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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The World War III gonna happen! RUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!! For Your LIVE!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, Shawn and Rane is really going to fight each other in Dinner table! The parents and Uri will just watching. Dinner time! Looking forward to it! I always like wrestle or maybe boxing? Who knows? Shawn! Rane! Wanna bet who win?
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whaaaaaaaa.........! O_O I LOVE THIS STORY! and there isn't really any sex in it yet.. well other than the dreams/daydreams.. BUT MAN I LOVE IT! YOU MUST CONTINUE! PLease? >_< I'll draw fan arts! as a bribe i mean XD
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loove this story soo much! haha! update soon!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your story! It's not too fast moving, which is great, really. It's a lot more realistic like this, with Uri feeling guilty and ashamed of his feelings for his brother. Great plota and very well written, too! :D
(How can you STILL reply to all of the reviews? I mean, it's very nice of you, but... o.O )
(How can you STILL reply to all of the reviews? I mean, it's very nice of you, but... o.O )
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! I love it!!!!!
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June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ech. Sorry I'm replying so late. I found a new fandom and have been lurking around such a community for weeks. XP I feel bad because I realize now how much I missed this story while I was away. Sorry again!
Anyway, this was a fantastic chapter! It was very sexy. ^^ I can't WAIT to see more! =D
Anyway, this was a fantastic chapter! It was very sexy. ^^ I can't WAIT to see more! =D
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uri is BLIND I’m telling you. Which regular straight guy would want to play strip poker with his brother, like EVER? (not to mention the massage and all the nudity jokes and the numerous very obvious suggestions. Personally I'd change the chapter title to 'clear signals' =P) Shawn’s not only become blunt, he’s even stating to turn a little aggressive in trying to get what he wants. Like when Rane called. Shawn was really being an ass, so jealous. I guess this sets the tone for future hard competition. You know I’m looking forward to that!
“Hmmm, do you reeeaaaly not jerk off?” For a sec I thought you were going to insert the part I suggested in one of my reviews, but turns out Uri didn’t need a teacher, he found out all by himself ^^ I absolutely loved the masturbation sequence. You have such a way with words it’s amazing. I wish the poor kid didn’t feel so awful afterwards. I guess it will take some time. Maybe next time he ‘ll think of Rane and feel better? XD You know I’m rooting for Rane, although I hope he wasn’t serious about the pink apron…
I won’t be able to update my fics before June 15. My problem is the same as yours, I have tons of inspiration, but I’m still way too busy to write. (Well… I am writing, it’s just not smut, just boring reports etc.) By the end of next month I’ll have a lot more free time tho. Both my running fics will be updated before the end of June, and with a little luck I will have enough time for weekly updates in July and August.
“Hmmm, do you reeeaaaly not jerk off?” For a sec I thought you were going to insert the part I suggested in one of my reviews, but turns out Uri didn’t need a teacher, he found out all by himself ^^ I absolutely loved the masturbation sequence. You have such a way with words it’s amazing. I wish the poor kid didn’t feel so awful afterwards. I guess it will take some time. Maybe next time he ‘ll think of Rane and feel better? XD You know I’m rooting for Rane, although I hope he wasn’t serious about the pink apron…
I won’t be able to update my fics before June 15. My problem is the same as yours, I have tons of inspiration, but I’m still way too busy to write. (Well… I am writing, it’s just not smut, just boring reports etc.) By the end of next month I’ll have a lot more free time tho. Both my running fics will be updated before the end of June, and with a little luck I will have enough time for weekly updates in July and August.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-dies- Oh my god! I was eating bread when i got to the part with the card game and started lauhging and choking and almost died when i thought Uri was going to take his boxers off. From now on i shall adhere to the no eating rule while reading this =P.
On a side note... URI MUST BECOME LESS DENSE! =P Man all those hints Shawn was giving him.... i think eventually Shawn will just have to up and ambush Uri.
On a side note... URI MUST BECOME LESS DENSE! =P Man all those hints Shawn was giving him.... i think eventually Shawn will just have to up and ambush Uri.
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss that last update?!Anyways, I must say I like where this is going! Poor Uri... At least this is getting somewhere *grins*. Poor thing molested himself!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... Wow... Just wow, teeta. This chapter is so chock full of content that I'm kind of feeling speechless. Haha, I guess that I can settle for the fact that I love every part of this chapter.
Shawn will always fascinate me. His adoration of Uri is just so obvious that it makes me want to scream. Of course, it makes sense that Uri is oblivious but I've just barely realized that Uri is not a risk-taker. He's the kind of guy who'd rather stick around his comfort zone than branch out and try new things, right? I guess that I've gotten that idea about him before, but it's never truly dawned on me fully until now. I feel kind of slow. LOL
As for Maya... well, it seems that she'll be a very good diversion to keep Uri from suspecting that he's Shawn's true object of affections.
You brought Clem up again and I'm kind of hoping that she'll appear in the story again in the future. After all, Shawn can now think that he has competition for his little brother's love. (Oh, the irony!)
Pink aprons... or naked aprons... oh, decisions, decisions. :3 Rane's phone calls were amusing and I'm glad that he made a cameo appearance in this chapter (if only it had been the last chapter though--when Shawn had "joke" kissed Uri! Dx). Hmm... I much preferred the collar for Uri, though. The thought of it actually reminded me of Ritsuka from Loveless. Dunno why, though. Maybe it's because Yun Kouga seems to be fond of the idea of bondage!Ritsuka (especially bondage with Soubi involved... *drools*).
Gah! I'm rambling; I'm sorry teeta. Great update. 41 pages is definitely impressive. It's obvious that you were greatly inspired for this chapter. Can't wait to see what more you have in store for our favorite cast of OCs.
<3
~Endless
Shawn will always fascinate me. His adoration of Uri is just so obvious that it makes me want to scream. Of course, it makes sense that Uri is oblivious but I've just barely realized that Uri is not a risk-taker. He's the kind of guy who'd rather stick around his comfort zone than branch out and try new things, right? I guess that I've gotten that idea about him before, but it's never truly dawned on me fully until now. I feel kind of slow. LOL
As for Maya... well, it seems that she'll be a very good diversion to keep Uri from suspecting that he's Shawn's true object of affections.
You brought Clem up again and I'm kind of hoping that she'll appear in the story again in the future. After all, Shawn can now think that he has competition for his little brother's love. (Oh, the irony!)
Pink aprons... or naked aprons... oh, decisions, decisions. :3 Rane's phone calls were amusing and I'm glad that he made a cameo appearance in this chapter (if only it had been the last chapter though--when Shawn had "joke" kissed Uri! Dx). Hmm... I much preferred the collar for Uri, though. The thought of it actually reminded me of Ritsuka from Loveless. Dunno why, though. Maybe it's because Yun Kouga seems to be fond of the idea of bondage!Ritsuka (especially bondage with Soubi involved... *drools*).
Gah! I'm rambling; I'm sorry teeta. Great update. 41 pages is definitely impressive. It's obvious that you were greatly inspired for this chapter. Can't wait to see what more you have in store for our favorite cast of OCs.
<3
~Endless