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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The first review I am leaving, after dedicating my free time of the last three days to this story (I swear I went to school completely homework-less both thursday and friday) BUT I just HAD to comment on the bracelet... "One letter is off" Uh-huh. Let me guess which one that was... ;)
I'm now going to read the rest, and then I might leave another review... Just in case. Hehe.
I'm now going to read the rest, and then I might leave another review... Just in case. Hehe.
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February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh......my......f'in......god!!! That was the best, most incedible, omg, orgasmic thing i have ever imagined!! and you wrote it so passionatley! and it turned out so fantastically happy and FINALLY. but the whole Shawn knowing about Uri saying his name was..i really wasnt expecting it! i'm still in the afterglow of this chapter and i've faintly gone loopy still imagining it in my head. and them finally, finally telling each other "I love you!!" it was perfect..i wish they could stay like that, not having to worry about the obstacles. oh no...im nervous about that...but no i will not dwell on it caz this chapter is too perfect and i am going to read it again as soon as im done with this review! you are awesome and i love you for this chapter and i cant wait for more! and your new story, i cant wait to read more!!!!!
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWW! what a valentines' gift. XD >_> so wait... do their parents know? <3 squee~ more please~
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February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am crying right now because I am so freaking happy.
Seriously, I have been waiting for this for SO long, and now it's finally happened, oh god, I can't stop smiling! *happy excited sigh* I LOVE how you've chosen to show their discovery of each other's love for each other. It was very relaxed and gentle (not like I imagined it AT ALL) but very fitting to two boys who love each other completely and are as comfortable with each other as two people can be. Wonderful! And I love how they didn't just start humping right away, and how they both know their will be obstacles in their relationship (even though I KNOW they aren't blood brothers!). The gentle soft kiss had me feeling like I was giddy all over and when they kissed for the second time, I LOVE how Shawn rolled them over so he could basically hump Uri into oblivion.
I still can't tell if you're going to have Uri be the top or bottom. Because, true, he was bottom with Rane, but Shawn LIKES to bottom and Uri always goes on about how he doesn't like to be the girl, so it's really anybody's game now. LOL. Rane didn't even really give him the option at first. Watch Shawn be all submissive and bossy-bottom. Ha! That's so hot! OMG, I am so thankful you updated this short little chapter of COMPLETE HAPPINESS, because I wasn't even expecting it. I would have gladly waited another whole month.
That being said, please update soon! Lol, but I only beg because I am so incredibly anxious about their first time together and finding out all the remaining pieces of this puzzle that I can hardly contain myself! I can't wait until this story is done, because then, I am going to go back and reread the WHOLE THING! Yay! Thank you!
Seriously, I have been waiting for this for SO long, and now it's finally happened, oh god, I can't stop smiling! *happy excited sigh* I LOVE how you've chosen to show their discovery of each other's love for each other. It was very relaxed and gentle (not like I imagined it AT ALL) but very fitting to two boys who love each other completely and are as comfortable with each other as two people can be. Wonderful! And I love how they didn't just start humping right away, and how they both know their will be obstacles in their relationship (even though I KNOW they aren't blood brothers!). The gentle soft kiss had me feeling like I was giddy all over and when they kissed for the second time, I LOVE how Shawn rolled them over so he could basically hump Uri into oblivion.
I still can't tell if you're going to have Uri be the top or bottom. Because, true, he was bottom with Rane, but Shawn LIKES to bottom and Uri always goes on about how he doesn't like to be the girl, so it's really anybody's game now. LOL. Rane didn't even really give him the option at first. Watch Shawn be all submissive and bossy-bottom. Ha! That's so hot! OMG, I am so thankful you updated this short little chapter of COMPLETE HAPPINESS, because I wasn't even expecting it. I would have gladly waited another whole month.
That being said, please update soon! Lol, but I only beg because I am so incredibly anxious about their first time together and finding out all the remaining pieces of this puzzle that I can hardly contain myself! I can't wait until this story is done, because then, I am going to go back and reread the WHOLE THING! Yay! Thank you!
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello teeta!
Finally! They eventually confessed to each other. And what it took to make them do it. Poor Rane, I never was a big fan of him but I feel sorry for him. Uri was an ass but hmmm... It happens and *shrugs* at least he has gotten laid.
