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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MUST NOT KILL AUTHOR!!!!!! *will weakens as the days without update pass* get the hint, it means u had better update soon or one of us is going to be dead and its not going to be me!!!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ah...zes....interesting turn....
and you know, I won't make any random guesses about Klye's Rane-comment, no use here....
though I don't think Rane has done anything....
probably you being manipulative again...in fact I haven't used the word half as often in my life than I did talking to you....
and shawn.....my guess he decided to trust uri....and that's why he is so layed back.......I don't think he's planning something....Shawn is just to much of a child to keep it secret for long....
and of course there is the "sleepy conversation".....
no comments on that either...
as you put "I will see"....
hmmm....yeah...eventually.....
what else?
should I declare that this is a 100% positive review.....don't know if it's appears to be.....there is a lot of sighing and swoon, crying and screeching missing, but then we had the emotional part just a couple of hours ago.....
so..yeah......great chapter....
mooooo....
(I won't be able to stop doing that for the next 24 hours.....mooooo)
and you know, I won't make any random guesses about Klye's Rane-comment, no use here....
though I don't think Rane has done anything....
probably you being manipulative again...in fact I haven't used the word half as often in my life than I did talking to you....
and shawn.....my guess he decided to trust uri....and that's why he is so layed back.......I don't think he's planning something....Shawn is just to much of a child to keep it secret for long....
and of course there is the "sleepy conversation".....
no comments on that either...
as you put "I will see"....
hmmm....yeah...eventually.....
what else?
should I declare that this is a 100% positive review.....don't know if it's appears to be.....there is a lot of sighing and swoon, crying and screeching missing, but then we had the emotional part just a couple of hours ago.....
so..yeah......great chapter....
mooooo....
(I won't be able to stop doing that for the next 24 hours.....mooooo)
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you're evil. EVIL. i hate you *pouts*
ok, i don't. but you're still evil. i'm going to come down with C.H.A.D. (cliff hanger anxiety disorder) because of you. woe is ME (and probably all the others who are reading your story :P) and it's your fault. feel responsible *nods*
ok, putting this EVIL cliff hanger aside, this was a great chapter. not only well written (which was a given) but full of interesting turns and events. first - rane was serious after all. well, i knew that but still having him confess his feelings... i dunno if i should be happy about it or feel sorry for him. probably a mix of both. as i told you before i love this guy, so seeing him hopelessly infatuated with a guy who can't return his feelings is a bit sad :< so, you better make him happy in the end, young lady! *tries to throw a stern look in your direction but is not used to doing this so fails miserably, making you laugh*
another thing - his mother sooooooo knows about uri being gay, or at least suspects strongly. his father probably doesn't but men are always more dense, so i don't blame him :P first - she interrogates uri about his girlfriends and such, then she insists so much on inviting his boyfriend (pretended or not) to dinner and then interrogates the latter. talk about instinct. what makes me wonder is how she feels abot it. you know, first being catholic and all, secong - it's her SECOND son who's gay... even i she doesn't know for sure she's behaving somewhat wary. i bet it'll make her sad, most of all. she loves her sons too much to hate them for what they are. now, that makes me wonder why uri doesn't know about shawn being gay. i'm sure it wasn't the parents' idea to keep it from uri, since looks like other family members (grandparents) know about it. so i'm guessing it was shawn who asked them not to tell uri. kinda makes me laugh, cuz uri is doing exactly the same. he's not so much afraid to come out to parents as to his brother... poor boys ^^'
the night scene and those unconscious "i love yous"... *purrs* as much as i love rane i have this OTP thing... once i decide two ppl should be together i cheer on them till the end, no matter how great the third party that comes around later is. tough luck, rane. i still pray for your happiness, but uri is off limits.
that doesn't mean that i'll be unhappy with a bit of kissing and making out between uri and rane, as long as the brothers end up together in the end :> (i'm evil too, i guess)
lol, poor shane. he seems to think rane and uri really are together and probably thinks that during the trip and sleep over the two of them will be at it like rabbits, given all those teenage hormones and all. he's so jelous xD
kyle's a dick and probably a closet gay too. so afraid that he probably doesn't even see the closet he's in. and now he's not only about to beat the crap out of uri but also mess with his head >.< there's no way rane would do sth like that after all... have i already told you how evil you are to live the part at that? no? you're evil. very much so >.< *starts to get frustrated again*
*looks up*
i just can't write shorter reviews, can i? and i bet i didn't even write half of what i was planning to when i was reading the story. hope you don't mind my babbling here :P
a, i cześć cześć :D i'm also glad to know that one of my fav story writers is polish too ^_~ plus i can totally understand you preferring to write in english. i prefer to read in english too, at least slash stories ^^' seriously... in polish it just... doesn't sound ^^''' i got over blushing while reading quite some time ago, but i bet that i would start again if it was a slash story in polish.
