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ok. yup the chapter was hot. smuuut, yay! And I agree with Rane, this playful side in Uri is FUN, yes, lets keep him! And I like the two of them together, I do! And also I feel bad for the way Uri's and Shawn's relationship has gone to. Both jealous and thinking that the other hates the other? So sad =( But once again this chapter was HOT,

Oh and did I meantion that I find this hot? heheehe... *sorry, crazy mood here* More Rane/Uri smutness, pls, =D And not that I wouldn't like to see some Shawn and Uri too....

Really good chapter and as always I'm confused of who to cheer for and who like the best :P

-C-

Ugh. This chapter was absolutely amazing. I'm so in love with you right now, Teeta. Uri's grown up, hasn't he?! I'm SO proud of him. I know he'll always love Shawn, but for him to think he's getting past it? That's a maturity boys usually don't have, and I love it. Ugh, again. And Rane is so wonderful, the little imp. I love what he does for Uri, bringing him out of his shell and putting a smile back on his face even when Shawn and Uri are fighting. It's great. He's the ideal boyfriend for Uri right now.

UGH. Such a good chapter. I really hope that Uri's clear-head and new-found calmness will help him deal with Shawn's anger. On a sidenote, even though I know he's probably not a bad guy like Kyle is, I really hope Max gets run over by a garbage truck, because he is NOT the ideal boyfriend for Shawn, who seems to be so unhappy and...aggressive now. *SIGH*

Best of luck with the next chapter, and thank you so much for dishing this one out. I loved every second of it.

~Lee

Oh, and by the way, I'd like to note that your story is probably going to be one of the first pieces of original fiction where fans actually have SHIPPING WARS over the characters. I can already hear it now: Shawn x Uri, true love, for true (?) brothers! Versus - Rane x Uri, chicken soup for the fangirl's soul! Oh, and for the select few... Shawn x Rane, the pairing for the derranged and clinically insane!

I think I'll stick to my new OTP of The Beast x Uri's Sweat, for now.

~Lee

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ain't this supposed to be shawn/uri,not uri/rane thing.A scene was hot but come on,I already started to like a s/u pairing.This chapter kinda f's it up for me but I liked it anyways,a little.Sooooooooooooooooo pwease get shawny and uri together.pwease

Wonderful chapter. When Shawn and Uri were arguing I thought Shawn is going to hit him. Seriously.

And what happend to little shy Uri? That was hot.

...Make Shawn and Uri happy again. 32 is depressing. :(
I nearly cried. lol..

NO! Evil author you! Shawn and Uri forever! *Fangirl goes running off wildly** T_T I'm giving you the puppy eyes. Don't do this! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I mean I do love Rane. But I wanttttttt someeeeeeeee Uri/Shawn lovin'!!!

oh no now i think i like rane better :( loved this chapter though it was awsome

Oh man. That was SO fucking unbelievably hot! *wishes Rane would pop Uri's cherry already! XD PERV* Anyways, Shawn is being such a dick weed. Is Uri not realising Shawn is implying he's a skank or something? Oh doesn't matter... What matters is that you update this MUCH sooner! This rules so much. Oh my god. I think I am in love with a story!

Aww poor Shawn, poor Uri. I really, strongly dislike Max. Ebil person, kissing Shawn... well Shawn kissed him. But still! Anyway yet another fantastic chapter that leaves me wanting more! Good luck writing the next chpter, hope you update it soon!