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You couldn't resist leaving it at a cliff hanger could you? How evil. Why must the good writers always torment their readers? *sigh* Oh well. I guess I'll just have to wait impatiently for an update. and of course, Yay for the update.

~Canis

*waves* I'm still reading!! OMG they're together.... FINALLY!! How sweet... Love Old Tommy... :)

Um... I'm guessing that the person Uri never expected to see is Max?? This oughta be good.... And stop with the cliffies!! They're killing me!

Another job well done. I love your writing. Can't wait for more.

its either max or rain. Either one is going to be acward. I love this story.

I might have reviewed this chapter already, but I'm not sure... *scratches back of head* Hey hun, how are you? I haven't updated in forever, I think my Demyx muse has gone on extended holiday.. the bastard.

But anyway, thank you for the latest chapter, you made my, day/week/month!!! In fact I'm sure you made a lot of your readers happy! However I'm so sorry for/angry at Rane. I feel so sorry for what Uri did to him, yet telling Shawn... bad Rane *spanks him*... wait can I spank him?? lol. Seriously, your writing.. there were times when I could seriously feel my heart ache with the characters, that's how well you write.

I love you forever for this chapter!
Erin xoxoxox

Also I so get the feeling that the aunt is Shawn or Uri mother... cousin's is better than brothers ne? XD

This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. I've been reading it for the past 2 days almost non-stop. I cant wait for the end, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. As a former soldier, im not usually emotional, but I admit I cried when Shawn and Uri started fighting, I was so glad they got together!

I love this story! I had fallen into it and I couldn't get out untill I read it all:) I haven't read a story this intense in a long time. WoW!! It is so real and touching and warm and heart felt and I love all the first experinences and happy and sad and funny and sexy too:) WoW! I just loved it ^_^

My questions surround the happenings of Shawn's actions from Thursday to present. The scene with Max implies simultaneous fellatio, but when Uri comes out of the bathroom, the mess he made was cleaned up and the other two are nowhere to be found. Did they finish up and Max left, or was Max kicked out after Uri caught them? After returning from Rane's, Shawn appears to be so focused on Uri that the issue of being caught in a compromising position doesn't even surface. Nor does it come up during the confession in the field. Both have been sexually active in the very recent past but that hasn't been addressed before the frottage scene. Now, I read this fic from the beginning, but lost it somewhere over time. Having caught up, I never thought that it would have grown to be this large. The lack of details on Shawn's part here are driving me bananas.

Perfect. ^_^

Okay, now I finally read until chapter 35. Beautiful, that one :)
So... listing the things that are still missing:
1. Talking to Rane. Max doesn't count here.
2. The condom has to be gone from the bathroom, because Shawn is with the one he loves now... =)
3. The *cough* brother-or-not-brother-but-more-like...cousin question. Really, the photo in the drawer and then the diary were a couple too many hints ^^
4. Whatever happened to Dan and Nancy? And where is Nate?
5. The (happy?) ending of Skipping Brunette.