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for Not supposed to

by teeta

person Kiira
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aw, Uri no longer a virgin, and I feel bad for Rane :( Though I knew it was coming, it still came with a surprise... how weird is that? heh. *Hugs Rane* I also feel bad for Uri, it's tough, really trying to like someone and then... seeing them hurt by you, yeah, it's not a nice feeling, not at all *been there, done that*

Though I think Rane took it as well as one could, you know? Hm, I like that guy and hope to read what goes on with him later.

And Shawn had a talk with him, yeah? I wonder what happened... and yup evil cliffy you have there, most evil one byet, nod. But what else can we expect from you? :P Frankly I'd be kind of dissapointed if there were no cliffhanger at the end of the chapters 0_0 But *shakes fist* don't you dare to end the story with a cliffhanger or I'll haunt you forever *mwuahhaa* erm... ok, I know you're not THAT evil. :P

And mating markers is a good story, I should definitely read more of it soon. *been too lazy reader reasently*

-C-
person irinutza
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, i think it was the most intense chapter so far! when Uri said "i love you shawn", i had the exact reaction that i have when something VERY bad happens because of me: i blushed to my toes and my hand started trembling .
You sure did do it very unexpected.
Can't wait to see what's shawn going to speak about. (only 2 weeks till then ^__^)

About the match makers I'll be commenting later, because i have to chill after the not supposed to.
person Mr. Nice Girl
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why, Uri?! Whyyyy!!!??? I just KNEW he was going to do that! Poor Rane! I literally groaned when Uri ruined everything for him =(. Well now I guess I'll see what Shawn has to say about all this!
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi hun! I don't think I've reviewed in aaaaaaaggggggggeeeeeeessssssss but then I was away so I didn't get to check on your fic :D
Once more you've blown me away. I had tears in my eyes when Uri finally let eveything out. It's about time though!! But it mad me so sad D:
And naughty Uri and Rayne, making out in cars *shakes head*
I strongly dislike Max, and I am not looking foward to what happens in the next chapter with him Shawn and Uri... suspense much love?
Anyway, I think it's about time that I reviewed your fic again, and also:
I love you!!! Uri is being smexed up!! *bows down to you*
person l.fire
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man,when are the two of them getting together?

and you website is nonexistenrt,i see nothing on it.
person miles
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm SO disappointed !!! No, no, the chapter is great as always... But I feel like Uri gave something precious to Rane and for the bad reasons... *Sigh*
Why Rane and not Shawn !! Yes, I know Uri think Shawn is his brother but... *Sigh*

I can't wait for the next chapter !!!
Did Shawn visit Rane ?
Is it for that that Shawn wants to speak to Uri ?

AAAAAARRRRRGGGG !
Update soon pleaseeeee !
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a guy and you've reduced me to tears. How could you stop there!

I check this story for updates every day but this is possibly the most cruel cliifhanger you've ever given. I now resolve to check this story more than once a day, just in case you update before the 14th.
person Hiriyou
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I've been awaiting this chapter for so long now and it's finally out! So good! <3 I'm shocked that Uri was actually able to go all the way with Rane, but I'm also a little surprised that he hasn't realized by now that he really does love Rane. The fact that hurting Rane has upset him THIS much should really be an indicator to him, but still, Uri's pretty dense as we all still know. ^^ Heh.

I'm curious where Shawn went to that he came back looking so pale. Perhaps he went to go have a talk with Rane about why his poor little brother is so upset he can't seem to get out of bed for a whole day. I know it would probably upset Shawn enough for him to get to that point and I wonder what Rane would tell him? Rane doesn't seem like the type of person to really go about saying anything of what Uri said to him, but then again if he felt that maybe Shawn felt the same way towards Uri I could see him giving up the secret simply to help Uri out. Rane has my vote as one of the great characters, because really he is just so selfless, it makes me go all 'awwwwwww' and feel sick with how nice he is.

Still, I can't WAIT to see another update. I hope it doesn't take two months again. D: Definitely worth it, all the same, though.
person BennyPeace
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. I'm guessing Shawn went to talk to Rane? And Rane told Shawn about what happened with Uri? That's what I think at least. But I guess I'll find out the 14th!
person rosiel
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! i cant believe that actually happened( eventhough i suspected it would) im so heartbroken right now. eventhough i want shawn and uri together i just feel so sorry for rane. god i hope hes not too badly off. please update soon, and i reaally, reeeally mean it

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