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oh....oh.....oh COME ON!!!! U are evil but thank you for updating! I love your story and i've been hooked since the first chapter!! I wonder what they are doing? and whats going to happen!? wonderful, again! and i'll be looking for the next chap!

Yea baby, bring on the WAR! XD

Ok first of all, I’m glad you’ve updated… And I’m glad I found the time to read the new chapter. ^^

The beginning of this chapter was a bit… I don’t know. The note falling out of the book seemed almost too convenient a way to say Uri and Shawn are not brothers. I don’t really mind if they are or not, I just hope this won’t completely wipe the complexity of their situation off the table. Even if it would turn out they are not related at all, in their own eyes, and in the eyes of their parents they will always be brothers, blood relatives or not.

I can’t tell you how much I enjoyed Rane and Uri’s intimate moment in the car. Very hot! And, I can’t say I wasn’t hoping it would happen: Shawn busted them. Hurray! (though not for Uri and Rane) This exact scene is what I’ve been waiting for all along! I’m so glad you wrote it! The jealousy, the agony, the drama! Oh dear I almost got tears in my eyes! Lovely! Brilliant!! I love it! More! More! MORE! I still hope Rane will be first to get Uri I the sack. At least he’ll get something out of this before Shawn and Uri’s supposedly happy ending…

*snickers* I can’t wait for the description of what Uri sees… I know, I’m perverted. ^^

Ok, I'm done, and I'm horrified to find the story isn't! Normally, my luck allows me to come upon stories that have already been finished, but now I find THIS and its NOT DONE! Do you know what you are doing to me?! Since I only came upon this like, two days ago, I have no idea what your update schedule is, which sucks complete and utter balls.

*heavy sigh*

You are breaking my heart with this story. Let me tell you, let me try to articulate how wonderful this is.

First, the whole "Uriel coming to terms with liking his brother" was absolutely perfect! His vomiting, the shakes, all the reactions were perfect! I'm so sick of stories where the brothers are like, 'Oh, well, you're my bro, and I want to sex you up, but that's not odd at all' crap that floats around there. You have the most realistic incest story I have ever seen. I always feel weird that I like stories like this, cause in real life, it freaks me out...But I don't know. I guess with stories, I like things that aren't typically normal, cause with words, we can live out fantasies we can't in everyday life. Thank you for allowing my to have this story like that.

Also, in my other review, where I said that someone'd have to be brain-dead not to notice Shawn's love for Uriel, still stands. I believe URI is an idiot. I love him all the same, but how can he not see?! How?! Is it all perspective? Gah, it drives me crazy! You are seriously the master of sexual tension. I'm going to have to read your PWP for those two, because I'm so high strung on it.

I feel for these two, I really do. Shawn and his jealousy and obvious distress at not being able to be with his brother, yet the simple ways he shows his love and devotion. Does Shawn know they aren't related as brothers? Cause I totally still believe that they aren't. SOMEONE was adopted or the whole aunt-obviously-was-pregnant thing. It's like this big riddle, that I don't want to guess, I want someone to tell me the answer!

And Shawn asking Uriel how to get his "dream girl" and then using those same tactics on HIM, oh god, I wanted to leap into the story and slap him on the face! Damn you Uri! I love you, and you love your brother, and he loves you and JUST TELL HIM!

My hands are shaking as I type this, that's how much you have affected me.

And the whole Rane thing?! Oh jesus, I'm so torn between liking him and staying loyal to Shawn. I don't know where to turn. Honestly. Just know, in my heart, I will always root for Shawn, but now, seeing how much Rane obviously cares for Uriel, I don't want to see him get hurt. BUT SHAWN LOVED HIM FIRST! AND HE LOVED SHAWN FIRST! Goddammit, I am so conflicted right now.

Plan on more reviews as I slowly remember each and every thing about this tale that I have fallen in love with.

I know you usually respond to reviews in your stories, but my email is Sugar_and_spite@hotmail.com

I would love to hear from you. About anything!

I just recently found your story and I am most definitely hooked! The first night I found it I think I spent seven hours trying to read as many chapters as I could. You draw it out quite a bit but honestly, I really like seeing all the turn of events. Now you've left us at this cliffhanger and I could kill you if I didn't love your story so much! Hehe.

Honestly, I think Uri is pretty dense even though I like him and I really want him to realize how much Shawn cares for him. You did a good job with Max as a character because every time you mention him I just want to reach through the screen to the text and smack the little bitch's eyes out of his head. I'm still curious if you're going to change Rane's character a little more to incorporate a more prominent streak of the manipulative gleam we saw earlier. It doesn't really seem like it, but hey, that's fine, right?

Well, I guess I've taken up too much space already as it is, so please, please, please continue this quickly as I desperately want to find out where it ends up! Thanks for all of the entertainment. ;D

Okay, I have to alter my last comment, cause right after the t-storm scene, for some reason I now think that SHAWN was adopted or like, the kid of the aunt they keep mentioning. I don't know! I'm confused and delighted and so DYING WITH SEXUAL TENSION! Gah!

My REAL review, will be somewhat more refined, I swear.

uri finally lost it and blew up. i hope it's for the best...
shane is actually starting to piss me off >.< i get it that he's jelous as hell, but come on, being this spiteful for three whole months is just being bitchy and not just jelous. plus he can't exactly blame uri, since he has no idea about his brother's feelings and it's not as if he's flaunting his boyfriend in front of shawn just to hurt him... *shakes head*
shawns's hurting and obviously he doesn't want to suffer alone. little does he know how miserable uri if feeling because of it...
and damn it, but i keep liking rane more and more >.< he's really head over heels with uri and i feel so sorry for him, cuz there's just no way to save his heart from being broken...
*hugs rane*

i won't even mention the evil cliffhanger you ended the chapter with. nope, not me. at all.
ugh! >.<

anyway, as always i loved it and am waiting for more from you, no matter how long it will take you to write it (RL can be demanding, especially during this period, i know).
take care! :]

AARGH.
You meanie!
-runs in circles-

Mean meanie!
Aka, your writing is wonderful, I didn't want to stop reading and then you end my reading like THIS and also tell me that I'll have to wait for more? AAARFGH. You, missy, are driving me effin crazeh.

No kisses for you. P:

Great chapter! I was visiting the forum and saw it's your birthday. It's mine too. Happy birthday!

I'm sure I reviewed last chapter, but whatever.. I have a feeling I yelled cliffhanger anyways ;P
HAPPY BIRTHDAY *spamage*
Now that you're *censored* (one shouldn't say a lady's age), I hope you enjoy your life as much as you should, and so on.. (sucks at speeches). Close to Christmas as it is, you should enjoy yourself, and attack the cookies *gives some more*. Want some cake? *3*

I have been reading this story for the past two days, trying my damndest to finish it, but (thank god!) your chapters are long and insightful. But I just had to put my two-cents here (I promise to do a REAL review once finished).

So the gel bracelet saying SHAWN'SLAVE? TOTALLY should be SHAWN'S LOVE, right? And Uriel was definitely adopted or something, (I think) cause the way his mom reacted when he made the small joke about it. And anyone who can't see that Shawn is so in love with Uriel that he'd die for him, is completely and totally brain-dead. But I just wanted to write this stuff, cause this is my beliefs on what's been going on...

Not really a review, so I'll do that now. I LOVE THIS! *holds in excited chattering* But I must wait until my real review to accurately give it to you. Once I finish.

CRAP, I have school! Will finish it tonight!!!