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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter, I really like the change in Uri! But thats really a mean cliffhanger T_T
Happy christmas to you^^
Happy christmas to you^^
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 33 - ROFL. Your story makes me insane.
I don't know HOW many times I laughed out loud and then cried. I am SO glad no one's home. Or I'd probably be in the mental hospital right now.
ANYWAYS.
I KNEW IT!
I KNEWWWWWWWW IT!
SHAWN IS CECILIA'S CHILD!
HUZZAH.
I WAS RIGHT!
I WAS RIGHT!
R I G H T!
OR
OR
URI IS CECILIA'S CHILD!
But I dunno.
It makes more sense that Shawn is.
But then again I don't know when Cecilia died.
But maybe Uri is but I'm sticking to Shawn.
SHAWN IS CECILIA'S CHILD!
AND OHMYGOD!
I KNEW SHAWN WAS GOING TO CATCH THEM!
AND I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING WHEN THEY WERE LAUGHING!
IT'S CONTAGIOUS
AND I WANT MY OWN DAMN RANE!
AND YOUR STORY MAKES ME SO.FUCKING.GIDDY!
I LOVE YOU!
AND!
AND!
I KNEW HE WAS GOING TO CATCH MAX AND RANE!
OhmyGod.
I hope he calls Shawn the whore of Babylon.
Rofl.
PAYBACK.
IS A BITCH.
Oh man.
I love your story SO much.
It's like instant happiness with a click.
But awuh.
Since Uri's obviously going to end up with Shawn whenever, I want me some Rane.
Desperately.
He's so awesome.
Godddd.
This review is probably a bit creepy and stalker-ish but it's just because I love your story SO much.
It's so funny and sweet and funny and sexy and ohmygod Rane and Shawn. So perfect.
Rane and Shawn should have seckz.
Lmfao.
And Uri should FILM! AND THEN JOIN IN!
BEST.PORN.EVER!
Update Soon! <3
OH! OH! OH!
AND MERRY CHRISTMAS. =D
P.S.
Dear Santa,
I want 1 Rane, 1 Shawn, and 1 Uri for Christmas.
AND
Another update from my loving Goddess Of All Things Fiction and Smuttiness - TEETA!
And in this update please make Shawn apologize and Uri have a tantrum anddddd please make Uri run into the arms of Rane where they can do lots of smutty things AND MAYBE MAYBE Uri can lose his virginity!??!?! Gasp.
It's possible!
Lots of love, milk, cookies, and pretty boys in Santa hats,
Jenna
I don't know HOW many times I laughed out loud and then cried. I am SO glad no one's home. Or I'd probably be in the mental hospital right now.
ANYWAYS.
I KNEW IT!
I KNEWWWWWWWW IT!
SHAWN IS CECILIA'S CHILD!
HUZZAH.
I WAS RIGHT!
I WAS RIGHT!
R I G H T!
OR
OR
URI IS CECILIA'S CHILD!
But I dunno.
It makes more sense that Shawn is.
But then again I don't know when Cecilia died.
But maybe Uri is but I'm sticking to Shawn.
SHAWN IS CECILIA'S CHILD!
AND OHMYGOD!
I KNEW SHAWN WAS GOING TO CATCH THEM!
AND I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING WHEN THEY WERE LAUGHING!
IT'S CONTAGIOUS
AND I WANT MY OWN DAMN RANE!
AND YOUR STORY MAKES ME SO.FUCKING.GIDDY!
I LOVE YOU!
AND!
AND!
I KNEW HE WAS GOING TO CATCH MAX AND RANE!
OhmyGod.
I hope he calls Shawn the whore of Babylon.
Rofl.
PAYBACK.
IS A BITCH.
Oh man.
I love your story SO much.
It's like instant happiness with a click.
But awuh.
Since Uri's obviously going to end up with Shawn whenever, I want me some Rane.
Desperately.
He's so awesome.
Godddd.
This review is probably a bit creepy and stalker-ish but it's just because I love your story SO much.
It's so funny and sweet and funny and sexy and ohmygod Rane and Shawn. So perfect.
Rane and Shawn should have seckz.
Lmfao.
And Uri should FILM! AND THEN JOIN IN!
BEST.PORN.EVER!
Update Soon! <3
OH! OH! OH!
AND MERRY CHRISTMAS. =D
P.S.
Dear Santa,
I want 1 Rane, 1 Shawn, and 1 Uri for Christmas.
AND
Another update from my loving Goddess Of All Things Fiction and Smuttiness - TEETA!
And in this update please make Shawn apologize and Uri have a tantrum anddddd please make Uri run into the arms of Rane where they can do lots of smutty things AND MAYBE MAYBE Uri can lose his virginity!??!?! Gasp.
It's possible!
Lots of love, milk, cookies, and pretty boys in Santa hats,
Jenna
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is evil! ;-; You've got to update soon!
