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we-heeeelll. *smirk* that was an interesting trip through yaoi land. ^_~
Shawn made definite progress. & it'll be oh-so sweet when the final confrontation happens & Uri finds out Maya's just a friend who was trying to help Shawn woo Uri. *evil grin*

....now Rane, that's another issue entirely. i think Shawn might spike uri breakfast drink with something that day if he finds out. *glaring at Rane*

Just wanted to let you know you have another fan xD. And, lyk, omg... This fic? Freaking amazing. The integration of plot and development of Uri's character? /Sublime/. I love it! I can't express what a fantastically good job you've done. I mean, gawd, I can't bring myself to enjoy any other fic after devouring those 26 delicious chapters. So! I suppose that means I can actually get some study done for my exams. So, Thanks! =D You supplied me with great writing and a will to get some learning done.

Looking very, very much forward to the next installment.
Ciao! <3
~ I Control the Sandwich Monkey

Chapter 26 - Shawnykins! I LOVE YOU! Please marry me! Sorry. I just had to get that random fangirl moment off my chest. Jesus. He was so adorable in this chapter. I wondered why he didn't ask about Rane in the King game. I guess because Uri already told him it was a joke when Rane said that he was Uri's boyfriend. And aww. Uri in a pink apron. I can't wait. Love the chapter's length! But I prefer faster updates. LOL.

yes!! FINALLY!! an update!! it was a long, painful two weeks, let me tell you!! i read this chapter last night but i couldnt review cozmy comp was stuffing up.. *glares*
squee!! the swimming was so nice!! aww shawn is so romantic, them playing was so cute!
and the card game!! woot! that was nice!! but it begs the questions: how THICK is uri?! i mean REALLY!! its almost painful now! he really is specialED
the jerk off session! hot!! wow, that was nice! lol, the sponge thing.. so funny.
i have to say though, shawm is a very nice master, really nice.
and ive finally decided, i dont like Rane. im deffinatly sideing with shawn! a pink apron!? what is with that!?
this was such a cute chapter, it was great.
and no, my knee isnt better yet, still on crutches, and will be for a couple more weeks *glares* *evil grin* so there for you must update really really soon!!

Seriously? Then, I might have to add you. I have Trillion, so...yeah. But, I'm on it all the time...well...not this past week...work and all, but I'll be on it more once I get my laptop internet ready~

Just send me an email with your address and I'll add you okay? Email is starry_eyedstar@hotmail.com~!

Either ways, on with my fangirling over the chapter...

I loved Rane's little call...that was funny, I can't wait to see what he has Uri do, it should be interesting! And, the whole massage deal, that was pure fucking genius!

I can't wait to see what happens~!

I am not somebody that reviews very often- I´m far too lazy, but I just wanted you to know, that I await every chapter with great anticipation. I love this story. I like it that you dont have them going at it to fast. Normaly when the main characters have finaly gotten each other it just gets boring and I think the race is more exiting than the price (well, in this kind of situation and when its not me waiting for somebody to come around :P). Hopefully I will enjoy maaaaaaaaaaany more misunderstandings, problems, rivals etc.

Please continue soon.

Oh please please please update soon! I love how your characters balance each other out, along with the playful banter that Uri and Shawn seem to have going. Your story is amazing!

well! I think Uri is a dumb. Stupid! I would know definitely if someone do that to me. Poor Shawn. Must be hurt! hiding his feeling all the time and finally losing to RAne! I mean, NO, I don't feel bad! Rane is good boy. I like him. But, I still think that Uri prefer Shawn more than Rane. It's just that he's a kind-hearted so he doesn't want to do some think that would make other ( in this case Rane ) sad by cheating or ....( you know more than I do ). Anyway, I think Rane wont be too sad if Uri does hurt him. If it's Rane maybe he will go to find his revenge or another one. Keep it up author

After that I must say I am fine with the long while my dear! Lol That was quite a Double Dose! That left me wondering if our dear Shawn is starting to piece things together...unlike our dear sweet,stupid Uri...>.> Heres hoping He gets a damn clue at some boy, poor stupid boy. lol.

Anywhos I Will be waiting for the next chapter with abetted breath.

~Sunako Kanzaki

This is rather bad, I've been reading this story since I caught it when you posted chapter two and this is the first time I've reviewed. Though, I just recently got an account on here as well. So here I go...

I've really enjoyed your story! More then anything I love the fact that there is more to this story then "Lust, confession, bed". I love the fact that there's a detailed developement of feelings and views. I love the characters. Actually, there's not a part of this I don't like. I think it's amazing you update as regularly as you do, and I've never seen anyone who kept up with a story like you. It's wonderful to know that there will be an update for this story in a reasonable time.

You're a marvelous writer, and you're RPG parteners are wonderful as well. And I'll happily continue reading this story just to see where these characters end up and how. ^-^