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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person Child of the Darkened Moon
schedule January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh!!! You leave us at a cliff hanger and then don't update for a month or more... I feel like crying... I miss this story! Plus its driving me nuts not to know what Shawn and that asshole... I mean Max... are doing. Please come back soon. I misses you.... and I miss poor Uri's huge dilemmas.
person mizz
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do not know what it is but this is the first time i ever actually followed a story as much as i did yours. to put simply, i really like it.
I've also had this suspicion ever since the tenth or eleventh chapter: could one of them (uri/shawn) be adopted? and then this chapter reveals this letter from an unknown character in their aunt's room and my suspicion is getting fueled...pleaaaaaaaase update sooon....
person Rosei
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this love story. It's humor and angst and pure
love really comes through from its author.

Thanks,
R
person morbid Chibi
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I just came back from vacation and there was this lovely update! This chapter was amazing, the action in this one blew me away. I was on the edge of my seat most of the time! I was also really happy that you finally had Uri stand up to his mom for once!! I just hope that whatever he see's in the room with Shawn and Max...he gets a jealous rage and attacks Max only to steal Shawn! lol It probably wont happen but I can dream!

Once again another amazing chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!!
schedule January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Poke* *Poke* *Poke* Update soon? I don't know if I can wait any longer... *cries* Yes, I'm just that addicted to your lovely writing and great story!
person Duomi
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kya! I came back from vacation and there's an update! Yay. I can't remember if I've reviewed this before, but I keep meaning to, I've been reading your story since it was a few chapters long. Sometimes the English is slightly broken or awkward, but that only very rarely detracts from the story-- your characterizations are wonderful, and I've come to really care for the characters. Also, you write the make-out scenes and daydreams wonderfully! When Sean saw Uri and Rayne in the car I almost started crying. Poor Sean! I like Rayne and Uri together, and it seems like it'd be easier for Uri's life, but... also, I figure Sean's probably his cousin, not actually his brother, but I'm not sure that's so much different. Anyway, I love this story, and this chapter's a definite cliffhanger and makes me very nervous and excited. Only 8 or 9 chapters left? It's going to be really strange not having any more updates to look forward to... I check at least twice a week, and have for close to a year now. Thanks so much for writing it, and for staying with it so long.
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 33
Hi teeta,
It's been a while :) I am still a fan of NSt. Last chapters seem to have more action and I like that. I can't believe that you would leave us at such cliffhanger! What is Shawn doing, trying to get Uri out of his mind through having sex with other guys! I don't think it would work, hehe. I am just wondering what it was that Uri saw. Were Max and Shawn just fooling around or going at it? In that case, who was the bottom? Hope Uri's head didn't explode from jealousy, hahaha! The car sex scene was done really well.

Thank you

Merry Xmas :DDD
person bk
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah I just started reading this story and I have to say I'm enjoying it so much! I can't wait to read what happens! This last chapter has been my favorite so far. I really hope Uri and Shawn can get back to being at least friendly with eachother! >_<
person Lacail
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I HATE YOOOOOOUUU! (not really ;)
why did you have to leave the chapter like that?! I feel like crying.. ;( I'm so saaad. You can now be my Santa, so I ask you to give me and all the other fans a new chapter as a Christmas present? pleeeeeeeeeease i beg you. ;)
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely obsessed with your story. I can't wait for the next chapter~