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by teeta

person Bleh
schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
zomfg an update I am so excited!!!!! :D I'm so glad, I really love your story. I enjoy the characters and the way you write. I like how long and substantial your chapters are. I am a very content camper right now :)
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just finished ch27. I know whats gonna happen!!! So xcited I'm about to burst.
It's not his real brother is it? The dead Aunt is the mother, that's why he keeps a foto, and shares her fear of storms ! Tadaaaa :D
ok, I'm gonna read on now. And I'll probably find out that my theory is wrong lol
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*Glops* I love you! Yay!!! Finally some more Uri/Shawn action. I'm so glad they kinda pretty much reconciled ^^ And I especially loved Uri finally unleashing all hell and fury at Shawn. I found myself clapping "Go Uri!!" I was so proud =') Please update soon. I understand you probably won't be able to update in like a month or something but please don't make us wait half a year to a year again or else we'll go crazy and hunt you down like last time =D Can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
U knw, I'm not quite sure wether I should give u a bad or a good review. So I'm gonna go with bad :P
because of u, I have been up at crazy hours in the morning readin this story of urs, which appeared out of no where! I've been a regular here for the past year, and this is the first time I see ur story! So the theme got me streight away. Then I saw over a thousand reviews and I've ne'er seen that before, so got intrigued. Plus I didn't understand how you could have sneaked 40+ chapters without me noticing. So anyway, I start reading, and Reading, and readin, and I can't stop Reading despite the fact that I have to be at work at 8 sharp. So because of u, I've been gettin like a max of 4 and a half hours to sleep each night, for the past three nights! And I'm still at chapter 25. I've been wanting to drop a review since the first chapter but I didn't wanna waste valuable Reading time :D
one thing niggling me is ur story first came across as being set in England, because of the language, and terminology u were using, so I was slightly confused when it turned out to be set in the US.
Now I noticed u started this story in 2006, and as I say, I haven't finished the story yet, so I don't know if it's complete, but if it's not, I'm slightly anxious that u won't update regualrly and I'll start loggin on manically, every night, to check if I've updated,
I absolutly love the story, I don't care how pervy it is, I Want them to end up together.

Now I'm debating internally whether I should read another chapter or go to bed coz I have work in the morning...
Another chapter me thinks :D
person miles
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's SO good to have you back !! I think it was almost one year since the last update !?
And then, this long, amazing chapter !! ^^
Thank you for your hard work !!

Finally, you give a break to poor Uri and poor Shawn ! I'm glad to see them closer day by day...
And Uri talk too ! Dane has been right to shout after him ! XD

Shawn's father has been a rapist !? What a shock for the child he were...

Keep going ! Don't wait another year before the next update, please pretty ! ;)
person Koira
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My neighbour may have woken up when I expressed my joy about this update.
person amoxi
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nowwww I admit I never even once reviewed your story even though I've known it for a long time now. While waiting for this update I read and reread bits and parts of it which I've liked the most. I admit I contemplated in my mind to accept the fact to never find out the end of Shawn's and Uri's journey. I almost gave up on it like I did with 'Stupid Post it Notes', my other fav fic out there. The fact that I saw this today though made me realize that I shouldn't ever do this:) I'm so thankful for the new chapter and the progress. ESPECIALLY the progress after part 41 left us all depressed and hanging.

Thank you so much for proving me wrong.
person kylee123
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness Teeta! This is quite the Friday surprise. I can't wait to find out what has been going on with Shawn and Uri. I am going to have to go back a few chapters to catch up with the story. I am happy you got your muse back.
person MayoRose
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i miss your updates! Come back to us! This is my favorite story on this website! please! please! please! i need an update! <3
schedule July 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
teeta!! Where are you? It's been almost two months to a year since you last updated this story! I'm sorry if I sound like a bitch but dammit, I hate it when writers just abandon their stories, especially great ones like this! I know I can't be the only one checking this website at least every couple of weeks to see if you put up the next chapter! You only have two more chapters to go so please, PLEASE update as soon as possible. I'm sorry if you have something going on in your life, but you seriously haven't had any free time in almost a year? I remember when you used to update every two weeks or so. Please teeta, even if you're tired of just writing this story, you only have two more chapters, please, you owe it to your dedicated readers to finish the story. Again, sorry if I'm being a total prick but it's just goes to show how much I love your story and want you to continue writing.