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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe what a cliffy!!!!!
omg! is shawn having sex?
and i am so sorry for uri, it's like everybody is so goody-goody and it's just him being the slut, the agresive one, the not caring one.
These months look to be very depresive for uri and as he said: just rane takes him for who he really is and not for the sweet image of a good little boy that everybody is used to see.
Go rane, go rane!
and his parents, well i dont't think they are very observant. Can't they see uri comes back from rane being happy and ok and gets depressed with his own familly? I think they should try understanding him and not make him limit his time with rane.
omg! is shawn having sex?
and i am so sorry for uri, it's like everybody is so goody-goody and it's just him being the slut, the agresive one, the not caring one.
These months look to be very depresive for uri and as he said: just rane takes him for who he really is and not for the sweet image of a good little boy that everybody is used to see.
Go rane, go rane!
and his parents, well i dont't think they are very observant. Can't they see uri comes back from rane being happy and ok and gets depressed with his own familly? I think they should try understanding him and not make him limit his time with rane.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG YOU UPDATED. did I miss that update in the forum?
okay so yea I LOVED this chapter. It took me FOREVER to actually realise that uri wasn't actually picturing Shawns face on Rane in the car. that he was actually OUTSIDE loking at them together. I can't believe Rane didn't get his ass kicked right then and there by shawn...i guess he was shocked lol...and then MAX and shawn haha I sooo knew it.... and Uri shouting at his parents that was great.... the only person who doesn't know now is shawn.....ugh I have a question though...that note I think was wrtiien by Uris father or mother I think... the feeling in my stomach its not mine..... I don't know maybe...... its a great story and half of it I wasn't expecting untill I read it...Off to go read it again. that's again for updating...^_~
okay so yea I LOVED this chapter. It took me FOREVER to actually realise that uri wasn't actually picturing Shawns face on Rane in the car. that he was actually OUTSIDE loking at them together. I can't believe Rane didn't get his ass kicked right then and there by shawn...i guess he was shocked lol...and then MAX and shawn haha I sooo knew it.... and Uri shouting at his parents that was great.... the only person who doesn't know now is shawn.....ugh I have a question though...that note I think was wrtiien by Uris father or mother I think... the feeling in my stomach its not mine..... I don't know maybe...... its a great story and half of it I wasn't expecting untill I read it...Off to go read it again. that's again for updating...^_~
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i just realised something
um.....Shawn called Uri a SLUT
he ish evil needs to be wacked witha wooden spoon on the bottle
I WANT TO DO IT!!!!
no but really how rude either the wooden spoon or slapped.... lol
yea I just realised that lol heehee
um.....Shawn called Uri a SLUT
he ish evil needs to be wacked witha wooden spoon on the bottle
I WANT TO DO IT!!!!
no but really how rude either the wooden spoon or slapped.... lol
yea I just realised that lol heehee
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Teeeeeeeeeeeeetaaaaaaaaaaaaa~!
Yay!
You know, at first I was a bit worried that it would be one of those introspective chapters, where Uri spent his time at Silver Creek and thought deep and meaningful thoughts about his relationships with people, but then you go and spring a cliffhanger on us!!
I think that i'm going to die waiting for the next chapter, but i've come up with a plan! If it takes you, on average, around a month to update, I can re-read your story at one chapter a day, and be all caught up by the next update! Hahaha.
Seriously though.... what exactly are Max and Shawn doing!?!?!?!
Yay!
You know, at first I was a bit worried that it would be one of those introspective chapters, where Uri spent his time at Silver Creek and thought deep and meaningful thoughts about his relationships with people, but then you go and spring a cliffhanger on us!!
I think that i'm going to die waiting for the next chapter, but i've come up with a plan! If it takes you, on average, around a month to update, I can re-read your story at one chapter a day, and be all caught up by the next update! Hahaha.
Seriously though.... what exactly are Max and Shawn doing!?!?!?!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow!! this was a really explosive chapter. one of my top favorites in the entire story! i was totally immersed in it and blown away by uri's outburst. i love how everything has built up to this and how uri has changed so dramatically and quickly without even seeing it. also love it that he nearly discovered the family secret being kept from him- close call! i'm dying to know what will happen next. and MAN, what a cliffhanger. you enjoy torturing your readers, don't you? :)
happy holidays to you too, dear!
happy holidays to you too, dear!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...i was sooo happy when i saw you had updated!!! I am in love with your story!!! I just can't wait for more Shawn/Uri....I like Rane, but just not for Uri...*lols* good work though!!!! I love how angsty it is....
Poor Uri though...Shawn is like rubbing salt in an open wound for him....Does he think that Uri is really a slut? Like that he's been hiding behind everyone's back and having sex all the time? Poor Shawn though...He like realllly loves Uri....
It's like a huuugggee love triangle...LOVE IT!
Keep updating...Lols hopefully sooner than this time....still, worth the wait!!!!!
Hapy Hols!
Mistaken
*hugs and chocolate kisses*
Poor Uri though...Shawn is like rubbing salt in an open wound for him....Does he think that Uri is really a slut? Like that he's been hiding behind everyone's back and having sex all the time? Poor Shawn though...He like realllly loves Uri....
It's like a huuugggee love triangle...LOVE IT!
Keep updating...Lols hopefully sooner than this time....still, worth the wait!!!!!
Hapy Hols!
Mistaken
*hugs and chocolate kisses*
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GODS!!!!! Can I just, beat Shawn into a bloody pulp. I know a little blame can be placed on Uri but come on!!! Shawn needs sense jknocked into him with a crow bar. Rawr.
I pray you can update soon.
~Canis
I pray you can update soon.
~Canis
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're cutting this off here and letting us hang like this? Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God... Shawn is being such a dick right now. Poor Uri. *hugs everyone* All the kid's trying to do is get some action... Jeez. XD
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful as always im really enjoying uris new side
cant wait for the chappie
cant wait for the chappie