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... assault.. almost rape..

... OMFG...
*dies dumbfounded on the floor*

*cough* Very nice chapter..
Keep up the good work hon~

Hell~~

Don't get me wrong here, I do like Rane but..I think I like Shawn a bit more. xD

I really can't wait until Uri decides to tell his family about his 'situation.' Lol, and I wonder when he'll finally find out that Shawn is gay. >.> Poor little Uri.

Um, I hope there's not going to be Rane/Uri smex. Not that it would be that bat but but but..Shawn is supposed to be Uri's first. Rawr. >.<

Sorry about the sleepdrunk post, lol, I should have taken more time to write my review… here’s the real one:

Okay you made it clear again that Kyle is a bastard. We understand his motives, he is screwed up and shit but obviously that is no excuse to go molesting people so I hope Rane hurts him. I kept wondering what Dan and Rane discussed when Uri couldn’t hear them. I guess Dan wanted to tell Uri’s parents but I wondered if that was all… Whatever they said it’s good they went to rane’s place after all. Rane needed the talk and the comfort at least as much as Uri did. I mean Uri’s been shocked and disgusted but Rane is the one going to the most pain in this chapter. Anyway, what I really wanted to say is that I really feel for Rane. I had expected he had some sort of secret. I knew he was hiding behind a mask of confidence while he is really insecure and sensitive, but I didn’t suspect anything like this was the cause… He talks as if Caden’s suicide happened a long time ago but he’s what, 16? So it couldn’t have been that long since it happened. I wanted to punch Uri for not… trying harder to make Rane feel better, and less guilty. I can understand why Rane blames himself even though he knows there is nothing he could have done. I’m glad Rane has a friendly and understanding dad who he can talk to.

I am glad Rane and Uri are together for real now, but I’m scared that Uri will hurt Rane in the end. Not deliberately of course, but he’s so dense, and the thing with Shawn will pop up at a certain moment… I hope this relationship lasts a long time really. Even if there may ever be something between Uri and Shawn I want Rane to be his first. Definitely. I want them to stay together for ever and ever too. Rane is worth it, Uri! I guess the people who still dont like/trust Rane are the ones who are desperately waiting for Shawn and Uri to get together, but I am not one of them. Shawn is a load of fun and I honestly like him but… you know, I said it all before... Shawn should find a cute ansd sweet boyfriend too. Maybe Nate, lol. Is he gay? Hm, guess not… lol.

Chapter 29 - NO! Why did you have to tell me that? I was SO sure. Oh well. Well, I don't know. What about...their Mom could have had a SECRET LOVER? Hmm? Hmm? *waggles eyebrows* OR! OR! Shawn or Uri could be from their Mom's SISTER! The one that died, right? Even if I'm right you're obviously not gonna tell me, so...yeah. Anyways, I'm a little confused about Rane. I guess he didn't plan the whole thing. Why would he do that when his boyfriend committed suicide because he was raped? Yeah. So, It's safe to say that Rane didn't do it. But I wonder why Uri didn't think that Rane set him up? I mean, even though Kyle is a bastard and is probably and most definently lying, I thought Uri would of...you know. Yeah. Not sure that makes sense. I guess Kyle just wanted Uri to hate Rane. Anywayssss...great update!

I am sooooo happy Uri is all right. I mean when you left it at the part in Chapter 29...I also had a heart attack. I love Uri and Rane. I think they make a great couple. You know what would really be a good idea to have a Shane/Uri/Rane 3-some. If only Shane and Rane can get over their animosity towards each other. Well...keep up the awesome updates. I can't wait for more.

Think in 3-somes.
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.(^-^)

Awww~
Yes! Another torn between them. You suck! XD (Meant in the kindest possible way.)
I love the way you torture me and everyone else. It impresses me to no end how you can so drastically alter people's opinions of the characters. Well, for me anyways.
I hate whoring myself around or whatever, but I'm struggling for feedback on my own twincest fic. I know you're probably really busy and things, but if you get a chance, I'd really appreciate it if you gave it a quick read over or something.
It's the only one I have, so if you go to my profile, it shouldn't be that hard to find. xD

Thanks! And looking forward to another magical chapter.

I wanna know how long is it gonna take for those two to get together. i mean they've had plenty of chances, and i am getting kind of tired for one of them to make a move. i just hope he doesn't do the deed with rane, that'd put me off,

awe rane's so cute and hopeful...


kyle is a discusting icky person


yay for uri!!! im very glad he didnt get raped


URI HAS A BOYFRIEND!!!!!!!!!! WOOO !!!!!!!!!!

Ch 29: I'm so happy that you updated! I love that you haven't given up on this story, it has so much potential. So cute! I'm happy the story is turning out like this. Uri needs to get with somebody, and Shawn seems really slow to come around at this point. I wondered how long it would take Rayne to develop feelings for Uri. That was horrible what Kyle did to Uri though, you shouldn't play with my favorite character like that! :) Well now they don't have to pretend to be boyfriends, cause they really are. I love your huge updates, please write more!
love and support,
DS

this chapter is not unrealistic in the slightest. you write angst and turmoil so well that this might be one of the most well written chapters actually. don't get me wrong, i love uri's funny inner monologues and the great banter between him and shawn, but i've been secretly rooting for the story to take a darker turn just 'cause it adds a certain kind of depth that draws you in. and i especially like how now rane is looking better and better (yet, amazingly, retains a mysterious air and i seem to share the paranoia with your other reviewers that something is up with him still!) and there's no way to tell who uri will end up with, how his family will find out he's gay (i assume they will eventually) or how shawn will handle this.

btw... one thing i've been wondering.. obviously shawn loves and is trying to seduce uri, and there have been hints that uri is adopted into the family, which shawn and everyone but uri himself knows- so, shawn seemingly feels nothing against being with uri potentially. but they all know that uri believes they're blood brothers, so why would shawn think his seduction could work, with incest being a general taboo and all? doesn't he think the brother thing AND uri's apparent hetero status would prohibit uri from ever reciprocating his feelings or recognizing the signs of shawn's crush? wouldn't it be weird trying to seduce someone who believes you're his biological brother, thinking it could work like any other regular relationship? why is he trying so hard and why does he think this could get him where he wants to be with these things standing in the way? sorry for my questions, i truly don't want to be spoiled haha, it's been bugging me but that's the perk of being a fan- i love your story and it's so much fun trying to figure it out! :D