I planned on writing what I liked, what I thought bad and such, but you know, the whole package is great. That there are things I don't like doesn't mean they cannot happen and it's often that these details and incidents fit in the whole story. So, you get a big grin, a thumb up and a "Super!" from me. :-)
So, lets read how much you make them suffer for being in an incestuous relationship, though I think that old note in the old book at the grandparent's is rather suspicious...
Many greetings
Nathaniel
Finally! They eventually confessed to each other. And what it took to make them do it. Poor Rane, I never was a big fan of him but I feel sorry for him. Uri was an ass but hmmm... It happens and *shrugs* at least he has gotten laid.
I planned on writing what I liked, what I thought bad and such, but you know, the whole package is great. That there are things I don't like doesn't mean they cannot happen and it's often that these details and incidents fit in the whole story. So, you get a big grin, a thumb up and a "Super!" from me. :-)
So, lets read how much you make them suffer for being in an incestuous relationship, though I think that old note in the old book at the grandparent's is rather suspicious...
Many greetings
Nathaniel
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this chapter was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gawd you're killing me here :P
Even though it was rushed(?), it was well written :D
The story envelopes o.O And I like it! *silly grin*
Now I'm wondering for how long you're going on writing. Hoping that you'd continue for a lot of chapters of course, but when you finish it, will you kinda write stories about it afterwards? Like an epilogue?
Hell~~
Even though it was rushed(?), it was well written :D
The story envelopes o.O And I like it! *silly grin*
Now I'm wondering for how long you're going on writing. Hoping that you'd continue for a lot of chapters of course, but when you finish it, will you kinda write stories about it afterwards? Like an epilogue?
Hell~~
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February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!
they finally got together.
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they finally got together.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the response^^
I get why you posted this chapter on valentines day. It was so sweet I thought my teeth were going to fall out, lol. You may be evil, but you're a romantic just as well. I would have gone for the brothers gettig it on at home right away, and talk and cuddle later, but the romantic picknick, the talk first and then the fornication in front of an old cow works too it seems. LOL. I loved it. I do like Shawn and he deserves his Uri, no hard feelings there. They're a great couple, and we all knew this was going to happen. I sense this story is coming to an end now they finally have each other. I wonder how they are going to keep their relationship secret from their parents, assuming they will. ("Mom, dad, we have to tell you something... I think it's best you sit down for a minute." Bwahaha! That would be hilareous!)There's still the question you raised early on about the two of them not being related... But no matter what that family secret was, even if they are not blood related at all, there's no way their relationship will be accepted.
There are a few more open questions too, like what will happen to Rane, and what happened with Uri's original friends, especially Dan, there's still some mistery about what happened to him. There are probably even more unresolved question I forgot about, so aside from more Shawn/Uri smut (bring ot on!! ^^) there's still a bit of story left to tell too. As always, I'll be awaiting it patiently.
Yblue.
I get why you posted this chapter on valentines day. It was so sweet I thought my teeth were going to fall out, lol. You may be evil, but you're a romantic just as well. I would have gone for the brothers gettig it on at home right away, and talk and cuddle later, but the romantic picknick, the talk first and then the fornication in front of an old cow works too it seems. LOL. I loved it. I do like Shawn and he deserves his Uri, no hard feelings there. They're a great couple, and we all knew this was going to happen. I sense this story is coming to an end now they finally have each other. I wonder how they are going to keep their relationship secret from their parents, assuming they will. ("Mom, dad, we have to tell you something... I think it's best you sit down for a minute." Bwahaha! That would be hilareous!)There's still the question you raised early on about the two of them not being related... But no matter what that family secret was, even if they are not blood related at all, there's no way their relationship will be accepted.
There are a few more open questions too, like what will happen to Rane, and what happened with Uri's original friends, especially Dan, there's still some mistery about what happened to him. There are probably even more unresolved question I forgot about, so aside from more Shawn/Uri smut (bring ot on!! ^^) there's still a bit of story left to tell too. As always, I'll be awaiting it patiently.
Yblue.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hurm..kinda expected more angst actually!..more drama in both parts..but kinda figure that Shawn will be the one that actually approach Uri as Uri is such a chicken shit coward kinda guy..!!..but i love how you do this chapter..is it supposed to end happy or sad??..cause i know this is incest and all that ..and i really want to know whether you will make a happy ending or it will be mean and evil to prolong the story more??..cause please make it happy!!