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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear, dear Teeta! You updated~!!! I hope it wasn't the kick in the behind that got you updated?
This chapter.... Oh, Uri! I seriously want to slap him sometimes, he really is just THAT dense. I wanted him to just tell Shawn that he is going out with Rane, and have Shawn be like "No! Uri's Mine!". Seriously though, I read this chapter right when you updated, and have just kept re-reading it over and over and over again. Max seems so evil, but I guess he's not. Shawn's evil though, kissing Max like that. I'm guessing that he's going to regret it later though, right?
I think that this chapter was great - you needn't stress over how you may or may not like it, as long as it gets your narrative through properly. I just hope you don't keep us waiting as long for the next update!!!
This chapter.... Oh, Uri! I seriously want to slap him sometimes, he really is just THAT dense. I wanted him to just tell Shawn that he is going out with Rane, and have Shawn be like "No! Uri's Mine!". Seriously though, I read this chapter right when you updated, and have just kept re-reading it over and over and over again. Max seems so evil, but I guess he's not. Shawn's evil though, kissing Max like that. I'm guessing that he's going to regret it later though, right?
I think that this chapter was great - you needn't stress over how you may or may not like it, as long as it gets your narrative through properly. I just hope you don't keep us waiting as long for the next update!!!
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October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the chapter, it was definately worth the wait!
So... I'm guessing Max is Shawn's ex-boyfriend who wants him back, so he told him about Uri and Rane kissing (or maybe more?). The bitch!
I was expecting this story to end when the brother found out both were gay and both loved each other, but I'm guessing there's still more to it!
I feel like shooting down that Max right now!
Oh and I'm guessing that, like I guessed a few months ago, Dan really is ending up with Rane (I hope so too!).
Really, really, really looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh, one last thing, I keep wondering if you just forgot about Uri's stalker who appeared in the first coupple of chapters. Hmm can't even recall her name right now, but I keep hoping she shows up for a bit of comic relief :D
So... I'm guessing Max is Shawn's ex-boyfriend who wants him back, so he told him about Uri and Rane kissing (or maybe more?). The bitch!
I was expecting this story to end when the brother found out both were gay and both loved each other, but I'm guessing there's still more to it!
I feel like shooting down that Max right now!
Oh and I'm guessing that, like I guessed a few months ago, Dan really is ending up with Rane (I hope so too!).
Really, really, really looking forward to the next chapter!
Oh, one last thing, I keep wondering if you just forgot about Uri's stalker who appeared in the first coupple of chapters. Hmm can't even recall her name right now, but I keep hoping she shows up for a bit of comic relief :D
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!
You are a mad genius. You are my IDOL! That latest chapter was LOVE! So much delicious, fattening angst!
Poor Shawn and Uri!!! Just when things looked like they were turning out for the better and then this!
Haaa... you have me waiting in suspense for the next chapter. xD
And it's exam time again! Yay for me. I look forward to having another chapter to procrastinate with.
Love always!
I'll be updating my own fic eventually when exams finish and I'm FREE! Which is late October, um... just in case you were wondering, but I'm sure there's a lot more important things going on than that so... Yeah! Catch yah next time and tacke care! <3
Controller of the Sandwich Monkey.
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Omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg!
You are a mad genius. You are my IDOL! That latest chapter was LOVE! So much delicious, fattening angst!
Poor Shawn and Uri!!! Just when things looked like they were turning out for the better and then this!
Haaa... you have me waiting in suspense for the next chapter. xD
And it's exam time again! Yay for me. I look forward to having another chapter to procrastinate with.
Love always!
I'll be updating my own fic eventually when exams finish and I'm FREE! Which is late October, um... just in case you were wondering, but I'm sure there's a lot more important things going on than that so... Yeah! Catch yah next time and tacke care! <3
Controller of the Sandwich Monkey.
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a heart wrenching moment. Especially the last couple of paragraph. Shawn's reaction to Uri near the end almost made me cry. Keep it. Feel the supporting aura I'm giving you. <3
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*GASP spazzes* OMG XD I'm so happy you updated!!!
EEEK!! Sorry, I'm so giddy!! It was AWESOME! There were so many hilarious moments I was scared I was going to laugh so hard and loud I'd wake everyone in my house!!
>XD I'm so happy Uri told Shawn (and vice versa)!! And I almost DIED when Shawn was all 'DUDE! I'M gay!!' (Lol, I know he didn't say that exactly, but it seemed like one of those back-hand-upside-the-head moments.) I literally gasped and said "No waaaaay!!!" out loud! XD I couldn't believe he told him!
Lol, I'm so bouncy whenever you post a new chapter!! Please post another soon!! (^__^ But don't feel pressured or stressed, your chapters are always worth the wait!)
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EEEK!! Sorry, I'm so giddy!! It was AWESOME! There were so many hilarious moments I was scared I was going to laugh so hard and loud I'd wake everyone in my house!!
>XD I'm so happy Uri told Shawn (and vice versa)!! And I almost DIED when Shawn was all 'DUDE! I'M gay!!' (Lol, I know he didn't say that exactly, but it seemed like one of those back-hand-upside-the-head moments.) I literally gasped and said "No waaaaay!!!" out loud! XD I couldn't believe he told him!
Lol, I'm so bouncy whenever you post a new chapter!! Please post another soon!! (^__^ But don't feel pressured or stressed, your chapters are always worth the wait!)
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October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I NEED MORE!!!! I hate cliffhangers!!!! Ugh, when do they find out?! I CANT WAIT!!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEAL!!!! Fricken awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't take so long this time. Though it was worth it, you left me at a terrible cliffhanger. You evil person you =P
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You know what? This was such a brilliant chapter, I feel like the story came back alive again, there was a bit of repetitiveness earlier. But this chapter was exactly what the story needed, I was glued to the computer screen and couldn't stop reading even though I'm sooo tired and should be sleeping instead. Plot got thicker, and now there's some real suspense. And I'm so glad you introduced Max, especially as he seems to be aware of Shawn's feelings. Well done!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;~; ....the ending of this chapter was SOOOO sad!! SOOOO not fair!! Poor Uri and Shawn!....
ok! enought of me being sad!! lol ^^ once again another amazing chapter!! Keep up the amazing work!!! <3
ok! enought of me being sad!! lol ^^ once again another amazing chapter!! Keep up the amazing work!!! <3