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not really a flame or anything, just saying that I didn't really enjoy last chapter.

omg, thank you soooo much for updating. The day you updated, I had a REALLY important test to study for so I was like "AH! I want to read it so badly but I have to study!" >_< Then right after I took it (it took like 4+ hours, seriously!) I got back home and immediately headed for the computer. It was so worth it XD That was the best hand/blow job scene ever! You did so perfectly on it, it wasn't too short and quick like most of them are. I can't even imagine how orgasmic it's gonna be when Shawn and Uri finally go at it. I haven't read your PWP side story with them yet. I'd rather be patient and wait for them to come together on their own (pun =P) rather than jump into it like that. I'll probably read it after Not supposed to is over. I'll read through tears ;__;. But for now it's still here so, hurry with the next chapter please! =D

wow. now imagine what it'll be like between Shawn and Uri ^_~. Good good that will be hot and wonderful and I'll squeal a whole lot for it finally comming. Of course Shawn doesn't hate Uri. Just like Uri doesn't hate Shawn. Its the kind of thing two people look back on and laugh at the crazyness of the missunderstanding. *hugs teeta* i await with much eagerness for your next chapter.

i really really like this :)
i can't decide who i want Uri to be with more though!!!
even though Shawn is being an ass, you still have to love him :)
and Rane is an amazing character!
i just...GAH! am addicted to this story and NEEEEEED more lol.
i'm getting this feeling that something bad is going to happen though...

oh....he was about to say it, wasn't he?
shawn, I mean. almost telling uri that he's not just his brother.

hmmmm.....eventhough I had already read the rane/uri part, it's was still good to see what you made of it. you put an edge to it. a shadow lingering over it, because of uri's reasons for getting intimate. the guilt he feels that shows he subconciously knows he's not in love with rane and never will be. it's gonna make it easier for him to leave him, because he sort of already knows, that he's doing wrong staying in this relationship.

also liked the whole shawn/uri-conflict and wasn't bothered by the time jump at all. it's rather fitting.

hmmmm.....and the moods are perefectly set. the tense atmosphere at home, then the break at rane's and in the end going back home. lovely.
plus I'm really curious for the next chapter.

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but what was the twist that our friend anon is talking about. the big twist, or rather turning point, was in the previous chapter, wasn't it?
I guess I never gonna understand this girl ;)

OMFG *nosebleed*

Wow! I am SO happy for Uri! Kinda sad for Shawn....but, uber happy for Uri. I can't wait to see what's been eating at Shawn...hopefully it's not that guy, Max. *is shot for lame joke* And, I'm curious to see how Uri and Rane's relationship will change.

Can't wait for the next update! ^-^

i dunno if i should be happy or sad! XD

Awwwwwww... FINALLY Uri is getting some! It was sickening to think Shawn with stupid Max (ugh... I think I HATE his guts >_<). But then, now...I'm also feeling bad for Shawn because he KNOWS sometghing happened.

*scratches her head* I don't know anymore what I want. *grins*

THANK YOU for a new chapter!!!

Uri finally got over Shawn, thanks to Rane, I like that! I was starting to feel really bad for Rane because even though Uri said he was his boyfriend, he never acted like one. For all this time he was just USING Rane to get over Shawn (The same way Shawn tries to get over Uri by using Max) At first, when Uri started to mention he felt ready for more, I panicked because he was saying it for all the wrong reasons. He felt guilty and wanted to prove something, that felt very WRONG. For the last few chapters I was scared Uri would break Rane’s heart and I’m glad he didn’t. I guess he finally accepted it, and he finally realized what he has, and how fantacsic Rane really is, and how lucky he is because Rane is so sweet and so patient and did I mention perfect? They were so incredibly hot together! I’m so glad for Rane, he really deserved this. And what made me really happy was how Uri is finally getting over Shawn. I’m glad Rane got through to him and he grew up and gave up the pointless bickering with his brother. Really, really awesome ^^ *performs happy dance with the GO!GO!RANE cheerleading squad*

But now, with two guys in love with the same boy, one is bound to get hurt. Rane finally swept Uri off his feet, which leaves Shawn lost and broken. So, how come Uri is suddenly the most mature of the two brothers, able to let go while Shawn tries to hold on to his immoral desire? I don’t think Max is the bad guy here. Okay he’s a badass and maybe not mr. perfect like Rane, but he can’t be more to Shawn then a mere distraction. I think Shawn’s love for Uri runs too deep. After all he has been torturing himself for years, having these secret sinful feelings for Uri. A while ago, for a very short moment he has played with the idea that it really could work, and that Uri really could be his. The signs were there. But it didn’t work, and the hangover from that is too hard for Shawn. He’s crashing down and Max can’t help him. The sad truth is that he has ruined it himself by becoming so jealous and bitter and hostile.

Did I mention I love this? I love the torment! What will Shawn do when he sees them kiss (or worse) ? Will it break him? Will he find a way to win back Uri’s heart or will he be rotting away in bitterness forever? I hope Uri can keep making Rane happy, he deserves it. But I guess at some point he will connect the dots and find out Shawn is in love with him. That will be the dilemma of the century, stay with his perfect boyfriend or throw it all away for Shaw? I can’t wait to read more! This is sooo gooood ^^