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Good God... That is the absolute WORST cliffhanger. EVER.

In other words, thanks for another awesome update! Looks like things are really coming to a head, but with the addition of Max it looks like there might be a just a little but more angst than I can deal with coming up. I pretty much had a gut feeling Shawn had feelings for Uri, but I never would've though he'd tell somebody else about it. Seems like the subject is bound to be thrown out in the open very soon, and I simply CANNOT WAIT for the next update. I'm completely addicted to this story, but I sure hope your lazy streak is at an end. xD The chapter was well worth the wait, though! Wow! Everybody's gonna need some boxing gloves and tissues handy in the next chapter.

Wow!!!

And I mean wow!

I’ve been pestering you with this birthday party, and here it is, finally!

Teeta, this is one hell of a chapter! As I said it was so worth the wait. I am ashamed to admit this, but I’ve been online all afternoon waiting for your chapter(though I’ve already admitted to myself that I’m addicted, I haven’t been aware to what extent…now we know :) )

I also have to admit that this is nothing like I’ve expected it to be(it never is, which is why I love it so much).It was serious and darker than the previous one. Mysteries are being solved, and I can actually see those little wheels rolling inside Uri’s head. He is finally admitting some things to himself, poor thing. And considering how naïve and blind he was(and is) I think that he is doing very well with all the news.

Now, what worries me is this Max guy.

I think that this Max(I have to say that I dislike him already, and very much as a mater of fact) is one of Shawn’s past lovers or he is only a friend, but want-to be-more-than-just-a-friend type of friend, I’m not sure yet(though the first option is more likely to be the one) and he obviously knows about Shawn’s feelings for Uri, and he is jealous(bastard!!! though I can’t blame him).I’m wondering how he found out about it(if I start thinking about it now, a blood vessel is going to pop out somewhere in my head),but he probably used it to make Shawn invite him to a party(bastard),because he was obviously not invited before that phone call.

And Shawn? Well, poor Shawn! What he did was an act of pure jealousy and anger that usually accompanies it. I think he is already regretting it. But I don’t think Uri is going to see it that way, even though he is smart, he is still naive, young and inexperienced. And he doesn’t even dare to think that it was him they were talking about. I just hope Shawn won’t do something stupid with this Max. One kiss was enough.

Once again this is one hell of a chapter! Teeta, you are a magician *bows*!And I’ll continue to read this story no mater how much I have to wait for the new chapters.

Big,big,big hug!

Darma


Oh,and btw that was one big evil cliffhanger!!!

I just have to add something else that I’ve noticed.

The talk between Shawn and Max after the party, when Shawn says:” I told you that he is NOT!” And Max says: “Open your eyes, Shawn EVEN if he knew…”

He is not what? His brother?

Urgh, you are killing me over here! And I love it.

I can’t wait the next chapter!

One more hug for you!!!

Darma

OMG! Over a month of waiting and you leave it there! How could you? That is a terrible thing to do to your readers. Grrr and that is a terrible thing for Shawn to do. It better have been some sort of test that Uri just passed. On another note, how many of Shawn's friends know about his obsession with Uri? At least Max and Maya...

I love this story so much.
But when are they finally ganna get together.
hope you post another chapter soon.
<33 sarah.

OMG! Shawn was an asshole! God Uri should have gotten a chance to punch him. Wow. If someone had done that to me they'd be out cold! I really cannot wait to see what happens between them next!

you have no idea how many hearts you ripped out of me!! ToT why do you have to be so cruel and break them apart just when they're getting close.

Okay. Here is what I have to say. I love and hate your story at the same time. Now let me elaborate. I love it because it's so good. Brilliant, I say. Brilliant. The way you write it spectacular, from details to just plain interactions between the characters. What I don't like is the fact that the story is not going the way that I want it too, which it totally pissing me off. But I still love it. Please make Shawn and Uri get together. Not that I hate Rane or anything but Shawn is like...perfection. I'm dying here when all I see is Rane's name is every sentence. You sure do know I to torture your readers. And dang it Uri for not seeing the love and affection that Shawn is showering him with. He is so dense. Worse then me. Geesh. We all know they're totally in love with each other. Come on. One of them needs to grow some balls and just confess. Most likely, I prefer Uri to do so, because Shawn tried and Uri is. OMG. DENSE!!! Still please let there be at least a little hope for me. Come on. Shawn!!!!!!! and Uri!!!!All the way. I'm so excited for the next chapter. Once again, love your story! XD
(don't mind my other review if it appears)

Where is the next chaper, you lazy bum?

I kick you into gear, huh? It must be my incessant nagging. Speaking of which...... It's been a month! A month of no Shawn and Uri and Rane!!! You're doing this to torture me, aren't you?!?! You are!!

Seriously though, I want to read the rest of that bedtime story, even if Shawn is terrible at telling them, and Uri keeps interrupting. And will poor little Uri just have to share a bed with his big brother forever? Could make for some more interesting situations. Kekekekekeee~