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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 36
Aaahhh ! Who's that !!? Is it Max ?
Another cliffhanger ! >o<
Well, Shawn and Uri have been in *dreamland* for some time then, it's logical that other peoples are going to mess with them...
It's a veeerrryyy good and loooonnggg chapter ! Really thank you !
Aaahhh ! Who's that !!? Is it Max ?
Another cliffhanger ! >o<
Well, Shawn and Uri have been in *dreamland* for some time then, it's logical that other peoples are going to mess with them...
It's a veeerrryyy good and loooonnggg chapter ! Really thank you !
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i don't suppose i need to tell you you're evil? >.< ugh! you and your cliffhangers!
*bites nails in frustration*
i'm guessing kyle, btw. we'll see how wrong i was :P
i really liked this chapter. i'm glad the story didn't end up with "they both found out they love each other and lived happily ever after". cuz whatever you can say about incestous relationships is not 'they're easy'. and uri's internal struggle makes it all the more believable. he's happy, of course, because the person he loves loves him back. but at the same time he's scared and unsure if what they're doing is right - and still unable to stop. i guess the letter/jurnal page/whatever it was that uri found at his granparents' lets us believe that they're not real brothers (cousins?) but still, even if it is true and even if it comes out it's not like it makes things all that much easier. they have the same last name and the same legal guardians, for the world they are brothers... at least they're not brother and sister ^^' that would be a disaster.
i'm glad shawn lets uri go at his own pace. the boy is still new to this and needs time not so much to prepare himself for more physical activities as to get all this situation straightened in his head. because at the moment he's one weirded out bundle of anxiety and confusion. and i wonder... shawn acts so careless at times (the scene in the kitchen!) - does he subconsciously or even consciously want to be caught? O_o
ok, that would be it from me :]
thank you for this chapter, i'll be waiting patiently for more :> (we're so insatiable...)
*bites nails in frustration*
i'm guessing kyle, btw. we'll see how wrong i was :P
i really liked this chapter. i'm glad the story didn't end up with "they both found out they love each other and lived happily ever after". cuz whatever you can say about incestous relationships is not 'they're easy'. and uri's internal struggle makes it all the more believable. he's happy, of course, because the person he loves loves him back. but at the same time he's scared and unsure if what they're doing is right - and still unable to stop. i guess the letter/jurnal page/whatever it was that uri found at his granparents' lets us believe that they're not real brothers (cousins?) but still, even if it is true and even if it comes out it's not like it makes things all that much easier. they have the same last name and the same legal guardians, for the world they are brothers... at least they're not brother and sister ^^' that would be a disaster.
i'm glad shawn lets uri go at his own pace. the boy is still new to this and needs time not so much to prepare himself for more physical activities as to get all this situation straightened in his head. because at the moment he's one weirded out bundle of anxiety and confusion. and i wonder... shawn acts so careless at times (the scene in the kitchen!) - does he subconsciously or even consciously want to be caught? O_o
ok, that would be it from me :]
thank you for this chapter, i'll be waiting patiently for more :> (we're so insatiable...)
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*gasps* cliffhanger!!! I'm sure it's tomato head... poor, poor little uke...bwhahaha >3
Anyway, it's difficult to stay mad at you for not updating sooner when you write such awesome chapters *sighs* I love your writing! *is thankful for the update*
Anyway, it's difficult to stay mad at you for not updating sooner when you write such awesome chapters *sighs* I love your writing! *is thankful for the update*
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Great update!
I can see how you might get a bit of writer's block. You spent so much of your time leading up to a moment and then you created that moment (really well I might add) and then it's kind of strange to write what happens after that, even if you have an idea what you want.
Even so i hope you update soon before I curious about where you'll take this.
Keep up the great work.
I can see how you might get a bit of writer's block. You spent so much of your time leading up to a moment and then you created that moment (really well I might add) and then it's kind of strange to write what happens after that, even if you have an idea what you want.
Even so i hope you update soon before I curious about where you'll take this.
Keep up the great work.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You have NO IDEA how happy I was seeing an update on my current favorite story. I honestly spent a minute just being happy before I clicked on the link. Aaaand: I was not disappointed. Actually, the thing that un-disappointed me the most was the fact that it wasn't the last chapter =p
Great job!
Great job!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
....I'm sorry but I keep reading "Wan-tan-hor" as "Wanton whore" in my head and it's cracking me up.
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's rane, isn't it?
ASOTA
ASOTA
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's weird. I was browsing the reviews and it seems that last time, aff didn't send through my review. Oh well. I think I have it somewhere, so here's what I said....
"Chapter 35 - Noooo. I misss Ranneeee. Come back to me, Rane! Ahaha. But it's okay. I'm really happy Uri and Shawn finally admitted their love for eachother and got together. It took them 34 chapters but ATLEAST they finally got there. And that was cute to have it on VALENTINE'S DAY. OhmyGod. Too cute. But, now I'm curious, where does it go from here? It seems like there's probably only a couple chapters left, two at most I imagine. Oh well. I've been reading this story for like what...a year? Two years? Wow. I'm going to severely miss it when it's gone.
I never thought I'd see the end, actually.
This is kinda depressing. Haha.
Anyway, Happy Valentine's Day!
P.S. Oh, and whatever happened to Max? I'm sure you'll clear all that up next chapter, I guess. And patch things up between Uri and Rane (I hope)."
Anyways, on to read chapter 36!
"Chapter 35 - Noooo. I misss Ranneeee. Come back to me, Rane! Ahaha. But it's okay. I'm really happy Uri and Shawn finally admitted their love for eachother and got together. It took them 34 chapters but ATLEAST they finally got there. And that was cute to have it on VALENTINE'S DAY. OhmyGod. Too cute. But, now I'm curious, where does it go from here? It seems like there's probably only a couple chapters left, two at most I imagine. Oh well. I've been reading this story for like what...a year? Two years? Wow. I'm going to severely miss it when it's gone.
I never thought I'd see the end, actually.
This is kinda depressing. Haha.
Anyway, Happy Valentine's Day!
P.S. Oh, and whatever happened to Max? I'm sure you'll clear all that up next chapter, I guess. And patch things up between Uri and Rane (I hope)."
Anyways, on to read chapter 36!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love this story!! but what an evil cliffy!! can't wait for the next update!
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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 36 - Raaaaneeee. I'm so sorry! I'll apologize for poor Uri. Oh, poor, poor Rane.