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This fic rocks! The emotions that Uri is going through are so natural that I cannot help but wonder what your inspiration was, did you know someone like him or are you just that good. I also am practically at the end of my seat wondering what Shawn’s surprise is,at first I thought that the clearing was it but I guess I’ll just have to keep reading to find what the real surprise is.

omg! what is the surprise??!!! and shawn wants to tap uri so badly but he is soooo oblivious! i mean he kissed him! anywho loved the chapter! update fast!
kel

OMG! The longer this goes on the more sorry I feel for Shawn. End his suffering already (and ours too)! *cuddles them* The boys definately need a little less confusion in their life. If you could get it up by Tuesday that would be amazing! It would be so nice to have a new chapter after my last final *dreams of the freedom soon coming* kinda like a "you're done yay!" thing to make my day complete.

Bwahahahahaha. I started dying during this chapter. First when Shawn gets Uri the shirt that says "laid by the best" i started laughing so much my mother asked if i was alright, because i was gasping for air. Then with the boyfriend comment and Shawn kisses Uri I started yelling Yes! Yes! Finally! and my mother asked what was going on... So essentially that was an awesome chapter, my mother thinks i'm nuts and i can't wait to see what the surprise is! =D

This one was really cute. I love Your writing. And I want to be Shawn (only for few hours, or days:) so I could molest Uri. I want to suck his sponge.

Aww! What a cute story X3
Love the "date" location, and the shops thingie was funny =P
Love too look at such T-shirts, but never buy those myself.
The surprise elements that you drag in are sooo nice XD

Just wondering, how often to you use to update? I just check sometimes, and don't exacly know how I can find out.. kinda..
And I always notice your sidestories and such when you come with the replies T_T
I'm so slow...

Hell~~

^_^ Just discovered U! Ur so kewl!!!! OMG URISHAWN!!!!! (One woman fangirl-team)

Ooo...Ooooo...Oooo...A kiss in a pubic place and...He drew him sleeping! Yeeeeeeeeehhhhhyyyyyyyyy...-Goes off into day dream land-

I enjoyed this chapter a lot considering I also hate shopping, especially clothes shopping! If you hadn’t put up a disclaimer for the names of the clothing shops I would have thought you made them up because I never even heard of them, lol. The only familiar name was pizza hut, we have those over here but I think their pizzas taste awful! *runs away from the angry people who love pizza hut*

I liked the part where Uri peeked In Shawn’s changing cabin when he was trying on the ugly shirt making faces. And I loved the little ‘joke’ kiss, of course. Shawn is becoming blunt alright. But it’s so cute to see how insecure they both are, carefully trying to find out how far they can go… I laughed when Uri got worried what Rane would think if he knew his brother kissed him. Uri really IS going to be torn between two lovers I guess.

And wow! A peek into Shawn’s mysterious love life! Awesome. I wonder who the BOYS are he sleeps with to get over URI. I wonder if Uri will ever meet someone who got their heart broken by Shawn. That would be awkward ^^

:O Starry no be bad, Starry has an overactive imagination~! ^-^

Either ways, I get the nagging feeling Shawn is planning something...I'm honestly surprised something didn't happen in the clearing...and that kiss at the small *snerks*, that was awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter!

You know, I'd love to talk to you sometime (:O I rp too~!), my email is starry_eyedstar@hotmail.com, email me sometime if you want~! ^-^