rate_review Reviews

OMG! This story is great! But poor Rane should end up happy cause he's been though alot of stuff. Oh and I can't stand Max, he's an ass. Can't wait for the next chapter!

dude
Im so glad I found this story
I read it SO LONG AGO and almost forgot about it
which would have been a shame
cause its an awesome story ;)

please update!! i want to read more. it is very interesting.

Don't do this. I hate you. Do you know how happy you made me, thinking there was an update? But NO, it's just edited. God, I'm so disappointed. Ruined my day.
=(



(don't take this too seriously, though ^^)

Please update soon???
Pretty please??
T_T

Please continue the story!!! It is so well done, a bit longer then I thought, but it is so worth it. The characters are well developed and not just jumping eachother right away. I really enjoyed it! Please update soon!

chapter 37...I was going like "oh...oooooh...hohooo..". There are no words that can really describe how awesome I think this story is.
I started reading it when you'd only posted like...11 chapters or something. And while I was waiting for an update, I kind of forgot about the whole thing.
But I read the whole thing today.
Very glad I did. Because I love this fic.

This is all very exciting.

New reader!!
You are brilliant, and I am starving!
Since starting this story at like 4 in the morning, i haven't eaten anything all day!
Please I need more!!!!!!
Now...who does Dan have a crush on!?
even though its for the better if its Rane, I'm going to feel strangely jealous on Urie's part! >_<
is that weird!?

wahhhhh please continue i know i ruined the story for me cause i read a head but i want to know what happens to uri and shawn do there parents actully find out that there moms guess is right? please please please update >_<

Wow! What an amazing ride this has been! I was addicted to this story for this whole week; I basically wake up and read this thing until 2 in the morning, repeat. Fantastic job! It's been a while since I've read something this good!

You know, when I was browsing for stories, when I first saw this, I thought, "ew, incest." But after I couldn't find anything else, I came back to this story, noticed the high ratings, so what the hey. Turns out this story was amazing!

In fact, thanks to this story I'm a lot more tolerant towards incest. Despite it being a taboo (I do find taboo things to be extremely hot, like homosexuality), I never could appreciate incestuous relationships. But after seeing poor Uri suffering with that knowledge, that incest is deemed wrong by our society, it makes me wonder, why? Heh, it's kind of hard to explain (and type, it's currently 2 a.m.), but I can sympathize with Uri throughout his growth in your story. Poor baby. It's just that seeing all the suffering Uri has gone though...yeah. Hope I got the message through clearly...

Maybe it's because I can really connect to the brothers, since I have a younger brother (though I personally connect more with Uri, as he's the responsible brother). Though we definitely don't have an incestuous relationship, I do love him. Since he's in Boston right now, I miss him too. Reading this story makes me realize the importance of brotherly love. In fact, when he gets back I'm going to shower him in love...

As far as corrections/critics go, I did see a handful of typos; not a lot, but here and there that really caused a distraction. I'm sorry that I can't be specific and tell you all of them that I caught, but I do remember you typed "od" instead of "of." It was in a scene between Shawn and Uri, in the last couple chapters.

Anyways, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed your story and I hope to see the completion of it. Keep up the lovely work!