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i read the reviews for your latest chapter curious of reactions and was surprised by the negative responses. i don't agree with them personally, but i feel bad for you- i hope you're not too bothered by negative feedback.

this whole story about the brunette and wolf and prince has me more intrigued than ever about how uri is really connected to this family. when they went to visit the grandparents, i recall a clue about... i think it was an aunt who had died in the family, which always lead me to assume that uri is related to everyone. but now, depending upon how much truth is in the story... uri may not be related to them (biologically) at all. if shawn is the wolf, then that doesn't matter, since he's not part of that family either. maybe he was adopted as well- at three? i'm not assuming for sure rane is prince crimson, though that does look to fit. i'm wondering about the greedy but not evil step-mother (haha i won't even go to look up the full name- that was pretty damn funny) has for an angle. like, she's alright but she's so nice to the brunette because she's promised the prince he and (presumably) uri will hook up? how can that even translate to modern time marriage? one random idea i had was that she wants in on life insurance uri will get when he's 18 LOL i don't know, honestly.

i didn't feel like this was a filler chapter.. uri is becoming physically comfortable with shawn again without freaking out, and he doesn't seem head over heels in love with rane. i still think something is "off" with rane that i can't put my finger on. i have faith that you've got a lot of great twists and plot surprises up your sleeve, so it's more than worth the wait to read this whenever a new chapter is out. :) i thought the story telling was cute and hilarious, and know that uri's confession to his parents must be looming up ahead. i REALLY love your story, hope you take all the reactions (negative or otherwise) with a grain of salt when you need to- it's your story, and only you know what's best and where it's going, so keep on writing, please! :)

wait im soo confused, didn't shawn's birthday already pass...wasn't uri his slave for his birthday.... anyway regardless i thought this was a good chapter but i did find the substory (fairy tale thing) quite boring really. oo and URI needs to tell his parants. asap....i think his mom already knows tho...

Well, Rane and Uriel are cute together. I hope they will always like that but it's impossible cause it's incest afterall. T_T Anyway, I wonder if Shawn take the bedtime story from true life such as Skipping brunette/ beauty is Uri, Prince Crimson is Rane, and Wolf Black is Shawn. It IS really interesting. It'ss a nice story eventhough crappy at the same time. Bye.

I'll be completely frank, the chapter felt like filler for the most part, aside from a few important things the chapter reminded me were still issues. Yet, it was still incredibly fun to read somehow. It was filler, but it was GOOD filler that I'll probably end up re-reading. No matter what form it comes in, I can't help loving this story and checking for updates nearly every day.

Completely and utterly addicted!

I'm back!
Sorry, I was away for a while on business....with -no- internet! The horror!
Anyway! This chapter was great, I loved how the bedtime story alluded to Uri. Hehe. Uri's the Skipping Brunette, Rane, Prince Crimson, and Shawn the Black Wolf/Prince. It was such a cute idea! ^_^
Anyway! I'm so glad to read the chapters I missed while away. Poor Uri! I hate Kyle. And I have the feeling he's not completely gone from the story.
Please update soon!!!!!!!
Much Love!
Dee

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This is so wonderful. Possibly one of my favorite stories on AFF.net. Your storyline is gripping and your characters are so real and engaging. Who could not sympathize with Uri? The dynamic between him and Shawn is riveting and the confused conflicting emotions that Uri feels towards him is spot on. I love Rane though...I can't help rooting for him! Some of your chapters get a little bogged down in the minutia of Uri's day to day life, but otherwise, you have a great story. I can't wait to read more and am looking forward to your next update. Keep up the excellent work!

Oh Teeta!! Where have you gone?!?! I'm dying here for an update! Okay, not really, but still. I'm loveloveloving it that there has been more of Rayne now! And little Uri has agreed to become his boyfriend?!?!? I so cannot wait to see what happens! And will Shawn find out soonish? I know that in your little side story (was it Top Dogs? Sorry, i've a memory like a sieve ) Uri does mention the fact that Rayne is his bf to Shawn.... BUT that was a crackfic, wasn't it?
Hmmmmm, I think i'm becoming too immersed in all of this and my head is going to explode. Take it as a sign that you need to update soon to keep me alive~!

ha...the world has come to an end...
my stepdad decided that he's gonna lock yahoo, because he doesn't like it....
I can still open it, but I'm not quite sure if anything else works, so if you see me as online, just give it a try...
if it doesn't work I might as well just die....
oh...and now I have to take all that back...for he says he's gonna unlock it....I swear he just likes to tease me....
so my life continues as usual....
loads of teeta....
yay...ehm
I'm still writing on your challenge....it's six pages so far....
I'll let you know as soon as I post it...
and I'm gonna go and look at another room tonight...
sevenish....
so wish me luck again...

ps.: what are you painting now? the toiletseat?!!!!

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you were gone. like in just not there and since you didn't come back I'm sooooo worried that something might have happened to your computer. I really hope everything's ok with it and that you didn't loose any chapters....it happened to me once and it's just painful to loose everything...I had to abandon 5 fanfics and my very first original one. Cried for days.
So I really, really hope everything is fine with yours.
Hm....I started writing a bit and when I say a bit I mean two sentences ouit of which I only like the first one.
argh....
but at least I'm writing.
I really have to lock myself into my room and only listen to english radio or stuff....or skype with you, but I stille need the equipment, so that's not gonna work anytime soon.

And I'm waiting for your edits so I can finally figure everything out....
I tell you as soon as I have an idea.
And if I appear to be online, please contact me, because I think I kind of miss you (ok, that sounds like I'm an emotional retard...;))

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