and i have to admit you're damn good at english. i tend to be proud o my skills in this area given that i started learning it relatively not long ago but writing a story in it is a whole... different story :P respect :>
*giggles*
uri's typos remind me so much of... me XD i bear the title "queen of typos" and for a reason :P my friends are so used to it that they understand me no matter how self-willed my fingers tend to be. it amazes even them :P i'm so much worse than uri, but then "english is not my first language" is always a good excuse ^_~
and oh, i saw you have an AIM screen name. if you don't mind chatting with such a terrible speller as myself my screen name is oOkashkaOo :] ("kashka" itself is always already taken *pouts some more*)
so, i'm sitting here, biting on my knuckles and waiting for more. i won't pretend that patiently. mind that if i eat half of my fingers waiting it's your fault :P
*hugs*
kash
ok, i don't. but you're still evil. i'm going to come down with C.H.A.D. (cliff hanger anxiety disorder) because of you. woe is ME (and probably all the others who are reading your story :P) and it's your fault. feel responsible *nods*
ok, putting this EVIL cliff hanger aside, this was a great chapter. not only well written (which was a given) but full of interesting turns and events. first - rane was serious after all. well, i knew that but still having him confess his feelings... i dunno if i should be happy about it or feel sorry for him. probably a mix of both. as i told you before i love this guy, so seeing him hopelessly infatuated with a guy who can't return his feelings is a bit sad :< so, you better make him happy in the end, young lady! *tries to throw a stern look in your direction but is not used to doing this so fails miserably, making you laugh*
another thing - his mother sooooooo knows about uri being gay, or at least suspects strongly. his father probably doesn't but men are always more dense, so i don't blame him :P first - she interrogates uri about his girlfriends and such, then she insists so much on inviting his boyfriend (pretended or not) to dinner and then interrogates the latter. talk about instinct. what makes me wonder is how she feels abot it. you know, first being catholic and all, secong - it's her SECOND son who's gay... even i she doesn't know for sure she's behaving somewhat wary. i bet it'll make her sad, most of all. she loves her sons too much to hate them for what they are. now, that makes me wonder why uri doesn't know about shawn being gay. i'm sure it wasn't the parents' idea to keep it from uri, since looks like other family members (grandparents) know about it. so i'm guessing it was shawn who asked them not to tell uri. kinda makes me laugh, cuz uri is doing exactly the same. he's not so much afraid to come out to parents as to his brother... poor boys ^^'
the night scene and those unconscious "i love yous"... *purrs* as much as i love rane i have this OTP thing... once i decide two ppl should be together i cheer on them till the end, no matter how great the third party that comes around later is. tough luck, rane. i still pray for your happiness, but uri is off limits.
that doesn't mean that i'll be unhappy with a bit of kissing and making out between uri and rane, as long as the brothers end up together in the end :> (i'm evil too, i guess)
lol, poor shane. he seems to think rane and uri really are together and probably thinks that during the trip and sleep over the two of them will be at it like rabbits, given all those teenage hormones and all. he's so jelous xD
kyle's a dick and probably a closet gay too. so afraid that he probably doesn't even see the closet he's in. and now he's not only about to beat the crap out of uri but also mess with his head >.< there's no way rane would do sth like that after all... have i already told you how evil you are to live the part at that? no? you're evil. very much so >.< *starts to get frustrated again*
*looks up*
i just can't write shorter reviews, can i? and i bet i didn't even write half of what i was planning to when i was reading the story. hope you don't mind my babbling here :P
a, i cześć cześć :D i'm also glad to know that one of my fav story writers is polish too ^_~ plus i can totally understand you preferring to write in english. i prefer to read in english too, at least slash stories ^^' seriously... in polish it just... doesn't sound ^^''' i got over blushing while reading quite some time ago, but i bet that i would start again if it was a slash story in polish.
