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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34 - Oh my Godddddd. That was SO sad. I cried for Rane. Poor, poor Rane. But oh my God! Practically the entire chapter was sex!! OMGGGGG. I LOVE YOU!
Anyways, I hate to say this, but I think I love Rane more than Shawn. Oh well. It finally happened.
Poor, poor Rane.
PLEASE, do a spin-off with Rane. Pleaseeee.
Oh, and I'm late for something but I'll come back and read that story preview later.
Update soon!
Anyways, I hate to say this, but I think I love Rane more than Shawn. Oh well. It finally happened.
Poor, poor Rane.
PLEASE, do a spin-off with Rane. Pleaseeee.
Oh, and I'm late for something but I'll come back and read that story preview later.
Update soon!
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Must admit that I laughed out loud when Uri said he loved Shawn ._." Like, 'now he's done it!'
And a very, very lovely chapter.. Totally worth the waiting. Too bad it ended sort of with a cliffhanger, again. Now I'm eager to read the rest of the story! *wails* In a way it's too bad what you write such long chapters, since they take a long time to write, but it's lovely to have such long texts to read each time <3 Just continue what you love~
And I'll try out the other story now (:
Hell~~
And a very, very lovely chapter.. Totally worth the waiting. Too bad it ended sort of with a cliffhanger, again. Now I'm eager to read the rest of the story! *wails* In a way it's too bad what you write such long chapters, since they take a long time to write, but it's lovely to have such long texts to read each time <3 Just continue what you love~
And I'll try out the other story now (:
Hell~~
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Copy-paste...<3 Just continue what you love~
And I'll try out the other story now (:
Hell~~
And I'll try out the other story now (:
Hell~~
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just continue what you love~
And I'll try out the other story now!
Love Hell, whom is hated by this site... This is the first time I've been thrown off like this while reviewing your story.. Happens all the time with others
And I'll try out the other story now!
Love Hell, whom is hated by this site... This is the first time I've been thrown off like this while reviewing your story.. Happens all the time with others
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It's finally out! I got home and this was waiting. It made my night ^_^ The drama! I loved it! But rawr! Uri you just spent your first time with someone not Shawn, that is a bad boy. He is not happy. So let me guess? Shawn took a drive over to see Rane? Hope your Valentine's Day guarantee is genuine! You left us with a positively horrid cliffhanger, you're so good at that...
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!! I hope they talk and fet this out in the open finally!!! This was a great update, but I feel so bad for Rane even if he isn't my favorite.
Thanks for the look at your new story, I will have to read the rest of the chapters when I have more time.
Love ya, doll!
Meleth
Thanks for the look at your new story, I will have to read the rest of the chapters when I have more time.
Love ya, doll!
Meleth
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER!!!! Yay! I like, I like.
I have to say I'm not all that fond of the other story, not because of it but mainly because present-tense narration really, really bugs me for some reason. I don't know.
But I love NST. Really do. Can't wait for more
I have to say I'm not all that fond of the other story, not because of it but mainly because present-tense narration really, really bugs me for some reason. I don't know.
But I love NST. Really do. Can't wait for more
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Teeta!
I'v been reading your story for a while, but so sorry I haven't reviewed until now =O This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my life! The tension, your writing style, both Uri and Shawn's situation, and Uri's blindness. You can actually FEEL everything Uri is going through. You really are a very talented writer. Everything has got me completely hooked!!
(And if you're ever going to publish a book, I'm buying it. ^^)
You had me yelling at the screen several times, with tears in my eyes...and I'm not one to cry easily. Hehehe, so congratulations!! :D
You know, there's this song that reminds me so much about this story, it's almost scary. I don't usually like songs like this, but it's sort of catchy and I listen to it while waiting for the next chapters. It's called Just so you know. (Maybe you've already heard it?) Anyway here's the lyrics if you're interested: http://www.metrolyrics.com/just-so-you-know-lyrics-jesse-mccartney.html
Oh, and the characters!*gets all excited* :) I absolutely love Uri, with his personality, and his reactions to everything. Especially related to Shawn *evil smirk*. Then there is the blindness/innocence (though becoming bolder).
Even how much I love Uri, there is something about Shawn that makes him so....incredibly amazing! Can't find another word for it. It's certainly the way he is and also because he is more blunt and goes through what he does to gain Uri's attention. Even if he can be very manipulative, but who would Shawn be if he wasn't ;)
The only reason I don't like Rane as much is because he erm...reminds me a bit too much of someone I knew >_>
But he is a great character and he certainly adds to the tension. I feel so soory for him after this chapter, I stopped breathing for a minute, and you made me cry...again!
Now Uri's secret is finally out too. You're going to kill me with the suspense! x.x
Hmm, and I do wonder about the family relation...could it be that BOTH Uri and Shawn are Ceciles' children? Or...Rane lives with his father right? Maybe he is Ceciles son, which makes him Shawn and Uri's cousin.
