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Hallo!Nice chapter,as always.You never disappoint.I was just wondering if there is going to be some action soon?Some development with Shawn?And what about that birthday party of his?I can't wait to see what will happen!!!I like it when Shawn is jealous,and i hope he will make some move soon?Any hints,maybe?Any?
I'm eagerly awaiting each and every chapter of yours.I'm a bit impatient because it takes so long,but I understand.And all the waiting pays out each and every time!
Many hugs and happy wtiting!:o)

GUH am I evil for disliking Rane because I'm rooting for Shawn to become Uri's boyfriend?! ;_; And now you're making Rane all nice, and perfect, and, and, I feel so evil ...;_; but then ..Shawn...at home....without Uri... T-T that's not right either...gahhhh y'know what? Just make Rane into some evil galaxy takeover person so then we can all have a reason to hate him so Uri will realize he likes Shawn and then yeah! ...(Just so I won't have a brain meltdown over who Uri should go with....i_i)

right....strange as it may sound: I suddenly don't trust Rane anymore....that's probably 'cause everything is going so well for him and he is sooo charming and if I were uri I would melt....but I'm not uri and I'm a person that's not good at trusting at all....right now everything is just too perfect (well...a normal person wouldn't call almost-rape perfect, but I'm talking as a devoted rane fan)...and I don't think that's gonna stay this way....so I'm perpared for whatever you will come up with...
hmmm.....now.....let's get to the part where I praise you and give you cookies...
very well done, as always....loads of ranieness.....lovely....
I exspecially liked the part where the wall in uri's dream goes soft to match the pillow he really feels...
and all the angsty parts in there were superb as well....realistc and still scary and the writing reflects uri's emotions...
I'm wondering how you wrote that...if it gave you lots of trouble or just came to you naturally.....it's one of those things where emotions are just so much more important than clear reasoning, where acting on instinct happens and at a certain point it get's even close to some drug like stuff...(well...knowing you you won't take the last bit as a compliment, but you should)....
though I'm wondering now what comes next....not much hints there....
we'll probably get some shawn now....well....I'm not complaining.....

and thank you for your review.....people seem to like jermaine and I wonder what I can do to get them to like len a bit more....anyway.....for the next chapter I have to solve a big problem and it might take some time....of course talking to you would help there, but it's not likely to happen anytime soon, so you'll just have to wait till I solved it myself....
but you'll get your one shot...it's been planned and startet since you gave me the challenge......you'll like it...loads of Ro and Ry history....

Evil Kyle! I'm glad that Rane made there in time to save Uri, he and Dan both. And now I really feel sorry for Rane, for loosing his first boyfriend like that, it's just horrible.
And poor Uri too! Anyone would be shaken after that, I'm glad he has Rane to help him and aw, now it's official! Shawn would/will surely go crazy whit the knowledge! I can just imagine.
Great chapter, again =D Thank you for the read! *Hugs*

and now...back to RP, hihi.

-C-

Ew, Kyle's an asshole. Like, really. And I can't say that I feel sorry for him one bit because of his parents.
I like how Uri's still not completley convinced, that Rane had nothing to do with it at first. I'd be suspicious like that, too. Uh, and Caden's story made me feel kinda sick. I don't know, it's horrible because it sounds like something someone who's mentally not very strong might do. Made me feel sorry for Rane, too. Still. I can't help the feeling that he has some sort of superior motive. But maybe that's just me being paranoid when people are too nice. xD
Anyway. You described the disgust and the remaining fear really good. I mean, of course, everyone reacts differently, but it fits Uri's personality. Very nice chapter!

Make out! make out! I'd cheer for something nastier then just a make out but after the sharing of bad expieriences I guess they don't feel that horny... *smacks self for the dirty thoughts* I feel so sorry for Rane. I could guess there was more going on behind his mask of confidence but a boyfriend who comitted suicide that's really horrible. He deserves to be loved now so I hope Uri won't break his heart. I'm glad Uri finally made up his mind and consciously choses to be with Rane. That makes me a very happy fangirl! Did I mention I love Rane? Can I be captain of the Rane team? Lol this reminds me I started a dude's fan-club this week with a friend since we're both fans of a certain guy we know, lol. I should make her read this story... *nod to self* Ok I'm so tired I can barely see what I'm typing... It's really late and I have to go to work tomorrow I just had to finish reading or I wouldn't have been able to sleep. Thank you so much for updating. I love you and I love this story. *hugs* I'm going to take a look at your site too later and maybe even drop another review, one that makes sense^^

Throughout Ch.29 I kept screaming in my head: "Rane needs a f***ing hug Uri!!!" along with a few other curse words =P But Uri cuddled with him which is even better! ^__^ Coming out is hard, huh? Well, I hope Uri feels better when he finally does. And hopefully he and his brother will become closer *wink, wink* *nudge, nudge* Keep 'em coming; I love Not Supposed To!

bahhhhhhh great chappie!!!!!!!!!!! holy shit i hate kyle he is SATAN!!! but i love every one else, i like a bit more of shawn in the chapters, but it was made up for by bed time snuggling! once again you are brilliant! update as soon as humanly possible please, and how many chapters are you expecting to write?
KEL

*high Squeaky voice* Rane? What the hell? *faints*

*several hours later*

Okay. Wait what just happened. I'm sitting here thinking that Shawn should just jump Uri and then hes going to be raped by Kyle!! T_T What has this world come to? Shawn better save him. If Uri is raped I will turn emo. *nods enthusiastically*

PS
Loves the story. I cant wait until the next chapter. I think you should get this developed into a book.

Rane.. he's good for the boy XD atleast there isn't the overwhelming guilt of incest XD