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Omgosh! That chapter was soo good!!! Poor Uri! I can't wait to see what happens!!! Update soon!!!!

such an evil cliffy!! I hope rane didnt' really have any part in this... as;ldkfjas;ldf... can't wait for the update to find otu what's going on and who's going ot save Uri!

YES!! NOOOO! you deserve a medal!! Yes-you updated before this saturday! i am leaving for two weeks! im going to be away from a computer for 2 weeks!!! how will i survive!?!!! This chapter was incredible! the dinner scene was great(poor shawn tho) and the little bathroom scene......omg! perfect! so hot! beyond words! GO URI! lol! and the ending....oh you little..! I was on the edge of my seat and almost fell off from shock! WTF!? anyway! Im excited about the next chapter to find out what happens!!

OMFG OMFG

*mental break down*

Rane didn't...no...Kyle's just being a bastard, he has to be...T^T

Though, I would understand (plot wise) why Rane would do something like that....but, OMFG NO!

Either ways, loved the whole boxer thong thing. That was funny. And the kiss scene!

Ugh. There are (in my imagination at least) two possibilities now...either Kyle is lying or Rane really is an asshole. I didn't really like him, but that was mostly because I felt kind of sorry for Shawn. I can understand his anger/jealousy to some extend. But Rane really is the master of manipulation, isn't he? Haha... Wonderful.
Maybe it's just me, but it's like Uriel is really uncomfortable around Shawn because he's so affected by him while Rane doesn't affect him in the same way resp. (*) not at all (unless they're kissing, I guess) Maybe that should make Uriel rethink things again ;)

*God, does "resp." as in respectively even exist? English isn't my mother language and I just looked this word up...huh...I hope it works.

Rane is nice but too nice! He is an expert in love! I know it! I just know some playboy one And Rane is one of them (indeed). He's too manipulative that I can't trust his every word. It would be nice if he indeed love Uriel and not just toying with him. Well, I don't hate jock 'cause my family ( all of them except me) are jocks ( my father, my brothers and my cousins). Rane actually has a broken home? I wonder what happen when he came out. Maybe it was an accident ( Married by accident) between his parents? Poor Rane. Anyway, my answer to your question, I still think it would be Shawn, Why? No offense, I like Rane really much but I don't want Uriel with some one that manipulative such as Rane. I don't want Uri sad and mostly hurt. I think Uri's mother think like that too. But the problem IS Shawn! Rane as Shawn's enemy/rival in love is just too much for him to handle when he love Uri too much that it make him crazy (Shawn is a little ill-tempered). Finally! Do you know that my faily contains fifty persons 'cause my father has five brother-sister and my mother has 10 brother-sister. You may not believe but it's the truth

... Kyle better be lying about Rane setting this up. Or I'm going to be pissed. I really like Tomato Top. Dinner was funny. Poor Uri... his 'boyfriend' is insatiable already~ Please save Uri, someone! *worried* Don't leave me hanging, man.

PS: Now I have the image of Uri giving birth to red haired, perv babies in my head.

Teeta~~~~ I hope you get tons of reviews for this chapter! As always you have done a wonderful job with the development of each of the character's personalities, and despite the pressure of the whole matter, you keep them real (aka... not sexing up just for the heck of it)... it is funny to think so little time has actually passed by in their lives!!!! because there is so much to the story already~~~ HUGS!!! Great chapter!!!MY LOVE TO THE COWS!!!! MOOO! :D And will RP to death if needed.... well... or until I can...

Laaerie

Oh shoot! I had to read the ending over and over again to actually believe what was happening. I cant believe Rane!! Shawn was right all along... I feel so sorry for Uri now. I can't wait for the next chapter^^ I don't mind the wait at all as long as the chapters turn out great <3

u evil evil cliffie monster u luv it need more yay