rate_review Reviews

As much as I'd like to rant and rave and rip out hair over the things that went down in this chapter(and the last few), I'm finally seeing that this is probably the catalyst for the big revelation/explosion. Now that I don't feel like its swinging in such a sure direction I'm definitely feeling hopeful here! Even though there wasn't any positive forward progress for my two favorites in this chappie I still enjoyed reading it. Thanks for renewing my faith.

BAD SHAWN, BAD. I can't wait for my favorite oblivious dopes to get it out in the open, finally! Might have to draw them a diagram, just to make sure.

What an evil cliffhanger. GAWD.

Please update...

OH MY WORD!!!!! I just read your ENTIRE story... Now I'm hooked and need the next chapter... xD I can't wait to see what happens between Uri and Rane, Uri and Shawn, Shawn and Max, Max and Uri, Shawn and Rane... *is buzzed with excitement*... and a satisfied Rane is a funny commodity. I really can't wait to find out why Rane and Shawn hate each other so much... and if what I'm reading into Shawn and Uri is really there, and if it'll happen... sooo curious... SO! you must write more and you must do it soon... my curiosity is as stake!!! ^___^ Good Job~

just took your story and i have only one question : why are you making them (Shawn and his stupid little brother that is)suffer so much if they are to stay together ? Or are they not? Maybe it should be better to send Shawn far from him... So ;ess angst

please I don't want Uri to let go of Shawn...please! The two last chapters were really good, with more action...
please I hope that Uri and Shawn will eventually say they love each other...please...and personnally I don't like Rane...but perhaps it's because I've grown really fond of Shawn and Uri's interactions...so please reassure me!

Wow, I wanted to read all the chapters before I reviewed and it took a long time, but boy, was it worth it! That's really really really really good stuff you got going there!

I was wondering if there is still an active yahoo group(Or something like that, maybe I got it wrong?) for this story? I visited the forum, but it isn't very active, sadly. If there is, could it be posted in the AN of the next chappie?

OH MY GOD!
I love Rane!

This chapter just made me love him EVEN MORE.

If you freak out, just scream.
Lmfao.
Omg.
Love Rane so much.
AND URI!
DOING...STUFF! WITH RANE!
Omg.
Completely and totally unexpected.
This chapter made me SO giddy.
But the beginning made me sad and depressed. =[
Because Uri and Shawnykins are fighting.
Which makes me depressed.
BUT FORGET SHAWN.
Rane has all my love now.
I'm kidding.
I still love Shawn.
But that Max stuff just makes me want to get all...rawr.

Did Max tell Shawn that he saw Rane kissing?
JUST A KISS?
Omg.
I wonder what'll happen when Shawn sees Rane and Uri doing not-so-innocent stuff.
I bet he'll like...SEE RED! And become pretty much enraged.
But I don't like Shawn and Uri fighting.
It makes me depressed.
So, please stop it soon.
I know it won't be soon soon. But make it soon. =[
Sometime soon.

Anyways, we all know eventually Shawn and Uri will get together (who knows when that'll be, though) and I know Rane is going to be crushed and heartbroken. So, PLEASE make him find somene.
Not now, though.
I want to see Uri and Rane have lots and lots of sex.
And make Shawnykins VERY VERY jealous.

God, I love you so much, though. Your writing is like...like...genuinely sweet, funny, and just...it makes you feel cozy. Like I could snuggle up with your story, a blanket, and a cup of tea. And when a story makes me feel cozy, I know I am absolutely in love with it.

Anyways,
update soon!

Sooooo...I was reading over your reviews and I read one by someone named Anon or whatever and it made me really mad.

Maybe you think I'm overstepping my boundaries as just a reader by responding to it but for some reason it made me really pissed.

AND
Here's why:
=D

How can he/she, after only SKIMMING the chapter, declare that they want to stop reading?
I mean, it's physically possible of course BUT if you just SKIM it, you aren't really reading it therefore you probably miss ALL of the important parts.

So, that bugged me.

And, also, he/she didn't even give you a legitimate REASON as to why they're going to stop reading.

I don't consider 'I don't like where the story is going' to be a legitimate reason. Sorry.

Does he/she write YOUR story? No.
No, they don't.

So how can they possibly know where your story is going?
Maybe you'll decide to kill everybody off (PLEASE DON'T! Lmfao) and make Godzilla attack the world of your story.

How do they know where you're going with this?
THEY DON'T.

The Max thing was completely unexpected.

I would never expect that in a million years.

And if they didn't like that or something else, well, tough.
It's your story and you can do whatever you want with it.

Anyways, yeah.
I'm ranting and I dunno.

But don't let Anon (or anyone else) get to you.

You're a brilliant writer that's written a brilliant story.
And you have TONS of POSITIVE (extremely) reviews.
More than most people get.

And I LIKE where this is going. <3

Anyways, yeah.
I just had to say something because I know how badly flames feel.

Trust me.

well i'm combining shawn's jelaousy with min.
we all know what taht means.
uri will 'loose' his bf soon*evil laugh*
is it time ofr uri to grow up a bit and realize soemthing?
like,maybe shawn....
i think so,do you?
*whiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiines*