rate_review Reviews

This was sooo very sweet *hearts* Ah, and I'm so lost with words now, it was wonderful, finally they kissed and made out and humped and and... are an item ^_^ Buuuuuut it was just soooo suspisiously sweet, you know? and you're evil, nod, heh, in the most sweetest way mind you, but evil stil, so I can only expect some huge drama coming soon. This chapter was like a strawberry (I'm a huge fan of strawberrys) and ...and the next... erm, I know I had some clever thing how to end that sentense, but ... I think I got lost when starting to think about the strawberrys 0_o

Anyways good job!

Sorry I havent reviewed in such a long time! It's only because I somehow missed the last four chapters. It was probably more like me seeing it, saying I'll read it later, than totally forgetting. I hate it when that happens, because it gives me that whole 'how did I live without knowing all this?!?!'. Im super glad I came back where there was a happy chapter! The other ones made me want to cry! I wouldve never imagined Shawn would be so mean to Uri and I was definitely surprised Uri let things with Rane get so far. Now to see what happens with max (we still need to know what he told Shawn to make him go all ballistic and horny apparently)and I hope Rane can forgive Uri for what he did. Uri does really care for him .. Just Shawn was there first. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm assuming its all coming to an end soon?

Okay, I LOVE how you brought this about. I love where the story is going now and I'm really excited for the next chapter. Yeah, you definitely surprised me to see another one up there! I nearly panicked that you'd decided to put the story on hold... but nope! =D And that makes me all the happier! Can't wait for another update!

I knew it !!! Yeah for Uri and Shawn !!!
Great chapter...

XDD 'Old Tommy' is the best bull ever!
And btw, awwwwwww, they finally got eachother <3
This was so sweet and sugary, just perfect for valentine's day!

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! finally lol

Loveley... Beautiful... I am feeling all warm inside. It was so *sighn*.... I can't put it into words. The best thing ever, truly. We aited so long for this moment, and I guess it couldn't be better and even the publishing day is perfect.

So, tahnk you a lot!

And hopefully we'll hear more about thouse two from you. Some more happy times and everything they have to face now (weather they are brothers for real or not....)

Cheers,
Yukisa

Chapter 35 "Old Tommy"

Wow! I wondered what the chapter title could refer to, I was
NOT expecting an old bull!! HA!

Finally, after all their mutual pain!! They reach an understanding
on a patch of hard grass!! YAH!!

Fine chapter!! Thank you for the St. Valentines Day present,
you're the best!!

Thanks,
R

I was so desperate to read this chapter that I stalked it on the web and came here!
Since FP was temporarily dead.
Great chapter although a tiny bit anticlimactic! I expected there would be tears
and more shock/surprise on the part of Uri, but both of them were much more calmer than expected.
Never mind, best chapter I've read in ages (i.e. those horrible rane-y chapters).
...this chapter wasn't another of Uri/Shawn's dreams was it?! I sure hope not!
Update as soon as you can please!

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can't.do.better.atm.will.try.again. ... later... much.much.later

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