Is Dan jealous over Uri and Ranes' (used to be) relationship?...I mean, he did storm out at the party and someone at school cut Ranes tires...hmm... or is it a completely different reason? When it comes to you, it's difficult to know. Which brings me to another reason why I love this story so much, you never know exactly what's going to happen. It takes a great author to do that! :)
Not to mention the cliffhanger *both excited and worried.* Gods, I'm so curios now O_O
You're going to be the death of me teeta!!!
I also read every chapter of mating markers and I love it!! You and Laaerie are a great team :D
You know, I sort of have a feeling Havi is planning something...
Can't wait for another update (both NST and Mating Markers), you make my day :)
Taso ~
I'v been reading your story for a while, but so sorry I haven't reviewed until now =O This is one of the most amazing stories I have ever read in my life! The tension, your writing style, both Uri and Shawn's situation, and Uri's blindness. You can actually FEEL everything Uri is going through. You really are a very talented writer. Everything has got me completely hooked!!
(And if you're ever going to publish a book, I'm buying it. ^^)
You had me yelling at the screen several times, with tears in my eyes...and I'm not one to cry easily. Hehehe, so congratulations!! :D
You know, there's this song that reminds me so much about this story, it's almost scary. I don't usually like songs like this, but it's sort of catchy and I listen to it while waiting for the next chapters. It's called Just so you know. (Maybe you've already heard it?) Anyway here's the lyrics if you're interested: http://www.metrolyrics.com/just-so-you-know-lyrics-jesse-mccartney.html
Oh, and the characters!*gets all excited* :) I absolutely love Uri, with his personality, and his reactions to everything. Especially related to Shawn *evil smirk*. Then there is the blindness/innocence (though becoming bolder).
Even how much I love Uri, there is something about Shawn that makes him so....incredibly amazing! Can't find another word for it. It's certainly the way he is and also because he is more blunt and goes through what he does to gain Uri's attention. Even if he can be very manipulative, but who would Shawn be if he wasn't ;)
The only reason I don't like Rane as much is because he erm...reminds me a bit too much of someone I knew >_>
But he is a great character and he certainly adds to the tension. I feel so soory for him after this chapter, I stopped breathing for a minute, and you made me cry...again!
Now Uri's secret is finally out too. You're going to kill me with the suspense! x.x
Hmm, and I do wonder about the family relation...could it be that BOTH Uri and Shawn are Ceciles' children? Or...Rane lives with his father right? Maybe he is Ceciles son, which makes him Shawn and Uri's cousin.
Is Dan jealous over Uri and Ranes' (used to be) relationship?...I mean, he did storm out at the party and someone at school cut Ranes tires...hmm... or is it a completely different reason? When it comes to you, it's difficult to know. Which brings me to another reason why I love this story so much, you never know exactly what's going to happen. It takes a great author to do that! :)
Not to mention the cliffhanger *both excited and worried.* Gods, I'm so curios now O_O
You're going to be the death of me teeta!!!
I also read every chapter of mating markers and I love it!! You and Laaerie are a great team :D
You know, I sort of have a feeling Havi is planning something...
Can't wait for another update (both NST and Mating Markers), you make my day :)
Taso ~
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i dont know what to say!!..its just so incredible your story is!..i know i started late and all..but i just cant seem to fathom the fact that you can make incestuous love feel like this..its like so different than normal incest slash ..TOTALLY DIFFERENT!!..damn you are so damn good!! hope you update soon enough..i just dont know whether shawn love uri also or just giving false hint towards the reader..but seeing the next chapter if uri saw shawn and max having sex..thats definitely going to be a lot of pain for uri..hope you update soon!
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January 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ehm....mr. riley's nephew got cecilie pregant in a more or less consensual act?
and she probably comitted sucided after she gave birth to her son, who is most likely shawn....
random guess here.
acutally the review I had written about a month ago, when I first read this chapter, was lost due to my unstable internet connection.
so I'm really sorry, that the only thing you had to go with was the note I send you via yahoo....
in case it sounded a bit....worrying....I had just hoped that in the fight uri and shawn have at the end, one of them would finally burst out with his feelings and was upset when it didn't happen.
I'm sorry.
I should have known better than to exspect something this random from you.
but that chapter was great and I'm just reading it again and wanted to let you know that I'm still amongst your readers.
maybe we find a chance to talk again, soon?!
and she probably comitted sucided after she gave birth to her son, who is most likely shawn....
random guess here.
acutally the review I had written about a month ago, when I first read this chapter, was lost due to my unstable internet connection.
so I'm really sorry, that the only thing you had to go with was the note I send you via yahoo....
in case it sounded a bit....worrying....I had just hoped that in the fight uri and shawn have at the end, one of them would finally burst out with his feelings and was upset when it didn't happen.
I'm sorry.
I should have known better than to exspect something this random from you.
but that chapter was great and I'm just reading it again and wanted to let you know that I'm still amongst your readers.
maybe we find a chance to talk again, soon?!