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Great chapter, Hon! We need to lock these boys in a room until they confess everything to each other! They are so frustrated they are frustrating me..hehehe. Can't wait for more!

that was really good. it was hilarious how jealous he got over maya, but didn't even realize he was jealous! it sounds to me like uri may have taken the first step in accepting his attraction to shawn when he realized the world didn't end when he jerked off thinking of his brother. so now i'm all like "yay, finally!" but that's only to be expected. embrace all things kinky and perverted is my motto after all. more please!

*sigh* my stupid computer likes to act up, oh well... Now I get to review, and hopefully before the downtime! What a chapter! Juicy and long, worth waiting. I find it funny how Uri can't undress in front of his brother, though whit the feelings it's understandable, but still funny. And stripping! OMG, there's a clue Uri! Lol, Shawn wants him to strip! and all this teasing whit sexual innuendos, haha, poor guy.

And I love how jealous Shawn is about Uri talking to Rane. Uuh and a pink apron? Will he really make him wear it? hihi. Funny images in my mind now.

You two worked well whit the RP:ing, of course I expected nothing less.

Hm... what else... my brain doesn't work well before breakfast, but um yes, I loved it, again!

*hugs*

-C-

VelveteenFox =^.^=

I loved it! I absolutly loved it! okay, this took me like a million hours to read through the whole thing ^O^ I was thinking about leaving you a review at the end of every chapter but I was like, nah, you wouldn't want to read 26 reviews from me! So I'm gonna break it down to a few comments about my favorite parts ^O^ Okay, this will be my absolute first review for you so.....please be patient because it might take a while. Okay the first few chaps were heart trending! How can you put poor little Uri through so much untouchable sexual tention? the poor kid. I was like "Oo" "Ow!" I'm not a boy, but I have four brothers and I know what they go through....it is terrible >.< And I have to mention Shawn.....okay one word....."Sexydeliciousdreamywickedlycutewonderfullytastyandultamatelybangable!" Hehee ^_^ The boy has totally got it going on. I wish I was Uri for just one day and I would be like..."Shawn, show me who's the best!" Oh! o.o I'm sorry, I am rambling, but girl you are AMAZING!!! I love the way you fit everything so perfectly together and make your words and paragraghs flow so that you have just enough excitement and just enough flash to catch your writer, truly gifted. if I didn't know any better, I would say your a guy O.O but your a girl who knows how to jump into the mind of a confused teenage pretty boy who is a little on the shy side and make it into your own. I feel as though I am Uri when I read this. I can actually see myself blushing when Shawn looks at Uri and all the rest. Okay now Rane. Personally.....I like the guy. Red spikey hair and green eyes? To DIE for! Mmm I bet he is a real Irish shag in the bedroom ~_^ and the deal of Uri being Rane's boyfriend is GENIUS! You couldn't have put Uri in a better situation to fit the story. you really seem to look to the furture when yo uwrite. You don't just write a chapter and then work from that, you see the upcoming chapters and make it so that they all flow smoothly together. I'm glad that I started reading this when there were a lot of chapters because I would be like "What happens next!?" on a few chapters, like the one about Uri and Shawn staying with thier Grandparents in the same bed? O.O I so thought something was gonna happen there. OH! I also read both your side stories and DAMN!!! The movie theater was steamy as a boy's locker room shower! It was HOT ^O^ and the ice cream.....Ooo.....Love, you're a tease! ~_^ Do I sense that you are a little like Uri? or maybe.....Shawn perhaps? *winks* Okay...now for this chapter, It was a total DATE, Uri really is getting close to figure it out and I am sitting here like "Put it together! PUT IT TOGETHER!!! >.<" I know I shouldn't be yelling at the computer but......*shrugs her shoulders* I can't help it, you got me enraptured with your sizzling sentenses and dazzling compermises o.o (lots of Z's, sorry 'bout that, love) Oh and forgive the miss spelling, without word processor, I'm an illiterit idiot >.< Anyways, love, Your story is so good thati can't figure out a single word that lets me express just how much I like it ^O^ but okay.....that's long enough I think, so now I'm gonna leave this painstakingly long review and Hey! I might see my name on your 'answering reviews' list. Well, until your next chapter, love. Keep the sexy comin'

Mmmmmmmm nice...still im dying for Shawn to stop fluffing around and just pounce on Uri....*nice images*

I love Within Temptation...brilliant band...i salute your taste!

Gak!
That was awesome....

I need a shower now.....

...oh...nope...cant move...i think im in shock.

I am looking forward to the next part of this story very very much.

Wow! this chapter was great! Thank You for making it this long! It was worth to wait! Anyway, I think that story and Your writing skills are geting better and better with each chapter. I kinda did miss Rane and it's nice that he appeared (in some way:), I also miss Kyle, he is evil and messing around so much, I want to read how he is hurting Uri . I was suprised that Uri never jarked off. I mean it's not only about Shawn and his disgust towards this feeling, but wasn't he ever experimencing...? Anyway, it was the highest time for a healthy fifteen years old boy to wank! Best Regards and Good Luck!

Wow, very long chapter ! thank you !^^
Shawn, please, I want a massage too !!
I think Shawn's jaleousy is very cute...

i loved it.
please continue!!
<3 sarah.

#800 woot!

Let me finish this review before someone steals that spot. Strippoker---yum! And I swear it's only a coincidence that I read the pervetic but delicious chapters! But real quick question though, is that Anon person right? Are they....cousins? Ah, that'd be a sweet curveball. But yeah, anyway, great chapter, loved it, wanna be reviewer 800....