and i have to admit you're damn good at english. i tend to be proud o my skills in this area given that i started learning it relatively not long ago but writing a story in it is a whole... different story :P respect :>
*giggles*
uri's typos remind me so much of... me XD i bear the title "queen of typos" and for a reason :P my friends are so used to it that they understand me no matter how self-willed my fingers tend to be. it amazes even them :P i'm so much worse than uri, but then "english is not my first language" is always a good excuse ^_~
and oh, i saw you have an AIM screen name. if you don't mind chatting with such a terrible speller as myself my screen name is oOkashkaOo :] ("kashka" itself is always already taken *pouts some more*)
so, i'm sitting here, biting on my knuckles and waiting for more. i won't pretend that patiently. mind that if i eat half of my fingers waiting it's your fault :P
*hugs*
kash
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One moment, I thought Shawn was going to accompagny them for the trip !! Anyway this chapter is very funny !! And angsty !! My god ! It was a trap !! I think it's the bitch... Ran's ex...
Can't wait for the next chapter... Until then... MOOOO !
Can't wait for the next chapter... Until then... MOOOO !
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Rane to the rescue! Or Nate or Dan! Anyone! Quickly!
*slaps forehead* That note had ‘TRAP’ written all over it but Uri, dense as he is had to fall for it. *shake head* stupid stupid… I hope Rane will get there in time so they can still go on their trip and have fun, without it having to be a nursing back to health sortof trip
To answer your question: Yes , I like Rane. I LOVE Rane! And I don’t believe even for a second what Kyle is suggesting at the cliffie. I like how you developed his character more. For instance it’s nice to know he came out to his family. It means he had at least one serious boyfriend before. You confirmed what I suspected for a while now, that he is actually a very warm and sensitive person hiding behind a jock-mask. I think he’s been hurt a couple of times before and he’s just protecting himself by playing the tough guy who laughs at everything. I like how he finally really opened up to Uri. The bathroom kiss was breathtaking. And no, Rane liking Uri for real was not a surprise. Well for Uri it was but not for me anyway. I’m kind of sad Uri’s so indecisive about it. Why couldn’t he just say yes I like you too? *sigh* It would be so much easier for him if he could just forget about Shawn and be with Rane. I’m sure Rane’s a good catch, on many levels. Well since Rane is the sort of guy who gets whatever he wants it can’t be too hard to persuade Uri. But I still wish Uri felt more ‘in love’ with him… Maybe he will be after being rescued from Kyle?
Now about the dinner: First of all watching family photos is so not something you do when you bring a friend home. It’s even way beyond the first date in my book… So this whole dinner thing already started with a ‘date’ sortof feel, which may have triggered Rane’s insistent behaviour. Even Uri’s mother acts as if she knows they are boyfriends. Especially the dinner interrogation, but even before. Does she know/suspect they are more then friends? I mean even Uri of all people suspects she knows something… Did Shawn tell her there might be more going on? I loved the hostility between the rivals. I’ve been waiting for that since you introduced Rane to the story. Poor Shawn with his poisonous comments… You got me laughing hysterically at the image of Shawn plotting to stab Rane with his fork and Rane spitting in is soup. I could actually visualize that too. I loved the whole tensed situation at the dinner table. And the fountain of soup. That one made me laugh hysterically too.
During the scene in the bathroom I suspected they’d get caught. I would like that. Honestly, I love Shawn too, I mean I really don’t hate him or anything and he’s lots of fun but, I would like him to walk in on Uri and Rane kissing or something. This is going to sound very mean but I want to hear his heart break when his suspicions are confirmed. So yea I’m still completely rooting for Rane, and I’m impatiently waiting for the boat trip. I wonder if Rane will ever get into Uri’s pants… (with permission, preferably)
There, an extra long review, returning the favour ^_-
*slaps forehead* That note had ‘TRAP’ written all over it but Uri, dense as he is had to fall for it. *shake head* stupid stupid… I hope Rane will get there in time so they can still go on their trip and have fun, without it having to be a nursing back to health sortof trip
To answer your question: Yes , I like Rane. I LOVE Rane! And I don’t believe even for a second what Kyle is suggesting at the cliffie. I like how you developed his character more. For instance it’s nice to know he came out to his family. It means he had at least one serious boyfriend before. You confirmed what I suspected for a while now, that he is actually a very warm and sensitive person hiding behind a jock-mask. I think he’s been hurt a couple of times before and he’s just protecting himself by playing the tough guy who laughs at everything. I like how he finally really opened up to Uri. The bathroom kiss was breathtaking. And no, Rane liking Uri for real was not a surprise. Well for Uri it was but not for me anyway. I’m kind of sad Uri’s so indecisive about it. Why couldn’t he just say yes I like you too? *sigh* It would be so much easier for him if he could just forget about Shawn and be with Rane. I’m sure Rane’s a good catch, on many levels. Well since Rane is the sort of guy who gets whatever he wants it can’t be too hard to persuade Uri. But I still wish Uri felt more ‘in love’ with him… Maybe he will be after being rescued from Kyle?
