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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bravo....Bravp... Love it.. Finally they both know how each other feels... It was killing me.. Love the story...
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So uh...kind of speechless......OMGawd!!! It was so awesome. What the frighten hell are you going to write after that scene? This is what I've been waiting for...some loving. Thank you for writing such a freat story. Please do continue.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!
I KNEW THEY BOTH LOVED EACH OTHER!! FINALLY TOGETHER!!!YaaaaY! *runs around throwing confetti*
I.LOVE.YOU! *__________*
I KNEW THEY BOTH LOVED EACH OTHER!! FINALLY TOGETHER!!!YaaaaY! *runs around throwing confetti*
I.LOVE.YOU! *__________*
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
couldn't read it.
I'm trying for the second time now, but it just won't work.
and that's not about me prefering rane.
it's the sudden change of mood, that I don't get.
we go from uri to being all angsty to this lovefilled conversation and the parts where uri freaks out are practically nonexistent.
actually, it seems more like a dream to me.
I also checked if I missed a chapter, but no.....read it all.
but it just feels so wrong and I'm so sorry.
I'm trying for the second time now, but it just won't work.
and that's not about me prefering rane.
it's the sudden change of mood, that I don't get.
we go from uri to being all angsty to this lovefilled conversation and the parts where uri freaks out are practically nonexistent.
actually, it seems more like a dream to me.
I also checked if I missed a chapter, but no.....read it all.
but it just feels so wrong and I'm so sorry.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It happened. It really did!O_O
This is the best valentines present(even though it's practically nonexistant where I live.) ever. And there's no need to hide, it was an amazing chapter, Perfect really!
Have to say I share Uri's bullphobia here. They can be scary, even if they are both blind and deaf :S
Oh, and I don't think old Tommy minded the free show and first row seats ^^
Can't wait to see what happens next!
~ Taso ~
This is the best valentines present(even though it's practically nonexistant where I live.) ever. And there's no need to hide, it was an amazing chapter, Perfect really!
Have to say I share Uri's bullphobia here. They can be scary, even if they are both blind and deaf :S
Oh, and I don't think old Tommy minded the free show and first row seats ^^
Can't wait to see what happens next!
~ Taso ~
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Before you posted this, I was thinking if there was a way I could be disappointed, and ironically the only thing I could come up with would be if it was all resolved in the one chapter.
That’s not what you did; there are still so many questions and secrets – Rane, Kyle, Dan, are they cousins? Also, simply being together isn't going to be easy (I can imagine Uri putting his foot down and forbidding a relationship between them out of fear of discovery and morality). I'm glad you touched on that, having Uri realise that things almost just got worse now that he and Shawn are actually doing incestuous stuff, instead of just thinking about it.
But I was a little disappointed; I'm still really mad at Shawn. It's funny really; during earlier chapters I was distrustful of Rane and loving Shawn. Then you made Shawn mean and Rane nice and my opinions changed to fit that. Even though I knew what was going on from both perspectives, because to Uri Shawn was a bastard who hated him and Rane was a good friend, that's what I felt. It's because of your talent as an author that you can make me feel how you want me to feel about the characters…in most respects. However, even though now Uri knows how Shawn felt and why he was constantly pissed, they haven't actually talked about it or really explained everything – even aside from the rape attempt and the cousin thing. I'm guessing/hoping that you'll address this in later chapters, but still I wanted Uri to be mad since he has every right to be furious at Shawn for what he said, how he treated him and Rane, even for sticking his nose in and talking to Rane behind Uri's back.
I think I'd prefer it if this was sort of an exhale chapter; like all that stress and tension gets breathed out for a little bit, but addressed and actually dealt with next time. They've been so wound up lately and then Uri went and spoilt his relationship with Rane, so just a quiet confession before the real shit hits the fan would be awesome.
I'd always envisioned them getting together through anger/desperation/alcohol and I'm glad that I was wrong, and I think it was a very sweet way for both of them to admit their feelings; not all life is flare and drama. But I do feel that it would have worked better if they'd resolved their issues with proper communication before they started 'being boyfriends'. If that is, you don't come back to those issues later – see earlier part about fans.
