rate_review Reviews

I'll attempt to stamp down on the urge to scream 'UPDATE GODDAMNIT!' and instead appreciatively express my pleasure at reading 'Not Supposed to' by.. well, continuing to read it obsessively. Actually, I'm scared I'll soon end up Reading It To Death - have you ever felt that? When you have a favourite book and read it so much that you're worried you'll get fed up with it? Well, anyhow. I hope this isn't a dead story. I do love it very much. Thank you for it - and please don't abandon it completely for Riha, although I love him/her too.

wow, wow, wow...

i've been reading this for a while now, but never had the chance to review.

so let me just say: i think this is a great story. it's hot, it's steamy, it's intense, and complex.
i really like how you've built up the characters, and whatnot. top-notch ;)

and FINALLY! Uri and Shawn.
for i moment, i thought you weren't EVER going to put them together!
but you did, and i'm so pleased!!

can't wait for the next chapter. you really left me hangin'!
could it be Rane?

also, the character Rane reminds me a lot of Axel from Kingdom Hearts 2!
(definite favorite).

well, enough of my babble. best of luck!

Oh this story is sooo loverly. I have only just finished reading it and cant wait for the last few chapters. Aah sooo shweet. My tummy was all in knots while the boys were fighting though. Will we find out what Max said to Shawn to make him so pissed at Uri. Also what happened to Dan? He just disappeared after the party. Nate too?
Please try to keep you muse tied to the computer or something. I know how undependable those little buggers can be. Disappearing at the most inopportune times(like right near the end of an awesome story?? Hope not) Well even though there are only so many chapters left I wanna be put on the mailing list K?

noonienoodles@yahoo.com.au

I know I have just reviewed but heh. Maybe the person who taps Uri on the shoulder is Rane and hes on a date with Dan who has been sooo confused about his sexuality since the party??? I just hope Rane ends up happy. Or it could be Kyle. Buh buh buhuhuhuh. Nellie

I've had a very trying weekend, and to get home and see that you had updated (both Not Supposed To and Mating Markers) just lifted my mood several hundred notches. So thank you, thank you teeta, you're the best! :D

This chapter was so hot and sweet at the same time. They're so good together :D It all seemes so realistic, them having to hide, and there are obstacles too. I wonder if their parents will find out :O
Wah! Evil cliffie. Maybe this person is Rane, but when I think about it now, I suspect it could maybe be Max ...? hmm, I guess I'll find out next chapter. Can't wait!

I've just found your story, and became instantly hooked! The drama through out the whole story is just so intense, I couldn't stop reading it once I started. And while I've been reading your story I've been listening through the new The Bravery cd, and every time I hear one of the songs called Bad Sun, I think of how Uri's and Shawn's relationship is right now. You'd have to listen to it, but its about two people that are right together, but don't fit in anywhere else in the world. *shrugs* but maybe its just me. Either way, I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great story!

(Squeals) Thank you so so much!!! I actually didn't know about the chapter 35 update till I looked at chapter 36 and realized there was something missing. So I read them both and now I'm "bored" lol. I loved both of them now I can't get enough. I wish this story would never end. It's too good. I wonder who poked Uri's shoulder. Was it Rane? Or one of Uri's old friends that haven't appeared for a while? Either way, I hope Uri patches up his problems, the little angel deserves happiness. Though with Shawn's kisses who wouldn't be? ~___^ Anyway, keep writing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Funny, just yesterday i was thinking to myself that it'd been a while since you'd updated. Glad you did. It was a very, very nice end to a long day.

Oh I loved this chapter! It was even better than the last one! Uri is so cute when he's nervous and in love, hih... They're both so cute together! I'm in danger of repeating the word cute here for...well... too many times :P

My compliments to the way of your writing, it felt realistic; them having to hide and at the same time feeling so happy when finally having each other, being scared of the future and of their parents finding out. Yes, I doubt they could take it lighty.

And I wonder who the person was at the end?? Uh, you and your evil cliffys :P Anyway, I'll patiently wait for more ^_^

-kolgrim-

It's wonderful to see them together. And what I really like about the story is that you don't rush things. I think most authors would be inclined to get them together after 10 or so of lengthy chapters. I'm glad you didn't. You provide a peek into their lives and don't force things on your characters, making it seem a natural consequence of their actions (which in a situation like incest is quite hard).
It took me quite a while to read this in one go but I'm glad I did.
Till next time