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for Not supposed to

by teeta

schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Eeek!! Thankyouthankyouthankyou~!! It always makes my day when I see you've updated.

Oh my gosh! What to say!

1) Oh my god, that was hot. Like g'damn hot. *drools* You go Rane and Uri!!
2) D:> Poor Rane!! I knew he was going to have to find out eventually but I feel so bad for him!! Bad for Uri too, but poor Rane. I really hope he gets a new boyfriend in the end. One who really loves him for him (*wink wink* ;D)
3) I'm sooo excited to find out what's going to happy now between the whole Shawn/Max Uri/Rane thing!! I wonder if Rane's gonna bust Uri on accident or what. Oooh I can't wait for ensuing akwardness!!
4) XD I love you. So hard. I can't wait for your next chapter!!! *waits patiently*
5) You new story seems really interesting. A little confusing, but I liked it!

-JV2
person TheSiner
schedule February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this very much!
person Laie
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gods, I hope you update soon because... I was crying my eyes out while I read this chapter!! Goddammit, My poor Uri... I hope that he finally tells the truth to his brother, I think it's the only way to solve things and to go on.

I'm glad Uri finally realized that he can't run away from the truth forever, I knew he was just trying to like someone he didn't like...

I look foward the next chapter.
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omfg haha thats not fair.

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please come out with another chapter soon.
person Duomi
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I knew Uri'd say Shawn's name, but still...! This chapter made me giddy. That might be because I put off eating any dinner or breakfast to read it though...
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! you can't leave it there!!!! >_< poor rane!!! >_< i kind of saw that coming though.... i had to stop reading and sort of pain laughed for uri...
BUT!!! did shawn talk to rane? is that why he was pale?? what is he talking to uri about?? does shawn love him too?? will he leave max??? >_<
YOU're pure evil... T____T stupid cliffies... >_> i'll go back and read your teaser for your other story... i had to skip it to review... and that was mean... to have a TBC and the scroll bar still had so long to go... T___T more please.... *continues to check back for updates*
person keladry
schedule February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG best chapter of life!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! holy shit almighty that was soooooooo good! please update soon! i need to know what happens, seriously this story is the only thing i look forward to while i'm at school! ur the best as always!
KEL
person Rosei
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34

Wow!! That breakdown was long in coming!! Too bad Uri didn't realize he was using
Rane, but he needed him so much, so, he must, eventually, forgive himself.
The way you wrote Rane's character, so full of love and good humor, was masterful!!

Great chapter!!! Thanks!!

Love the new story!!

R
person Nightrosefox
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are a very cruel author! I cried over what happen between Rane and Uri! It was absolutly horrible! Please tell me that they mend everything! As for how you ended the chapter, it was just as cruel cruel I tell you! I can't wait until the 14th, I better be seeing a new chapter right on time or I'll be finding new horrible ways to tourcher you. New chapter, new chapter soon! I mean it, stop being cruel to us! You took so long to update only to leave us with so much pain and way too many questions. I truely hope that everything is anwered and fixed soon! Please don't keep Rane hurt! I truely can't say I have a favorite for Uri, I want him to end up with both! But at the very least let him and Rane stay friends! I look forward to the next chapter.


~~Aki
person Minako
schedule February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“Uri … we need to talk.”

You bet you need to talk >_<

Aaaaaarghhhhjjjjj!!!!!! GREAT GREAT chapter. But... God... that cliffhanger is going to kill me!! O_O
I can´t even guess what´ll happen. I can´t stop and hope they will, finally, clear up things. But... It's Uri and Shawn and their parents. -_-u I know I shouldn´t hope for too much, they are disastrous. XDDD

Anyway! GREAT CHAPTER! I'm glad you haven´t abandoned this story. Good luck with your busy RL!