Now about the dinner: First of all watching family photos is so not something you do when you bring a friend home. It’s even way beyond the first date in my book… So this whole dinner thing already started with a ‘date’ sortof feel, which may have triggered Rane’s insistent behaviour. Even Uri’s mother acts as if she knows they are boyfriends. Especially the dinner interrogation, but even before. Does she know/suspect they are more then friends? I mean even Uri of all people suspects she knows something… Did Shawn tell her there might be more going on? I loved the hostility between the rivals. I’ve been waiting for that since you introduced Rane to the story. Poor Shawn with his poisonous comments… You got me laughing hysterically at the image of Shawn plotting to stab Rane with his fork and Rane spitting in is soup. I could actually visualize that too. I loved the whole tensed situation at the dinner table. And the fountain of soup. That one made me laugh hysterically too.
During the scene in the bathroom I suspected they’d get caught. I would like that. Honestly, I love Shawn too, I mean I really don’t hate him or anything and he’s lots of fun but, I would like him to walk in on Uri and Rane kissing or something. This is going to sound very mean but I want to hear his heart break when his suspicions are confirmed. So yea I’m still completely rooting for Rane, and I’m impatiently waiting for the boat trip. I wonder if Rane will ever get into Uri’s pants… (with permission, preferably)
There, an extra long review, returning the favour ^_-
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, Rane is gonna get it. *stabs Rane* Ehem.
Hey, I really hope that Shawn comes and saves the day because that would be awesome and..yeah. Hopefully you won't be tricky and make the whole thing be a misunderstanding because that would really just suck. -.- It's about time for Uri to appreciate his smexy brother.
Wonderful chapter as always!
Hey, I really hope that Shawn comes and saves the day because that would be awesome and..yeah. Hopefully you won't be tricky and make the whole thing be a misunderstanding because that would really just suck. -.- It's about time for Uri to appreciate his smexy brother.
Wonderful chapter as always!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are sooooo evil *glares. I really hope that Rane did not help Kyle at all, I really do, although, I suppose it would help the plotline. It's odd because I can't really imagine Uri being with either rane of Shawn...as in I think he sorta belongs with both. Of course this isn't a hint for a threesome whatsoever *winks*
Luv ya!
P.S. Don't take too long to update...talk about a cliffhanger!
Luv ya!
P.S. Don't take too long to update...talk about a cliffhanger!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just thought for a moment maybe Uri is adopted.....???
And I don´t trust Rane, don´t know why but it´s a fact...and again a cliffhanger (aaaaahhhhhhhhh why, that´s not fair, I need to know what will happpen!!!!!!.....)
(you´re from Poland????)
And I don´t trust Rane, don´t know why but it´s a fact...and again a cliffhanger (aaaaahhhhhhhhh why, that´s not fair, I need to know what will happpen!!!!!!.....)
(you´re from Poland????)
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the hell... HOW CAN YOU TORTURE ME LIKE THAT... T.T Update PLEASE!
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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh teeta; the queen of cliffhangers, I bow before you. hihi. Yes, I can totally see the inspiration you had when writing this! Everything is being build so beautifully, and it has to be said; mooo.... and again MOOOO!!! Okay, okay I calm down now. Uri's mother is so cute worrying like that, aw, mothers... and Shawn whit his jealousness and his pancakes; awww... and Rane he is manipulative! and Kyle, KYLE is EVIL little BASTARD! YUP... and it truly was an evil cliffy *nod*
Sorry for this weird review; family bugging me! Bug, bug...? BUGG?? (ötökkä?...never mind) UMMM; me tired, MOOO! Okay now I should just shut up *NOD* hihihiii
Sorry for this weird review; family bugging me! Bug, bug...? BUGG?? (ötökkä?...never mind) UMMM; me tired, MOOO! Okay now I should just shut up *NOD* hihihiii