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NOOOO! NO FUCKING WAYYY!!!! T_T I can´t believe you stopped like this. This chapter was so good, there were things happening and I was starting to see a possible resolution and... now.... T_T how could you live us like this?

*goes cry in a corner*

PS: I forgot to put a name on the other review, I was too busy screaming.

I do hope Shawn is not sleeping with Max just because he believes Uri was sleeping with Rane. T_T which, of course, it's probably what happened.

Am I strange for not hating anyone except the STUPID PARENTS? When things are going SO bad for the reasons that they are it's really time to turn up all the cards on the table. Everything is going wrong and the relationship with Shawn and Uri is going very very wrong. I really want to kick the parents. Also deciding that if Uri has changed and fights with Rane is very childish, parents SHOULD know better than give such a simplistic explanation to Uri's behavior.

Oh... and I love Uri being the "crushee" It was unexpected, and I loved it. XDDD

Noo!! That has got to be the WORST cliffhanger in the history of stories!!!... I technically mean that in a good way. The suspence is going to kill me! :D Please get the next chapter up as soon as you possibly can!!

Ok... yeah.... no..... you're not allowed to leave it at that and not update until after Christmas. I hate you.

Not really. I love this story so much. :) I hate the cliffy.... such a mean thing to do after waiting forever to have a new chapter to read.

*sigh* Happy holidays to you too! :)

OMG!!!!! nooooooo don't leave it on a cliffie!!!*rocks in corner waiting for next chapter*

oops I meant to write more:p so i was excited to see uri find that note written by his "aunt" am I supposed to think that she's really his mother? although him being born out of rape was a surprise....if I'm right about this all i mean....so yeah! great work!!! i first came upon this story at fictionpress and when i found it here as well with more chapters up i actually gave off a strange shriek of joy:p

*Falls off of chair edge.....looks around to make sure tha no one else saw.* that is totally cruel! With as often as you update, my dear, I'll be hanging on the edge here forever! Please update soon! I beg you!


~~Aki

You... suck D:

Well, I must admit, not exactly what I expected for the next chapter! I'm not sure exactly why, but the chapter did seem rushed, and some scenes weren't as flushed out as I know you'd usually write them. Fortunately, there were a lot of funny lines in the first half of the story, so I overlooked it. I especially love how you portray Uri's mother - is it weird she's my favorite character? She's so...mother-like. Stern but loving, keeping her boys in their places, and looking out for their wellbeings. I love it.

Okay so, I think I pieced together a lot in this chapter, which was probably why you had Uri go to Silver Creek. I'm almost 100% sure that Uri and Shawn are cousins and that Uri's mother took in Shawn when her sister, Uri's aunt, had him. From the note, which seems like it was from a diary of sorts, I think that Uri's aunt really, really didn't want to have Shawn - was it rape, then? Which might be why Uri's mother is approaching this rape business very cautiously with Uri - she's been through it already with her sister. But who knows? Maybe I'm just spouting nonsense. It's all just guess-work.

Also, there were a few moments in the chapter it almost felt like Uri was digressing in development, especially after last chapter. I was proud of him for sticking up for himself, not only to Shawn, but to his mother, at the end. And I know exactly how he felt, just spewing out everything, including the rape. Most teenagers have a tendency to do that under stress.

Again, Rane is absolutely amazing, and I'm glad he's there for Uri, as always. I kind of feel a little unsatisfied with the chapter, and not just from the cliffhanger, but because last chapter was so fantastic. Either way, I'm happy you updated, and I hope you have a wonderful Christmas. I will patiently wait for the next chapter!

~Lee

Oh yes, and please ignore all idiotic, bitchy reviews from unsurprisingly idiotic, bitchy trolls like the one above. They hate when they don't get what they want: AKA omghawtbuttsecksritenow!

Teeta, you're a brilliant author! Don't ever listen to anything different! :D

~Lee