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG HOW COULD YOU STOP IT THERE????????????? you are the devil!!!!! but i loved the chapter! thank you for the update and please please please update soon!!! i must know!!!!!!!!!!
kel
kel
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December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHY?!? YOU EVIL VICIOUS AUTHOR, WHY?!?!? I wanna know what happens!! (sobs) Please TRY to update really fast, pleeeease. Or no cookie for you!
schedule
December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how can you do this. you cant. no. darn it. you will absolutly have thousands of people flaming you for this cliff hanger. darn you. darrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrn you.
you just gotta, goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooota. got to update quickly.
were they making woppy?
is uri or shawn the aunts kid?
man, i really want to know whats up! its killing me. how many more chapters before we find out whats going on with the whole family thing.
was she raped and gave the kid up to the sister. or what. its killing me. did she not want the kid. whose kid is hers. is the mom so protective over uri becuase thats her kid, and shawn is her sisters kid. does this make sense. no. i dunno. its just that i know now that the 2 brothers didnt come from the same mom.
this sooooooooo killing me.
and, now i remember uris friend. why is he mad. what happened at the party to make him run off.
is uri gonna find more of that womans writing and he figures the big secret out for himself or is going to be told. when can i expect this bloody chapter cause i gotta no and uri is soo fricking cluesss, hes not even suspicious man. when he finds out what this big secret is, is he gonna have a melt down or what. i jsut might ya know if you dont give me this chapter asap.
anyways, i fantasized that you should make uri surprise shawn one day by sneaking off going to that old guy of his grams friend and making him give him that old harley and bring it home with a bow on it and give it to shawn and their happily in gay love forever.
and the car make out scene slash sibling seeing it was hilarious.
happens all the time.
geesh.
is uri gonna start drivin or what.
that max is a bastard.
you just gotta, goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooota. got to update quickly.
were they making woppy?
is uri or shawn the aunts kid?
man, i really want to know whats up! its killing me. how many more chapters before we find out whats going on with the whole family thing.
was she raped and gave the kid up to the sister. or what. its killing me. did she not want the kid. whose kid is hers. is the mom so protective over uri becuase thats her kid, and shawn is her sisters kid. does this make sense. no. i dunno. its just that i know now that the 2 brothers didnt come from the same mom.
this sooooooooo killing me.
and, now i remember uris friend. why is he mad. what happened at the party to make him run off.
is uri gonna find more of that womans writing and he figures the big secret out for himself or is going to be told. when can i expect this bloody chapter cause i gotta no and uri is soo fricking cluesss, hes not even suspicious man. when he finds out what this big secret is, is he gonna have a melt down or what. i jsut might ya know if you dont give me this chapter asap.
anyways, i fantasized that you should make uri surprise shawn one day by sneaking off going to that old guy of his grams friend and making him give him that old harley and bring it home with a bow on it and give it to shawn and their happily in gay love forever.
and the car make out scene slash sibling seeing it was hilarious.
happens all the time.
geesh.
is uri gonna start drivin or what.
that max is a bastard.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooooo !!! You're MEAN !! To stop at this point !! HA HA HA ! EVIL !
And I'm sure it's not what I think !! ;D
Can't wait for the next chapter... And "Joyeux Noel" you too.
And I'm sure it's not what I think !! ;D
Can't wait for the next chapter... And "Joyeux Noel" you too.
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CLIFFHANGER!! *wails*
Very nice chapter.. very nice indeed.. Especially the last half..
I'm just gonna lurk here.. waiting for my answers.. especially to that 'beloved' cliffhanger D:
But very nice *hugs* <3
Very nice chapter.. very nice indeed.. Especially the last half..
I'm just gonna lurk here.. waiting for my answers.. especially to that 'beloved' cliffhanger D:
But very nice *hugs* <3
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was very intense, and it totally sucked me into this world. I do feel, when reading your story, that I might as well be reading a published book, and I envy how wide your vocabulary is, how you build the scenes an the places, the people.
Hm, so finally Uri outbursted, it was to be expected, after all that's been happening to him. And Shawn calling him a slut! woo.. But people tend to hurt the people they care for the most, as funny as it is. And I do like this Uri that is more active(?) who has more fire? Guh can't find the right words but it seems he's gotten the will to finally fight against what his parent's think is 'the best for him'
And uh, I still feel bad for Rane somehow, I like him, but I know Uri can never love him the way that he would want. And on the other hand it is ironic that I would feel bad for Rane when I want Uri to be with Shawn.
Great chapter, really, great cliffy too, though an evil one! But, can we really expect anyting less from you? ;)
Hm, so finally Uri outbursted, it was to be expected, after all that's been happening to him. And Shawn calling him a slut! woo.. But people tend to hurt the people they care for the most, as funny as it is. And I do like this Uri that is more active(?) who has more fire? Guh can't find the right words but it seems he's gotten the will to finally fight against what his parent's think is 'the best for him'
And uh, I still feel bad for Rane somehow, I like him, but I know Uri can never love him the way that he would want. And on the other hand it is ironic that I would feel bad for Rane when I want Uri to be with Shawn.
Great chapter, really, great cliffy too, though an evil one! But, can we really expect anyting less from you? ;)
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December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhh!! what a cliffy!! I seriously love this story! please please please update soon! you can't leave it at that!!!