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Wouaaa ! So happy for this chapter ! Thank you !
I love the way Uri and Shawn are together !

... *breaths in and out, trying to stay calm*
you... you... EVIL!
>.<
talk about a cliffhanger! ugh!

i guess it's like a person that's trying to break away from an addiction feels. like someone that is trying to quit smoking over and over again (at least that's what i imagine it's like, i myself don't smoke). you burn your last smoke, suffer for a period of time craving another and when you suddenly think you managed to quit you go to a party and someone convinces you to have one... and the whole process starts anew. just like with your story >.< (except for the lack of health hazard). you read a chapter and you instantly crave another, think of what happens next every moment you can and practically twitch out of impatience to get your hands on the next installment. after a while the hunger becomes managable and when you think you have the NST fever under control YOU give us another chapter... and the whole proces repeats itself! so yeah, i'm all in NST-induced frenzy now ^^'

but about the chapter.
HA! i was right! it was max :> i know it was my second try but still, am i good or what? :P
though max was kinda an asshole. i know where he comes from, hung over shawn, heart-broken and probably genunely concerned for his friend, but the way he brought the message across was bratty and petty.
on the other hand though shawn amazes me a bit, this time not really in the "wow he's so cool and brave" way but more in the "wow, he's really reckless and irresponsible" one. i dunno how much of what max said to uri about the statutory rape - is true (i just spent a better part of an hour trying to find an info more detailed than what can be found on wikipedia - that whether or not a couple of siblings over the age of consent will be prosecuted depends on the state law) but even if they live in one of the less strict state the social repercussions itself can be severe.

>insert here a day long pause in writing this comment<

sorry, couldn't finish it yesterday, am back today :]
so, where was i...?
ah, ok, shawn is being careless. i'd say he needs to fix this attitude of his a bit, but it's too late ^^' the super-mom (seriously, does she have some 6th sense when it comes to her kids or what?) figured it out. well, it had to happen sooner or later. i have a theory here and for it to be true the 'rents have to know about the whole affair (ha! a pun!). so as you can imagibe i'm quite impatient to read the next chapter ^^'

ok, the serious stuff if dealt with, now for the lighter parts.
i loved the leeches XD i mean i would personally freak out if i found something like that sucked to my body but shawn's reaction was precious ^^ it's actually really endearing, seeing him lose his cool (sometimes his smugness gets a bit annoying ^^'). and uri bitten by the mosquitoes... at first i thought he got smallpox ^^' well, when i got it at first i thought i was bitten by mosquitoes so it was like an unvoluntary flashback :P

i wonder what actually uri did that defied your carefully constructed plan? :P

btw, the little note saying that it was written speedily just for me made me grin madly :D thank you ^^=
*hugs and kisses*

*goes to wait for the next chapter*

It's really updated ^___^ Thanks Teeta, it was definitely worth the wait! I'm sorry to hear about your mom, hope it's better now and you are well *hugs*

Poor Uri~ Max should mind his own business, he's making it harder on Uri. Yet, at the same time he's also telling the truth. And I'm glad Shawn wasn't emotionally involved with him >_<

Read it yesterday, but I was too tired(went to sleep when the sun rose up) so here's my review :)

This is one of the best chapters I think, and you know, it sort of reminds me of the first ones which i really liked, good job on it! The association with the picture on your site(Yup, I did notice it) was really nice too. And definitely not complaining on Shawn bathing starkers too. Though I feel a bit sorry for him, with the stubborn leech and the lobster sunburn, hehe. Have had a really bad sunburn once, so I feel with him X) and we see a new side of Shawn every in every chapter, so he has a great character depth, as does Uri!

Hah! So my suspicion abou than was right then X) Personally i think he has a think for Uri (if my tire-cutting theory is right. Why would he cut ranes tires if he liked him?) Looking forward to see what's going to happen with that situation*nods*

And the last part.....O.O I froze in my seat when I read it. She KNOWS...what is Uri going to do now? tell Shawn about it? and what then?

Your cliffies are evil teeta!! But that's part of the fun XD

Anyways, congrats on a great chapter, and I'm patiently waiting for the next update ^__^

btw: I'm planning on naming my future kitty Uri :3

~Taso

Yay! You updated! Haha, you wouldn't believe how many times I checked your website and read your chat box to see when you were updating! In fact when I saw you were updating I checked AFF and your website like every hour, haha! I loved the chapter! It was so cute and *hugs* and the leech cracked me up! That actually happened to my brother and his friends! They went skinny dipping in a lake during camp and they all got leeches on their lower body parts. It was pretty hilarious/gross. I can't wait for Uri, or someone to tell Shawn about the almost-rape. *In the mood for killer-protective Shawn*
Max is such a bastard. (*uses bazooka to blow his brains out*) Poor Uri! He's such a cutie-pie! I like the Mom, but she was kind of annoying in this chapter! She interrupted all the goooood parts *pouts* Haha. Still, I think that either Uri or Shawn is adopted, or are cousins or something like that.....Or at least I hope so....It's so sad....Not even able to hold hands, or hug much. *sniffles* *Sighs* I LOVE NOT SUPPOSED TO! I *glomps* it. Anyways, until your next installment, which I hope isn't another three months XD
Jades

btw do you take fan art for your characters?

holy goddess of yaoi, i LOVE this story!!! i was waiting for this update since... such a long time ago! XD can't wait for you to continue!!!

uh oh.................................... their parents know............... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!
ASOTA

OMG!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!
WOOT THIS IS AMAZING!!
i literally squeeled when i saw this was updated! i was so happy!!
and such a good chapter too!!! ...though its a shame we didnt get more details*wink wink*... *cough*
anyway, loved it. and omg! their mum knows, wow, thats, wow. man i cant wait for more!
lol, such a ground breaking review... lol, your story just makes my mind buzz, cant think straight after i read it :P
please update soon and im glad your mums better.

i relly like this storie and cant wait to see more of.

I 'found' this story about 6 days ago, and have been reading it almost non-stop ever since. You have described all of the emotions that Uri goes through so well, that I've been feeling the way he has as I went along with the story.

I loved the way you've dropped hints of Shawn liking Uri as well all over the place. i've just been waiting for him and Uri to come clean to each other, and now that they have, I'm so happy!

I've been thinking about who uri meets in front of the theater, and at first I was sure it would be Rane. But then again, why would he think 'says someone I’d never expect to see again.', when he knows he's gonna see Rane in school eventually? So then it also might be Kyle, but what would they have something do discuss about? So maybe it is Max? He'd have a reason to talk to Uri; He 'stole' his boyfriend after all! But then again it ould be rather interesting to see how Uri survives from a meeting with Kyle...

But anyways, I've really been enjoying this saga, staying up sometimes until 4 am reading it. I hope I'll see an update soon! :D



ps. English isn't my native language, so sorry for all the spelling and grammatical erros there might be in my comment :3

Oh my gosh, I love this story! Post another chapter as soon as you can! xD