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Chapter 28 - YES! I am absolutely sure about the adoption thing. But oh my God. Kyle better be lying. Because I love Rane so much (and even more with this chapter) and I don't want to start hating him! Oh my God. Anyway, the rest of the chapter made me giggle like crazy. It was so cute and adorable. And was Shawn going to say that he doesn't bring his boyfriends over? I think so. And does his Mom suspect that Rane is Uri's boyfriend? Does Shawn AND his mom suspect that? Goddd. And how did Rane get caught? And does the getting caught thing include telling Kyle something? I bet Kyle proved that they aren't really dating and he told Rane to....I don't know. I haven't gotten that far yet. LOL. It wouldn't make sense to tell Rane that if he doesn't prove he's his boyfriend he's going to rape him. I dunno. Jock logic. It doesn't make any sense. Who is going to save Uri from Kyle? WHO? My mind is going crazy right now. It resembles little frogs jumping from lily pad to lily pad.

Ok, part of me is saying: "OMG OMG OMG RANE IS EVIL!!!!" But then the more rational part is saying: "Nah, she's just doing that to scare us" So Yeah, if you aren't just doing that to scare us. . .I'm going to cry. . . HOWEVER!!!!! I WILL SAY!!!! Once I review, I am going back to read the semi-smutty goodness again!!!!!! THAT WAS SO HOT!!!!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg!!!!!!!!!!! what????? NOOOOOOOOOOO.....that makes no sense!!! kyle is lying right?? right??? why wont you answer me???!!!! omg please update very very soon! as soon as physically possible....preferably within the next 5 mins! lol! loved the chappie!!!!!!!!!!!
KEL

ah, it's been some time. sorry for not reviewing earlier, things are kinda hectic here ^^' but i need a break. so...
before i forget. i LOVE the cherry scene. relly ^__^ i couldn't help laughing out loud xD a much needed laugh it was :]
but i have to admit that i like rane more and more. the more scenes i read with him the more lovable he becomes. looks like he really likes our clueless boy, which makes him kinda pitiful, given that there's really no way uri's feelings toward his brother will change (as we very well know from the short story :P). but no worries, he's bi, i'm more than willing to take him :>

i noticed sth else too. i like scenes when you throw shawn and uri together and cuddling/hugging/clinging/etc :> no matter the excuse :P so of course i liked the pool and storm scenes muchly :D if only uri's conscience wasn't so quick to react ^^'
ah, i hope there's no misunderstanding here. i like rane but i still cheer for the brothers :P
but rane makes shawn jelous... which may be a good thing if it will prompt him to some action ^^ though i still have to give it to him, he's got balls. i mean his signals are more or less noticeable (it's uri who's totally blind to them) and that surely requires a huge amount of courage. i can only imagine the stress he's living in. or maybe it's not bravery but desperation? we have to remember, that (if i understand it well) he's been infatuated with his own brother for quite some time already - the rebellious stage mentioned earlier could only be a failed denial phase...

anyway, can't wait to see how the dinner will look like ^^=
(and sorry for the somewhat scattered review ^^')

hallo!Well,i suppose i just want to say that your story is one of the best stories i have ever read!big kiss

o___O ahhhhhhhh must have more!!!! omg omg omg I wanna knowwwwwwww~~~
Somehow I'm taking it Shawn already knows about them -___- plus he could have always read their msn message flipping through the histroy of the comp...
> < I want more!!!~~~ lol

Shiiiitttt.

I love this story so much.

*is not articulate five minutes after she wakes up*

I had a dream ten minutes ago (Yes, I was sleeping.) that Shawn and Uri did the dirty. Then they went to this... class thing and basically made a ruckus. Then they sang this really provacative song to this room of expectant mothers; I think that Uri had had a baby. I'm not sure a the moment. Anyway, while singing, Uri wore a dress. A really pretty mocha gown with a crossed back.

... xD

*curses overactive imagination*

*hopes you don't think she's a freak*

... xD

Anywaysssss, of course I love your story. It's definately my favorite original, if not my favorite on this site! =D Please update soon!

Wow, that was a great chapter. I bet there will be some tension around dinner time. I wonder why Shawn is so mad at Rane? Keep up the great writing.

Hee, I'm glad you like my SN. ^_^! I thought it was pretty nifty.
Ahhhh~ You have me hooked, seriously. You won't believe how high I jumped at seeing 'Chap 27' under the title of your fic. xD
I must say, this really is my favourite story on here. I mean, ack! Everything is so perfectly done! None of this 'Easy relationship stuff' or 'Insta-relationship stuff' that some other similar fics have. I love, love, love the unsure, hesitant angst going on. Keeps me wanting for more while keeping me satiated at the same time. I'm seriously loving it. It's almost like I don't want to see Shawn and Uri get together because Uri's angsting and lusting is just so damn cute. (But! Of course... I eagerly await the day when it does happen. =D)
Oh! And the length of your chapters! This really is the perfect fic. xD There's nothing more rewarding than settling down to a niiiice long chapter of Shawn and Uri. Brightened my day, so thankyou. xD

Okay! Mindless ranting fan-ness over. Keep up the fantastically good work, and avidly waiting the next installment <3

P.S My exams went really well, so I must also thank you for your amazing teaching. xD

i loved it!