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He said IT !! OUF !! Uri was brave...
Who is this Max ? He's a little bitch !! Well, he wants shawn for himself or what ?
Finally, Uri admitted his feelings... Poor boy !

whaaaa it's super good, but oh so weird. i don't know what to think about the incest thing... even if they turn out to not be siblings, they have grown up together as siblings... and shawn is not fair to uri - he's the older brother, and should be more considerate abut uri's feelings, since it's of course very confusing to uri about falling for your brother
can't wait for the next chapter, i need it now! not knowing what will happen distracts me. and this week i have SO much to do :( ;)

I love the update, and I've already left a review. However I wanted to apologize for a past review I gave that really had no constructive criticism, it was just my childish way of being anxious for updates at that current point in the story. My way of banging my fists on the table and throwing a silly tantrum. I promise in the future(and as I did for the last chapter, under a different handle) to restrain my idiocy, because I do truly love this story and look for updates all the time.

All the best!-Spry

(Kneels in reverence of author and chapter) This last chapter “31” was truly in my humble opinion the best in emotional depth and secrets revealed / confirmed. It is these type of situations that make me glad I jumped on to witness and thoroughly enjoy this emotional roller coaster that is Uri’s life.

Oh wow.

What a great chapter. That's one stepping stone we've all been waiting for, Uri confession to being gay. Now more than ever I'm interested to see who he'll end up with; Rane or Shawn.

And, this Max character...for a minute there I thought he'd do something to Uri. I was in fangirl freak out mode, let me tell you.

And, the spin the bottle part...THAT was pure gold. I almost died laughing, having to stuff my fist in my mouth so I wouldn't wake up my nephews!

I can't wait for the update, as always.

oh my gosh!!! such a good cliffy!!! Update soon! soo angsty!!!

OMG YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! I want ya to know, that I've recently gotten back into Harry Potter fics, so I'm always in that fandom now. This means, YOU ARE MY SOLE REASON FOR BEING HERE (the fandom I mean). Cause I love ya that much!!!!! hee hee I LOVE this chapter!!!! But OMG SHAWN!!!!! SHAWN YOU SUCK!!!!!! I know I know, he's just upset or whatever, but I really don't like this Max guy too much, but then I might like him. I can't tell if he's trying to be the good guy, or is just an asshole. I'm SOOOOOOO glad that Uri came out to his family!!!!!! It seems that we are starting to hit that critical point in the story where there could potentially be some hot n' heavy Shawn/Uri lovin'!!!! (Yes I am the perv) Needless to say I can't WAIT for more!!!!! Oh, and the reason I didn't review right away is b/c my other laptop has to go to the hospital for some surgery, so I had to drag out the old laptop, and get it up and running! But I am DEFINITELY still here, and anxiously awaiting more!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

...WHAT THE HELL? Okay, before I start ranting, I must say that this chapter was brilliant and I missed your story. ALRIGHT. ANYWAYS, what the hell just happened? From what I GATHER, Max likes Shawn, they may have dated in the past and still sort of...casually have sex and...the reason Shawn's upset is probably because he saw Rane kiss Uri. I think. Although, I don't remember Rane kissing Uri recently...but I think I sort of remember a quick kiss at the party. Umm..yeah. BUT WHY WOULD SHAWN GET SO MAD AT URI? SURE HE'S JEALOUS BUT...WHAT THE HELL? BUT EVEN IF HE NOW KNOWS THAT URI IS GAY...THEY'RE BROTHERS (Unless he's adopted. BUT THEN HE STILL HAS TO TELL URI HE'S ADOPTED)! So...there's no reason for Shawn to get THAT upset. Maybe he's not upset because of Uri? But then that doesn't make sense because he's hopelessly in love with Uri. He even made a fairytale about him! Lmfao. Prince Crimson. I CANNOT get over that. Prince Crimson is so obviously Rane. Anywaysss. Yeah. I'm all confuseddd~~~. But brilliant and wonderful chap. It made me giggle like crazy.

Goddd.
I have to go read over the last part for the fourth time.

YOU BETTER UPDATE SOONER!
OR ELSE I'M GOING TO GO INSANE!

SERIOUSLY.

I WILL!

I'm kidding.
Take your time. <3

I love these long chapters.
They're to die for.
They're my crack.
Haha.

omg omg omg omg!!!!! who is this max person!!!! ahhhhh best chapter yet!!!!!! i love you i love you i love you! i now sound like a stalker but seriously i love this story! please update as soon as you can!
kel

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRGGHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*ahem* Well, now that that's out of the way...

I love your story. It's really great. And don't get me wrong, I'm all about building up the tension between eventual lovers, but.....My God, I just wanna slap some sense into Uri. AND Shawn.

I will not sit here and rewrite your plot, but please just lie to me and say that they'll at least make up in the next chapter. =P