rate_review Reviews

I'm sorry I didn't review on the last chapter but I have been very busy lately and have hardly had 5mins to myself.

Anyway, the massage scene was so hot! And the shower! Need a fan!

Well, from looking, it seems that Shawn is being very touchie/feelie with Uri, more so than before.

This is getting really good and dont worry,I'll keep checking for updates.

Rie
xx

Gah! I really love this, but Uri's (love the name btw) sexual frustration is well...frustrating!
I am quite curious to know what's gonna happen with Rane and Uri...(he did seem too concerned and protective with the thing between Uri and Kyle)
I can't wait for Uri and Shawn to get together!

Much love!

Loved this chapter. The massage must have been that good to make Uri do that in the shower. Keep up the good work.

Ahhh, loved it all!!! Pink apron ... hahaha. And Uri might take up slavery as a profession with the way things are going.

Teeta! Where have you gone? I've been in withdrawal! Please tell me there's plenty more coming!

YAY!!!!!!!!! you posted!!! and yes it is loooooong.... even longer in the AFF format... hihihi... you know I looove it~~~~ I can't wait to see the development *using psychic powers here to take a peek* oh, yesh, I just can't wait for it to COME OUT HARD *cough* muahahaha..... braindead as usual... how can I review when I spend my time telling how great it all is the whole week and bugging you?! hmmmmmmm *ponders* hmmmmm *hands new box of flavored condoms to uri* "go lick!"

HUGS!

Laaerie

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!! Ok, why must you make me love Shawn and Rane!!!!!!?????? It's so EVIL!!!!! How can I pick just one?????? Well, I can't WAIT for more!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! AND THANK YOU FOR MY COOKIE!!!! YUMMIES!!!!

that was hot!!!!...kinda...well as hot as u can get fro this story so far *glares*, no its probably a good thing ur taking it slow, if u took all the action fast u wouldnt have as many addoring fans... maybe u'de have more perverts and stuff

i cant wait to see what Rane does (i really do loooove Rane)

Let me just start by saying--I friggin love you!
I'm glad you wait until you have quite a lot to post, I may have to wait awhile to read, but it is defiantly worth it! This chapter was so sweet. I did like the surprise! Having the pool to themselves. But I was defiantly sure there was going to be some kissing/attempted kissing action going on, but alas I was shot down. What a naughty card game to play, loved it. Some how I knew that Uri wouldn't take off his boxers, and how nice of big brother Shawn to not order him to. I wonder if Rane will really bring in that pink apron?
Until next time, your dedicated reader,
Spiral

i cant get over the difference between them. one with dark hair and the other with blonde hair...
and im suspicious that their not really brothers. BUT COUSINS!! you mentioned something in this chap that caught my eye, maybe for a reason or im just being paranoid. the pic of the dead aunt in shawns drawer, you said surprisingly.????
is one of them really her kid and the mom or dad just took one of them in when she died????
...........im being to detectivnessy....i mean, i hope your making a story of the 2 eventually getting together, and i just cant see that happening unless their really not brothers.
but hell, itd be weird if they were cousins tooo.... soo, one of them has to be adopted....
black hair/ blonde hair....
i hope im not spoiling anything for your story....
but your driving me nuts....
anyways...hilarious chapter.
more plez master.