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Sorry, for the third review. The second one was becouse my computer played tricks on me and now I want to say something smarter... Everybody left you such a pretty review and I am only screaming. So... When Uri found a note I already knew that it's from Kyle which make me happy, very happy he he Hmm... I don't think that Rane was involved here, when Kyle said it first I didn't think even for a moment that it can be true... but then this whole "you are so good with lieing, Rane" thing... It possible that Rane had some kind of deal with Kyle, maybe he started falling for Uri not according to plan, or maybe it was also just a trick and he wanted to kiss Uri because he is hot and nothing more... Or maybe maybe maybe... Update, dammit:P But please don't make it to easy for Uri, it would be a crap if on the very begining of the next chapter, Rane would come with mission "rescue Uiel". I quess after Uri won't come to meet him, he will start looking, meet Dan and Dan will tell him that Uri is with him at gym and CRAP don't let it happen to fast, please hey, or mmmaaayyybbeee Kyle will rape Uri and leave him at gym and nobody will come looking for him because he is fishing with Rane, but when he won't come home his mom will call Rane and Rane will tell her that Uri didn't appeard so he thought that he choosed to stay (in this version Rane is EVEIL) and they will start panic and call his friends and Dan will tell Shawn about the note and Shawn will find broken Uri and beat the crap out of Rane and kill Kyle and go to jail (kidding) and nobody will ever find out and now I am going for a smoke Bai Bai

yay updates! but ohhhhh cliff hanger!
:)))

T_T LOVE! (So friggin happy)

Chapter 28 -- Poor Shawn is so jealous and is afraid that Uri and Rane will do something Friday night or Saturday. Uri seems to have found himself in a difficult situation, though I doubt Rane would have set him up like that. If he did, shame on him and I hope Shawn beats the shit out of him! Excellent update, Hon! Can't hardly wait for the next one!

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formerly reviewed as Spiral
Hey Teeta, sorry I didn't get around to reviewing your story last chapter. I finally got a real account! The screen name spiral had already been taken so as you can see I went with Downward Spiral. Did I tell you that I LOVE this story!!?!? We'll I do. And this is one of the best ones on the site, so much detail and plot, I think I could read this story many times and still love it.

Hmm, I wonder now if Uri will get with Rane? I'm still rooting for Shaun! I hope that nothing bad happens to our favorite little boy on his "fishing" trip. And why did Rane set up Uri with Kyle, was this all for some bet? Did Rane owe Kyle a favor? I'm excited to see how it all plays out in the next segment(they are too long to be called chapters)!!
love and loyalty, your devoted reader/reviewer/rater,
Downward Spiral

O.O *shock* Must resist bazooka impulses....(has not review in while Paris was calling!) The shock is "wow". DIE KYLE JUST DYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T_T Uri (I want one of my own)nyooooo.......
Plz update soon.

that was just evil. please update this soon!

theres no way i believe that Rane set that up, Kyle is just trying to make him lose his confidence and trust in him.... i hate cliffies *glares*

*waves Team Shawn flag* Go Shawn Go! Now is the time to go flying in to be the hero and rescue the damsel in distress! (sorry Uri, but you currently fit the cliche) I'm just gonna wait here until the next update, don't mind me...

A CLIFFHANGER!? A CLIFFHANGER LIKE *THAT*?!
oh you really are evil teeta. pure evil.
and as a matter of fact. yes, i do still not like Rane, im a Shawn gurl through an' through :P
and in light of these new developments i guess i like the better one! ha!
now, you must type away quickly quickly to give us the next installment to this fabulous wonderous story!!

and dont you even DARE leave the next chapter as a cliffhanger like this! theres evil and then theres just plain cruel :D
anyway, loving this story, truelly i am. and man, pancakes and shawn, can we really blame poor uri and his raging hormones? i dont think so...

despite the fact i dont like Rane, that sure was a hot kiss! but i have to admit, i was *dying* for shawn to come in and go in a rage before sweeping uri off his feet with a hot, mind blowing kiss and then they procede to do it on the bathroom floor....
with the strawberry condom....
and then again in the shower....
and then again on the bed....
*cough* well, yes... um.... great chapter! i love how your chapters are always nice and long :D
do you have any idea how much longer its going to be?
anyway, WRITE MY DEAR!! WRITE!!