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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person angelxreverse
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't...(SOB'S:-() Shawn and Uri are ment for eachother .Normally i never read incest except a select few .But this is at the top of my list and im so in love with the Idea of Shawn and Uri .....you can't break them up ...... Phuleeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzz!!!!!!!!
person JV2
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First, before I forget: AHHH CLIFFHANGER!!! You know how to tease me just right!!

Eek! Oh my god, oh my god, oh. my. GOD. Eeeeek!! <333

Totally NOT expecting that! Wow. Lol, way to go Uri!! I don't even know what to say about that except keep it up! :D (No pun intended.)

*happy sigh* ^______^ I love it when you update...



person JV2
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I know I already reviewed, but I can't stop being all giggly!!

I just wanted to say I absolutely love you, your story, and all its characters (except Max, I don't think anybody likes Max, lol. He's stealing Shawn away!!) It's so awesome and neat to see how every single chapter, your writing gets better and better!!

Its so fun to see the progression of the characters and your writing!!

XD Lol, I totally want to see a Max vs. Uri confrontation.

And I can't wait to see what happens with Uri and Shawn and ahh!! Everybody!!

<3
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Well that was a twisty turn...
person leanne
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAHHHH!
I dont like it when they fight!
I hope Shawn and Uri make up soon.....

I know that you don't want me to be depressed for too long so put another chapter up soon, okay?! *nods*

:D
I really love this story. Its been my favourite one on this site since you started. Thankyou!
person Wolfy
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stayed up until 4:30 reading this last night. I sure hope to see more soon!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!
person miles
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! But... what's happened ? It's not possible !!
What are you doing to poor shawn ?
I think he's going to explose !!!
I thought, that he's going to become Uri's first... *Snif*
Well... Uri and Rane are cute together but... *Sigh*

Can't wait for the next chapter...
person Fain
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! As much as I like Rane, he's a great guy and all...ShawnxUri! This chapter just left me with more questions. And poor Shawn and his jealousy. Find a better place to direct the resulting anger Shawn!