rate_review Reviews

Hi! ^^ I have jus finish reading all the 27 chapters! I really like this story! ^_^ It is so cute and I like all the characters! Esp Uri. He is way too cute! Ohh! I am so sorry that i did not put reviews for all the chapters. I will do so when I re-read them when i can.

Actually, The spelling for the singer name is Stefanie Sun Yan Zi. She is a Singaporean. Not Taiwanese. ^_^ Why I know? keke I am from Singapore and I like her "Green Light" too! I am so glad you like her song. Her voice is very special. She seldom stay in Singapore though.

Anyway, I like your story! I really really do! *hugz* do write more on Rane also! He is cute! keke

Rane is the shit .. a manipulating shit, but still awesome. Though it looks like he already rained (or 'raned' ... hahaha I'm dumb) on Shawn's parade. I can't imagine dinner going awfully well.

Ah yes a monster chappy again, but oh how I enjoyed it ^_^ Shawn afraid of the storms, how cute is that? I thought it was cute how Uri then spend the night by his side... and well thunder storms freak me out as well.

I'm glad we got to see Rane more, he truly is an interesting characer, which reminds me to check out that song later. And when will he get his kiss I wonder? The poor guy has been begging for it and Uri is such a tease, lol.

Um and the dinner! Can't wait to read it, Shawn is so jealous already, so I wonder how he will act durring the rest of the evening.

Ok, my brain is still fuzzy after last night... but I'll say it again; great chapter teeta ^_^

-C-

I LOVE YOU!

Yay! Date! and damn it! Uri already made out with him once, why is he sucha prude!!!

Also.... happy Uri/ Shawn. Poor Shawn... my sister was scared of thunderstorms, too. But I wasn't so nice. I told her the more scared she was the louder and brighter it got... and if she was less scared the storm would give up trying to scare her and go away. Ain't I a good big sister?


ALSO! Happy Shawn/ Rane conflict. XD

I was happy this chapter. Obviously. Now love me and be online more often damn it!

Much loves.

No-mad(at you for not being online)-ic

LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! However, I will say, I miss the smut!!! WHEN DO WE GET THE SMUTTY GOODNESS??????!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awww... No.....!!! We won't let You have a break! This chapter was so wonderful! And so close to some rape or sexual harassment scene he he Tasty. But please don't make Shawn Uri's cousin! They can be together as brothers anyway, it won't hurt anybody, don't be politically correct, this whole problem with incest is stupid-as long as children aren't involved it should be nobody buisness who somebody wants to be with. I know-Uri is a child hi hi but only few years left... I will give You a bear hug and bye bye keep going!

Hello Teeta,

so another review. I like that chapter. Really. It's playfull and easy going - just the way I like it :) Anyway, I cringed a little when you mentioned Captain Jack - I remember the trash-dance thingy they published when I was young *shudders* I downloaded the song nonetheless - and yeah... that's Captain Jack as its best (worst?) - only now they are using classic melodies ("Hall of the Mountain King" I think) :D. Hope Rane doesn't switch to E-rotic though... ;)

So, what else to write. There are numerous scences I like - the storm night was cute, the garden scene with ice cubes was funny and Rane is hard competition for Shawn - can't wait for the dinner. Oh and I think there's something brewing in the Niven family (if I'm not over interpreting some lines in the last few chapters) but I doubt you'll spill it anytime soon, hmm?!

Anyway, know I'm a big fan of this story and yeah... keep writing
Nathaniel

HUGS HUGS HUGS --- Real nice developing of Rane's character there! fufufufuf --- I can't wait to see how everything is going to flow into... er.... ahem... yesh so... *silly grin* difficult to review now! Anyway, you know by now I am a proud Rane fan, with a side of Shawnyness, and I know that makes no sense, 'long live the bull!' --- must make you write faster! --- gimme icecream! Loved doing the RP's as usual, and I just know you will make this story one of the most remembered stories in this site! *firm nod*

Laaerie

Oh no, what a place to leave us hanging. I don't think I can stand to wait to see what happens at dinner between Rane and Shawn. That was the most awesome chapter. Can't wait for you to update. Thanks :)

Oh you updated again!! I was originally going to bed (It's 2:30am where I am, and i have work early today) but then I saw that you had updated and was compelled to read it!!

Ahh, Uri and his ice cream eating habits... I was glad to see that you've put more Rane back in! It felt like he was missing there for a while. I'm almost disappointed that Uri didn't wear the pink apron though. lol

And how very dare you leave it on a cliffhanger like that!! Ok, so I know it's not a major CLIFFHANGER cliffy, but still. I hope you rectify this situation by updating as fast as you can! I can't believe it's been weeks since your last update! But I can't really complain, especially when your chappies are so long. ^^

Keep up the good work! I'm now off to find those songs that you've mentioned.