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Yeah yeah yeah... I know I suck and haven't reviewed in forever and a day. I truly just feel like I would repeat myself, "It's really good, I LOVE it, what's gonna happen next??" @.@ All of these are true. ^^ So, the reason I'm reviewing is actually to ask... What the heck happened to Shawn? I think Rane and Uri are cute and poor Uri and Rane's character history is a great touch to the story... but I can't get over not seeing enough of Shawn! :( I miss that guy. What is he planning next to woo his "love"? Or is that dissolving?

Looking forward to the next update!
Your loyal reader. (I seriously check every day to see if a new one is up!)

grrr... uri's pissing me off. idiot boy. shawn should be his knight in shinning armour. not stupid rane (yes yes, hes SUCH a nice guy and really hes *wonderful* and all but i still dont like him one bit. completely illogical i know.) it was as short chapter! something im not used to from you! but, this only means you must update even sooner. ...and have shawn in the next chapter. because a chapter simply isnt a chapter without shawn in it. Ranes a chapter hog.
ooh! and more uri/shawn angsting and hot hot moments... and no Rane, thats always so much fun. so, thats my wishlist for the next chapter!! :P doubt i'll get it but i can still wish cant i!
anyhoo. i liked the chapter, new layers for rane and all that.

How nice! I really looked forward to update! And no, I am not disappointed:) I didn't think that Uri will be raped, that would probably screw up everything, it just shouldn't happend, not yet HE HE okey, I am only talking like that, I like it dramatic (not neccesary rape), You made it perfect, I quess I stopped where it should so story didn't change from 'I am in love with my brother' to 'I am srew up, raped kid, should I kill myselh?'. Anyway, this chapter was really interesting as a whole, of course I am not excepting traumatic actions and stories aboud dead boyfriend every time, it's more like that Your writing skills are getting better and better, really. I couldn't wait for update so I printed first seven or eight chapters and started reading more carefully from the very begging... there is so much diffrence from first and last chapters that it looks like dieffrent story... Nevermind that first chapters are really less interesting, they are mostly about two things-puking and 'I can think like this about my brother...but he is so sexy...no, no, bad Uri'. Okey, not that I am complaining-still the whole story is wonderful, I just wanted to make feel good so don't get me wrong:) And plaese don't keep us to long this time, bai bai

Chapter 29 -- Nice save for Uri. I am glad that Dan and Rane were able to help him. Don't get me wrong, I don't dislike Rane, I just like Shawn better and hope that Uri can get some confidence and listen to what Shawn is trying to get him to hear. Who am I kidding? Guys have no clue!!! Great chapter, Hon. Can't wait for more.

*hugs*

Meleth

OMFG

OMFG

*stabs Kyle* Evil! Evilevilevil. Though I do feel sorry for him, being gay...and not realizing, then his father being a homophobe, that bites. But, still, it be no reason to attempt to rape poor Uri!

And, omg, Rane! T~T *wibble*

Gee...once again I can't figure out if I like ShawnUri or RaneUri...

YAY! *waves Uri/Rane banner* That is all. The Caden thing was so sad. Kyle's an asshole. Rane's optimism is wonderful and infectious. And Uri's so cute when he thinks he's taking a big risk *giggles*

I love this chapter. I knew that Kyle was gay and that was so nice of Dan and Rane for saving Uri from being rape by Kyle. Rane's father is so accepting. Keep up the great writing.

so glad to see you updated. also glad to see a little more about rane even if it is sad. also glad to see uri getting together with rane for real. they go well together i think and i'm starting to like them together better than uri and shawn. which makes me a little sad because i know that uri and shawn are supposed to end up together eventually and i don't want them to anymore. but i suppose i'll like the story either way. probably. can't wait for the next update!

wow ! It was a very intense chapter ! The "almost" rape scene was very realistic !!
Thanks for the cookie... It was delicious !! :P
Well, Uri said YES to Ran, but........ I want Shawn ! Please give him to me... ^^

AHHHHH!!!! Thank the LORD!!!!! Not that I really doubted Rane. He's such a good b/f!!!! Although I really missed not having Shaun in this Chapter. And of course the smut was greatly missed, but I think under the circumstances, it's understandable why the smut was not there this chapter hee hee. I can't WAIT for more!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR I MIGHT. . .UM. . .KICK A WALL? HEH