute! Oh, and by the way, you can just call me Wowkelsey, or just Kelsey. I am very anxious to see what the suprise will be!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Oh, you're evil!! Having Top Dogs there, taunting me when I was desperate for another chapter of this! And it's so . . . naughty!! Flavoured condoms, huh? Rane, Uri and Shawn, all together!! Squeeeee!!

Also, is there a specific meaning of the gel bracelet? Where i'm from, the black ones are known as "fuck me" bands, and the other colours have different meanings to them as well. Is it something to do with that?

You know, i've never heard anyone say 'as bent as a bottle of chips' before?

HHaaa ! Can't wait for the party !! Is shawn going to invite Ran ? °_^
Naughty shawn ! Kissing your brother like that !! tsk ! tsk !

Evil!!! SNIFF!!! You updated while I was sleeping :D YAY!!! OK... you know, it keeps me ont he edge of my bed, and gapping at the computer, and I'm lucky I didn't read this at work, or half th faculty would have heard me ask the computer what the hell did Shawn think he was doing kissing Uri!!! BUT I'm still at home so..... I could squeeeeee all I wanted... hihihi... and... another little cliffie you evile vil doer! HUGSSS!!!!

Laaerie
Sigh... not the first... goes get ropes...

Ouu, Shawn! You are indeed a little bastard. SO Slow. Keep like that and Rane will outwit you. Definitely. And I am dreaming about our little Uri and Shawn first night too * Crying and sniffle* My incest....Huwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa TxT You're evil! Anyway, Love it. I guess it is a shock for Shawn that Uri yelling him because that suppose to be Kiss. URI! DON'T DO THAT TO YOUR FUTURE BOYFRIEND! BE HONEST, LITTLE URI! YOU'RE GAY, BUDDY and love your brother too. Next is.....What? I don't know...Rane....Kyle.....or House little time. Sorry. Next Update Please. See you