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CHAPTER 25
Wow, Teeta! You dedicated this chapter to me! That's a first one! And The Chapter where Shawn kissed Uri on a mouth, none the less! Thank you!*hugs* The funny thing is that I know what the bracelet means and Uri doesn't, hehe. He will find out at some point, hopefully:)

I liked that entire chapter. I used to feel sort of sorry for Uri because of all the conflicting feelings he is going through. This chapter made me feel sorry for Shawn, though. Sure, he has a plan and seems in control. But in reality he is so screwd up! He was really pretending that Uri is his boyfriend from the beginning of that shopping trip. Like they are just out having a good time as boyfriends. Shawn got a bit carried away at the Gap, poor kid. Could of ruined all his plans there.

It was a funny scene where Uri bought a sponge. He should of bought the sponge-glove for Shawn, hehe.

Madurare is stil being worked on, it won't be posted before being finished, but we know that, hehe. Here is a small exerpt(as a separate review in case you want to remove it)

EXERPT FROM MADURARE:

Harry's fingers started trembling so much that he could barely tie the laces on his trainers.

It'll be all right, he told himself. It's Severus, this time. He won't hurt you.

The strange part of that was that while Harry knew it was true, it didn't matter. Not one bit. He felt absolutely sick to his stomach at the thought of sex, even with Severus. He'd managed to put the feeling off--more or less--before the invocation, but that was probably because he'd known that the sex was going to get put off, too. Severus had said they would abstain.

But that phase was over now. They'd invoked, and Harry was officially Severus' slave, and the next important thing they had to do was transfer Vol . . . no, no, the Dark Lord's power from Severus to Harry. And that was going to require not just sex, but actual penetration.

Harry clenched his eyes shut, shaking his head. He couldn't. He knew he couldn't bear it. Not for one second, not after what Bole and Talmadge had done less than a week ago. He needed more time, right? Hell, anybody would. But Harry was out of time!

yay...
i've read it....
and strangly enough I've come to like shawn a bit better....eventhough I said that that's never gonna happen....so he's alright and for once there is a review ithout the R*word....
and that's a nice title....I'm gonna write a fic and call it "the R*world"....it's gonna be about homosexual robots....
ehrm....no...
but teeta...I have to say....you have to get some action into the story (not THAT kind of action though)....'cause it's hard to break it to you, but I'm getting a bit bored....the exictement when opening a new chapter is not as big as it used to be.
(And I don't think that R* missing is the reason...)
there is a lot of conflict in this story, but right now it's taking a nap somewhere and as much as I love peaceful times-it's enough now. so give us something.
I actually would like for uri to stumble across something from the past that leaves him thinking about his aunt, etc. etc.....I don't want you to reveal that shawn is not his brother (ha-that's me talking...I bet shawn is his brother and you're laughing your ass of reading this), but give us and uri a hint (as far as I know uri he's won't understand it anyway....that boy walks through the world blind and naive -and that's what we love him for)....
AND
I WANT YOU TO TELL ME RANE'S NATUARAL HAIRCOLOR
(oh...and now I said the R*word...sorry...but I really want to know his haircolor...so?!!!)

awww... i guess shawn was trying to be a bit more obvious than usually and all he earned for it was uri's outburst ^^' i actually feel a bit sorry for him cuz he's balancing on a very thin line here and it has to cost him LOTS of nerves (which doesn't change the fact that he's a natural tease and will probably continue to torment his little brother even after he wins him :P)
but shawn was kinda sweet in this chapter, much love for him ^^ especially for all the times when he forced himself to tell his lil bro all the things that were making him blush ^^= and for telling uri that he will take the boy to that place whenever he wants ^__^

rane may not be a lost case...? you really want to do a tree-some XD even if you repeat that there's no chance ^^ we'll see, we'll see ^_~

can't wait to read more :>

I liked reading their little shopping moment and oh the kiss!! What a sly guy Shawn is, in a good way though *grins* Now they have taken another step forward whitthe kiss even though poor Uri is still so clueless! Shawn is getting more and more bolder, isn't he?

And their painting moment, I had a very clear picture in my mind of how the scenery might have looked like and oh; I want to go there! Can Shawn take me? Lol.

Ok, I'll be waiting for the next part ^_^

I love this chapter. The kiss was priceless. Somehow I think Shawn wanted it. I think Shawn is interested in Uri as more than a brother. The hints are there. Why would Shawn plant a "joke" kiss on Uri and why would Shawn take Uri to the place where Shawn took his dates too? Kinda interesting. So glad that you updated.

Yay! They finally kissed! Whoot!

Loved this chatper. Poor Shawn... *shakes head* Uri is so oblivious to his lurve. xD

I hope you're well,

LJ

PS: NEW CHAPTER SOON, PLEASE!

yay for more chapters! too bad you're still teasing us with that suprise. and no oneshot either? harsh! maybe later in the story...good chapter anyway. i figured the bracelet really said shawn's love or something like that, but i didn't know we were guessing. though, the fact that he even has it means he's got it bad for uri, as if weren't already obvious enough, since he would have had to have it made or something. if uri notices what it really says maybe he'll finally get all the hints shawn's been dropping. i wonder how long he's had it. hmmm...guess i'll have to wait until later in the story. of course if the wonderful author wanted to give us more updates i wouldn't protest. (observe the blatant flattery; apparently i'm not above some minor ass-kissing to get chapters)

Chapter 25 - AWW. Shawn. Shawny-poo. So sweet. 'Laid by the best' indeed. But that was cute. Uri in bondage pants. Jeez. I'd KILL to see innocent little Uri in bondage pants. AND THE SPONGE! The sponge was hilarious. We all love the sponge. And what can I say? Shawn and Uri are adorable. Read Top Dogs you say? Yes, master. Err...mistress.

woohoo!! they kissed!! he kissed him!! ...okay, not the hottest kiss in the story but still!!
and how thick can uri get!? i mean seriously! this was a nice chapter, the secret place, aww that was sweet.
whats the surprise!! im on edge! i need to know!!lol
very exciting.
and yay! hope you update really soon, this was a nice present for such a bad day (i sprained my knee. i know! who sprains their KNEE!) so it was a nice surprise.
anyway, i think i'll just mention one more time... i love shawn, hes just so... aww worthy.
cheers