rate_review Reviews

Oh Teeta!

I was honestly expecting you to start off from where you left off in the last chapter, with lots of fighting and angst and yelling. I'm not quite sure whether or not i'm disappointed or not by this though.

On the one hand, you have have Shawn and Uri fighting each other, with Shawn going out with Max (let me insert a big, BIG "Noooooooooooo~!" here), and poor little Uri being insanely jealous, yet not quite seeming to realise it himself....

And on the other hand, you finally have Rane and Uri furthering their relationship!

Part at me wants to scream, "No, Uri, you love Shawn!" but the other part of me is like, "Screw Shawn, he's being a jerk, stick with Rane!"

I absolutely love how you keep your readers hooked - we never know where you might take the narrative next - Just hope that you don't kill me with the suspense in the meantime! Honestly, I check AFF all the time to see if you have updated yet (I'm not on any mailing list, since I don't ever check my emails).

Keep up the good work! Love, hugs and kisses~!

I don't see how it could be going anywhere that I'd like it to, though. Even more drama is being piled on it(And it truly already has a healthy dose, due to the brothers issue, whether its revealed its untrue or not)and more characters are being added that cause chaos and more angst/drama.

I really do love the story, its just hard to read now. My first reaction after reading the last few chapters for the first time was pretty much all 'This will implode in the next chapter and there's no going back to the origins." Already Uri's character is changing fast, and it just threw me off completely. You weren't rude, and I understand, that's just how the last few have made me react. Negatively, for the most part.

I'll admit I may be one of your biggest critics, but its only because I really do love the story. Even after reading each chapter lately and I've said, 'Damnit, I just can't read this anymore, directions, changes, etc" I still find myself checking for updates almost every day. Just don't want it to turn into something like every other story I've read on AFF.

Its bad enough that Uri and Shawn's relationship is going so badly in all aspects, but even worse is that Uri's overall demeanor is changing as far as sex is concerned. I loved the naive, blushing, shy version. Not quite sure I believe the extremely sudden 'comfortable nudity' version. Its more than a little bit like jumping the shark. All I can say is I'll tolerate Rane a bit longer, but if he takes Uri's virginity I don't know if I'll really want to read more. This story truly sucked me in deeply and its one of the fics I find myself reading over and over again, but all I can say is...

LESS RANE, MORE SHAWN!

Please? Pretty please? With sugar on top? What got me into the story in the first place was that it was a bit off plot-wise, but mostly the almighty angst and guilt trips poor Uri puts himself through. If the story leaves that train of thought I think it'll lose a part of what makes it so damn good to chew on. When I saw the chapter title 'Letting Go' I immediately had a bad feeling. Don't let Shawn/Uri go the way of the dodo!

Hmm, I have to say a few things, and perhaps people that I would like to read it will never read it anyway but ...

Anon (2007-11-06 >>> This I think will be end of reading NST for me, sadly. It just isn't going in the direction I like at all, or anywhere in the vicinity. I can't stand Rane. He's just utterly bland and I hate to see the plot leaning his way.)

I’m sorry to hear that, I really am. You were with this story so far but it’s your choice to read it on or stop right now. However, I don’t like the fact that you’re trying to pressure me into writing something that you would like to happen in the story. Plus, you have NO IDEA WHERE the plot is leaning. So there. I’m sorry if I sound rude here but I am upset.

Chaos: (I tried to register for your forum, but for some reason it wouldn't let me.) Why don’t you contact me through e-mail? We’ll try to fix that.

Spotted: (What got me into the story in the first place was that it was a bit off plot-wise, but mostly the almighty angst and guilt trips poor Uri puts himself through.) Be assured that there will be more guilt trips, heavy conscience and hmmm, that’s all I can say, really, without spoiling my story.

That's all, I think, I'm sorry if I offended anyone but it really bugged me.

ch.32

teeta you have done it again! A wonderful chapter indeed, don't listen to the doubters! You have such an amazing talent for writing. The plot has definitely taken an interesting twist though. When I first started reading NST I had expected it to be like any other incest story I've read, but I was really wrong. You have invented so many plot twists and turns, it's hard to keep up sometimes.
I'm glad that Uri is finally becoming comfortable with Rane...though I hope that's not who he ends up with. *wink*
I love that you post extra long chapters, the wait is sometimes unbearable, but I feel really happy when I see it updated. And honestly NST is the only reason I find worth coming to AFF now!
-hugs- can't wait for next chapter,
-DS

This I think will be end of reading NST for me, sadly. It just isn't going in the direction I like at all, or anywhere in the vicinity. I can't stand Rane. He's just utterly bland and I hate to see the plot leaning his way.

Used to be my favorite story. T_T I pretty much skimmed the whole chapter, couldn't stand to read most of it. Depressing.

I tried to register for your forum, but for some reason it wouldn't let me.

Anyways, I wanted to stab at a guess for what could happen.

I think Dan knows something, whether it's that Uri likes his brother, or that Shawn likes Uri, who knows maybe both. I think that's why he's avoiding him, I don't think he likes him...because to me that'd just be too much, between Shawn and Rane another guy in the picture would be overload. To me anyways.

I think Dan's going to tell someone, or do something, so that everyone finds out about Uri and Shawn. Because Max already knows, that's obvious.

It's also at a stage in the story right now where I don't even know where Uri is going to end up, and I can just feel it building up, like the outcome is going to be so..climatic. Anyways, I probably didn't even touch the surface of anything, keep going though, I love this story, you're an amazing author.

omg this is the best fic ever !!! keep it up i'd like 2 see shawn and uri make pieace and u no but i like rane and uri couple max kinda freeks me out but maybe if we had a 4 some of it ^^^ lol but really aosme fic i reAD ALL CHAPTERS AND I JUST WNAT 2 SAY URI IS SO CUTE !

OMG AHHHH I LOOOOOOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOO GREAT!!!!!!!! I'm worried about Shawn!!!!! I'm not sure where their relationship is headed now! It's so sad!!!!!! But I LOOOOOOOVE Rane. GAH I don't know who I like better!!!!! Of course right now I like Rane more, but still I feel bad for Shawn cause he just loves Uri, and it's sad!!!!!! I can't WAIT for more!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!