This story is my favourite out of all that I'm reading at the moment. My other favourite finished just before Christmas, and I'm desperately hoping that you still have many chapters left in you for this because I really, really do love it.
That’s not what you did; there are still so many questions and secrets – Rane, Kyle, Dan, are they cousins? Also, simply being together isn't going to be easy (I can imagine Uri putting his foot down and forbidding a relationship between them out of fear of discovery and morality). I'm glad you touched on that, having Uri realise that things almost just got worse now that he and Shawn are actually doing incestuous stuff, instead of just thinking about it.
But I was a little disappointed; I'm still really mad at Shawn. It's funny really; during earlier chapters I was distrustful of Rane and loving Shawn. Then you made Shawn mean and Rane nice and my opinions changed to fit that. Even though I knew what was going on from both perspectives, because to Uri Shawn was a bastard who hated him and Rane was a good friend, that's what I felt. It's because of your talent as an author that you can make me feel how you want me to feel about the characters…in most respects. However, even though now Uri knows how Shawn felt and why he was constantly pissed, they haven't actually talked about it or really explained everything – even aside from the rape attempt and the cousin thing. I'm guessing/hoping that you'll address this in later chapters, but still I wanted Uri to be mad since he has every right to be furious at Shawn for what he said, how he treated him and Rane, even for sticking his nose in and talking to Rane behind Uri's back.
I think I'd prefer it if this was sort of an exhale chapter; like all that stress and tension gets breathed out for a little bit, but addressed and actually dealt with next time. They've been so wound up lately and then Uri went and spoilt his relationship with Rane, so just a quiet confession before the real shit hits the fan would be awesome.
I'd always envisioned them getting together through anger/desperation/alcohol and I'm glad that I was wrong, and I think it was a very sweet way for both of them to admit their feelings; not all life is flare and drama. But I do feel that it would have worked better if they'd resolved their issues with proper communication before they started 'being boyfriends'. If that is, you don't come back to those issues later – see earlier part about fans.
This story is my favourite out of all that I'm reading at the moment. My other favourite finished just before Christmas, and I'm desperately hoping that you still have many chapters left in you for this because I really, really do love it.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So happy happy happeeeeey! *dances* *cartwheels* *kisses* I cannot believe it! After all this time FINALLY Uri and Shawn are together *sighs in contentment*.
For a family centered fic this story is practically epic! Now please Goddess of Original Fiction give the happy couple at least a couple chapters worth of reprieve from major angst before you drag them through the inevitable miring sludge that is the issues of incest.
For a family centered fic this story is practically epic! Now please Goddess of Original Fiction give the happy couple at least a couple chapters worth of reprieve from major angst before you drag them through the inevitable miring sludge that is the issues of incest.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The perfect valentine's day gift. You blow my mind. Thank you.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY.
ILU. SO MUCH. Thank you for finally getting rid of my frustration over those two!
You rock. So hard. I hope you get a kazillion Valentines.
ILU. SO MUCH. Thank you for finally getting rid of my frustration over those two!
You rock. So hard. I hope you get a kazillion Valentines.
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February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah. Wooo hooo. Right on!
I so loved this chappie. Brill. What a good way to wake up on thursday morning. I loved the whole confession in a cow field thing, surrounded by crap, which pretty much sums up things that have been happening in their lives at the moment.
And Shawn went to punch Rane! Liked, ut I would love to see what actually happened at that little meeting.
Soz the review is short but I gota go to work now.
Again, loved.
Rie
xx
I so loved this chappie. Brill. What a good way to wake up on thursday morning. I loved the whole confession in a cow field thing, surrounded by crap, which pretty much sums up things that have been happening in their lives at the moment.
And Shawn went to punch Rane! Liked, ut I would love to see what actually happened at that little meeting.
Soz the review is short but I gota go to work now.
Again, loved.
Rie
xx