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You're evil.

xP.

Leaving us with that! And what the fuck? Kyle better be playing mind games. Grr.

What?!? I'm so confused now. Please help me out and write more :)

Wow, so much happened - I don't know how to respond xD Dinner was fantastic .. I couldn't stop snickering. Though the end freaked me out. I really doubt Rane would purposely set up Uri with Kyle.

Cows are eviiiiil *_*

Very nice chapter.. but wtf about the ending.. Rane?
So please do type quickly *bows down*~ I'll massage your fingers~

Hell~~

Hello again! Lovely chapter. But then, all of them are. xD
I forgot to mention!
My exams went really well, so thank you for helping me in my study and being a good teaching person! xD And keeping me away from temptation.
I loved the part with Rane. D: It made /me/ feel torn between him and Shawn, poor guy. You're a fantastic writer.^^

This chapter is my favorite so far. The kiss scene in the bathroom is hot and Shawn is really acting strange lately. I wonder if Rane really set up the meeting between Uri and Kyle. Somehow, I think Kyle is secretly gay. Please update soon. The suspense is killing me. ;) Just kidding!

I had a very bad day,but when i saw your new chapter it was like a ray of suneshine to me.Honestly!It is very good,and it kept me on edge like the rest of your story.Your writhing style is wonderful,very fluent and easy to read.Uriel is such a sweet thing,and i hope he will get his true love in the end,whoever that is of the two.Well i suppose Shawn is my favourite.Oh,and i apologize for any gramatical or spelling errors i've made.English is not my first language and i haven't used it in a couple of years,so it is a bit rusty.And i also wanted to tell you that i've read many fiction stories,some of them original some of the not,but you,as an author of this lovely story,are the only one who ever inspired me to write a review and make me want to say something nice. Happy writhing,and 'til the next time! :o)

Hmm... I don't know, I think Shawn will eventually crack and peep at their online conversation, it just seems like the easiest way for him to find out about Uri and Rane's little "agreement."
And >__< eeek!! did you really turn Rane evil (like I predicted? ;) *sniff* who's going to save little Uri then
?___?

OMG!
OMG!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And how could you stop in moment like this? I am going to faint! So. You are from Poland...? Me too:P But I don't like to write in polish at all. To jak s³uchanie piosenek Wiœniewskiego i debilizmu Giertycha And please upload soooon. I have to read the last part once more or maybe twice he he

OMG!
OMG!
OMGGGGGGGGGGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And how could you stop in moment like this! You evil tease, you are even worse then Shawn and Rane together, ne Uri? nod nod Uri says so and Uri says he wants to be raped, ne Uri? nod nod You see. So. You are from Poland...? What a suprise! And please update sooner this time pretty pretty please and Uri too nod nod