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“Apparently I’m as blind as it gets.” No shit Sherlock!!

Hello again! You cleared up a lot of dangling issues in this chap. It was really funny, Shawn and Uri confessing to each other they are gay while lying in the same bed as if that’s totally normal. Especially Shawn’s close contact whispering how it’s so good to have gay sex was something I wouldn’t see most brothers do... Hilarious. He could just as well carry around a T-shirt saying “I want to lay my brother” and Uri still wouldn’t get a clue. Seriously, brother’s don’t biter each other’s ears. Loved that part. And the story of the BOY named skipping brunette was pretty obvious too. I guess Shawn was really going for it until Max burst his bubble.

I’m glad Uri finally came out. As I expected everyone was supportive. I’m also glad he finally started acting like a real boyfriend toward Rane. Honestly though, I think Rane deserves better, Uri is in love with someone else after all.

I like Max, I really do. I can’t help it. I always feel attracted to the person who acts like a jerk. And I like the idea that he’s one of Shawn’s former lovers or boyfriends. In any case Shawn trusts him enough to tell him the truth, so whoever he is he must be a good friend. He probably acts with disrespect toward Uri because he knows the ignorant, blind ‘kid’ is breaking Shawn’s heart and he doesn’t see it.

I love that you have finally shown us Shawn’s weak side. We knew he was desperately in love with Uri but now we finally see how much it is destroying him. Max is right. The fact that Uri is gay doesn’t change anything at all, on the contrary, I think it makes Shawn’s situation even more painful. You’ve opens a lot of doors again. I can easily imagine the two brothers overthrown with jealousy, both showing off their respective lovers in attempt to make the other more jealous. Oh the drama! This is totally the part of the story I’ve been waiting for! I LOVE IT! I can’t wait to read more! Please *kneels down in awe* write more soon!

A lovely chapter, the story made such a big step forward. Thank you! Umm... I was joking with the lazy bum, hope it didn't upset you... I know a lot of things can come up.

And the plot thickens... A lot.
>_< But I don't want that ... Max getting between them. I don't want ANYONE between them. >_<
Not even Rane... even If I like Rane....
>_< Max is nasty and he is not helping. And...

WOULD SOMEONE PLEASE TELL THE TRUTH ALREADY!!! *pulls her hair stressed*

Chapter 31:
Whoa! Can't tell you how excited I was when I saw that Not Supposed To had a new chapter!! I love it, though the ending made me sad...I don't want to see cute, little Uri hurt. Shawn is just jealous of Rane, he doesn't really like Max. This has to be one of the best chapters out yet and you left the ending with a cliffhanger (meanie). No, I love you Teeta you have written the best story I've ever read. Have you ever thought about publishing? You could make this into a book, that's for sure. I hope you've been feeling better. Now I'm going to have to wait another agonizing month for Ch.32...the wait will kill me. If you are well enough and have time I wish you would put out the next chapter in two weeks.

Much love, a loyal fan,
Downward Spiral

ok, that one was good :)
especially at the end - I liked it, it had the drama...
now, please, try not to wait so long before you submit the next chapter - don't let the tension get down ;)
good luck;

Woman! You simply must stop dicking us around! The suspense is KILLING me! Other than that yet another great chapter of one of my favourite stories. Props to ya.

oh, teeta...
this is sooooo good.....
I love this chapter......
and the end makes me remember what it was about (fan)fiction that made me read it in the first place (five years ago)- it takes my mind off my own life....my own twisted lovelife, that I really need to escape from right now.....
and to think of the fact that for about half an hour I wasn't thinking about the infamous julius.....
thank you, thank you, thank you

and the rest of the chapter was superb too.....you really sorted it out well, all the things happen in the right places and ny respect for you increased again.
(and I'm wondering why I never thought about the possibilty of such a person like max coming to the party....so silly of me)

so lovely.....

hope to see you on yahoo a bit more often.....
and sorry for not saying goodbye the other night....
I'm terribly busy lately and came to the conclusion that I need somebody to really talk rory through....somebody who writes like I do and is obsessed like I do.
but with everything that's going on right now I can't see a chance of finishing the fifth chapter anytime soon, but I'm writing.....

anyway,
I'll see you around

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I love your story, it's one of the best I have ever read. Please update soon.

I was late to a mid-term to read this, and I don't care, it was worth it. You're hard work paid off, this had so much greatness, I am still reeling from the effects.

AWESOME update!! I'm so glad Uri finally realized he's in love with Shawn!! i can't wait for the next one!